Backed by a Plague World

The writing of Holy Grail is too out-of-the-box. Monster Hunter is well-written, but the Black Ball part is not good either. There are many plots that are not clear. For example, it is not clear whether the parents of the protagonist are alive, and there is no clear explanation of servants. I suspect that you have forgotten this plot as you write it. I don't like the substitute identity of time-traveling. The rest is okay, between 3 and 6 points. You can still check it out. Keep up the good work! The writing style still needs to be improved, and the plot should not be too out of the ordinary. Explain it clearly and don't go over it in one stroke. It looks a bit confusing.

After reading it later, I found that the plot was a bit awkward, but the writing was good.

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A complete book only has fourteen discussion posts?

A stroke of water, a masterpiece at the beginning, followed by water words like the sea.

In terms of promoting the plot, the character description is not smooth and there is no sense of substitution. How can I put it? It is quite boring sometimes.

Author, I suggest you re-open a book or revise the previous one. After all, your previous writing was not good, and now no matter how good the later part is, most people will not read it. Moreover, your book is coherent, and you cannot read it without a part.

How would you describe the protagonist's behavior in the fourth battle, jumping left and right? Going around in circles repeatedly for a goal seems a bit wise. Finally, I wish the author success.

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

Just change this book to my FA world. Does anyone remember that this guy comes from the game world of Dark Fantasy Survival?

A lot of Qidian's light novels are dead. Alas, come on, author.

The author is optimistic about you. Once you have written it, you will vote for recommendation.

Just the title of the book caught my eye. . . Sharp

I can't stand it. The author's writing style is so bad. He also wrote the battle scenes very quickly. He wrote them without even imagining the scene. In the early stage, the combat power also flew up. It's really difficult to imagine the scene! It's really hard to see the mid-term! It's rare to find some monster hunters and Gudazi, it's a pity (I'll give you a monthly ticket and a recommendation ticket and leave), I look forward to your next work, you can use this one as a practice!