Gourmet Little Restaurant

Is the protagonist young and rich, or handsome? Does every woman like him? How can ordinary people in reality have so many dramas? Don't ask for an emotional drama, it's awkward to watch.

When it comes to food novels, just write about food well. If you have nothing to do, you have to develop an emotional line. If the writing is not good, just stick to the same old routine, secret love, and school beauty. The author can't write enough, and we are tired of reading it.

I think this book is quite good, unlike some reviews that say it has no merit. Of course, there are also many bad things, such as the pretentiousness of the protagonist and some bugs, but they are still acceptable to me! I will continue to pursue it!

I suggest you write more chapters and stories about food. Halfway through the book, it inexplicably changed from a food article to a small urban love triangle theater. I almost couldn't make it through. The author's description of emotions is too blunt. If this kind of content is well written, it can draw readers into it, but if it is not well written, the overall score will be improved. It is recommended to refer to life-style games and food starting from making noodles. Recently, system food articles are very eye-catching. I hope the author will write them carefully ✊

What can I say? The author's writing of emotional scenes is too awkward. Halfway through the book, he suddenly switched from a food article to an urban romance article, as if he was eating a dish and found a cockroach in the dish. I basically skipped all the emotional scenes. If the author can't grasp the emotional scenes, I suggest not to add emotional scenes. It's really awkward.

Who will be the heroine? Meng Wanqiu or the heroine didn't show up? After all, I have already seen the bloody plot after writing this plot. Her mother was running out of time and wanted to see if she could have a grandchild or something. Then Meng found out and had no choice but to agree. Such a bloody plot, right?

To be honest, I felt quite embarrassed when I read this book, especially when I compared it with Ren Xiao'e with the letter of recommendation. In fact, most of the time I read this book just to see the food, but this book has a lot more descriptions of people's hearts and various plots about the older generation. I would like to give some advice to the author. I hope these descriptions can be kept as small as possible. Thank you.

I quite liked it at first, but since the so-called school beauty came out... I told myself at the beginning that we were not from the same world... But within three chapters, all kinds of entanglements came out... I couldn't stand it anymore... It's such an awkward emotional drama... Goodbye...

Are all books nowadays toxic? Other writings, nothing to do but something to eat. This person who writes snack articles will ramble on when he has something to do. He will write one chapter of the main text and five chapters of nonsense. The text is not clear yet. Author, are you a member of the biological and chemical weapons industry?

，，，， It has to be a love triangle, and the male protagonist is a double-edged dog. This is the second book in so many years that made me feel sick after just twenty or thirty chapters. The hero's brother cheated on her, but he still forced himself to love her. Hey, he had a fight and then went to a nightclub for a day. It was really just me who cheated on her, but I'm a good boy.                                                                                        but the main characters of the girls in this book all have no big problems (except for their attitude towards the two men), but neither the male protagonist nor his brothers are normal. I read the first few pictures after the settings were a bit similar to Yuan Gui. I was really disgusted by the result. (I am male)

Why are there so many emotional scenes in food articles that are so embarrassing...

The author's writing is a bit exaggerated, and I personally don't like it.

It's so stupid. I can't bear it in urban love. I participated in a competition. The first time I made you endure it, but the second time I knelt down and begged you not to participate in the competition, you still tolerated it? You haven't forgotten why you participated in the competition, right? It's so rubbish, I have to quit! ! !

Meng Wanqiu understands the protagonist author very well, but he just makes a misunderstanding. There are too few phone calls, so he doesn't care about him? What qualifications does he have? ?

The author may not really know much about the lives of wealthy people. . . . The story after chapter 300 is about pig's feet coming into contact with those rich people in a province. It feels like one can become a rich man in a province with a net worth of 1 million. .

Say something! There are too many disturbing things written in this book, and the subplots in the book seem too frustrating, and the ending of the subplots has not been released well. I have read 400+ chapters, and I am so overwhelmed with emotion that I can no longer stand it 🙄

Some people are not good at writing emotional lines. Hey, he insists on pretending and writing, but he has no point in his heart and no points on it?

The emotional drama is really poisonous. It was okay at first, but what happened later? The protagonist is really hypocritical. The author also said that he was hypocritical and he still wrote it like that. I didn't understand it.

The writing is quite good, but I couldn't bear to read this emotional drama for more than 100 chapters, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

The protagonist is a very awkward person, maybe the author has created it this way, but eight out of ten readers will not like a very awkward person.

It's really disgusting. It still has a soul. It makes me laugh to death. The so-called emotions are people's past experiences, not brought about by food. You can just mention it occasionally. It's really disgusting to keep treating it like a treasure.

If the protagonist is not good at cooking, he should hone his cooking skills. What's wrong with those women? It's like cheating. They just want to have a career. They are all like bullshit plasters. The monitor's mother is also outrageous. She wants to match up with a man when she sees him. It's not like that if she hates marrying.

I don't know why you insist on writing the sweet and sour series. The stir-fried dishes in front are all sweet and sour. Don't say I sprayed you. Let me tell you why. I'll read the novel again. I personally hate sweet and sour cuisine. Sweet or not, sour or not. Just like men are not men and women are not. Then there is the need for oil but no oil, and the need for salt but no salt. The soup is like ketchup. The taste is similar. Personally, I think sweet and sour insults ketchup. Seriously. I have also eaten sweet and sour. I don't know how they eat. Anyway, after taking two bites, sweet and sour? I refused. Even if it is sour or sweet, it can be accepted separately. They insist on being mixed together. I think white steamed buns are better than that. It really tastes disgusting. I really can't stand it.

The writing is pretty good. Please don't be so specific, okay?

It feels like making several thousand a month is really very little. Boiling cabbage costs 20, while boiling cabbage costs 18. It's hard for a magazine shoot with RMB 100,000, but what about a shoot with RMB 100,000? Was it last century? Money is so valuable.

Chefs rely too much on talent, and the recipes may not be delicious.

I can still read it if I write a good food article, but the system is no longer powerful. The result is that a woman wants to be in heat before it goes well. If you meet a woman in life, she will be like a fly on you. Either way, you will not respond.

Hey, if you're not good at cooking, you're not good at relationships. I thought it was unique to write down warm memories and then cook, but it was actually very hollow. I thought writing about multiple girls surrounding the male protagonist would highlight the charm, but I was actually trying to trick my wits. I thought I had avoided the system cheating and brainless cool article at the beginning, but in fact I wasn't more down-to-earth.

The author's writing style belongs to the same old style of Internet writing. I won't go into details about radish and cabbage, but there are many problems. If the author wants to write about a group portrait, he has to bother to describe it honestly. This hammer and hammer thing is really confusing. The two traditional apprentice chefs who were defeated by the protagonist at the beginning suddenly have to give them a call back, but it is completely unclear that they have any relationship with the main plot development. The same goes for the four girls buying milk tea. There is a dangerous person following you. What was the purpose of the whole fight? The same goes for the girl who pursued her at the beginning but chose to leave. What was the purpose of writing it? Even if you want to show that the main character is obsessed with learning to cook, then why do you give her so many pursuit plots? Just click to chase a few times and find that you are being ignored and then leave quietly. But then you still have to call back to watch the video. What are you trying to do? The absolute theme of this book is cooking. What effect do the women who have been constantly impressed by it have on the theme? Even the possible heroine whose mother is sick is redundant. A chef who is obsessed with cooking does not focus on the customers all day long, but thinks about something that is not available all day long, which is inexplicable.

It feels like a replica of the food supply