A Wonderful Pokemon Journey

In the first picture at the beginning, the image of an orphan boy with a strong character and a strong sense of love and justice was well created. The setting of being an orphan in two lives laid a good foundation for the protagonist's character. However, since joining the Rockets, the character's character has begun to become strange. Let's ask about a past life. People who are struggling to survive in a cruel society are very mature even if they live again, so your self-complaints are very dramatic and really inconsistent with the character. The inconsistent character makes people feel that it is impossible to read. I persisted until chapter 17 and I couldn't hold on anymore. . . . .

The author's writing is pretty good, but it's a bit rough in some places. First of all, there is the issue of qualifications and brilliance. I feel that four-star qualifications are bad qualifications. There are too many gleams and they are not rare at all. The battle writing is very rough, and it barely shows any level of skill. It's like rolling your face on the keyboard. Anyway, there are too many skills to use up (I feel sorry for you for a second). Some details are rough, such as feeding armored pupae that cannot eat, insect-type skills have twice the effect of normal types, etc. I hope the author can be more careful in writing this book. Come on, author!

The author wished that all the elves could tame one... He kept emphasizing that he had no money and was poor, but in the end... He slapped himself in the face... Without money and power, where would you find the energy to cultivate so many elves...

After reading dozens of chapters, the elf qualifications and the glittering streets are really poisonous points. . . There is no difference at all, anyway, the average per capita is four stars. Then according to the opening, I thought the author was writing a dark novel or a realistic novel, but the further I read, the more strange it became. A civilian who joined the Rockets ended up crazy about participating in various official website competitions and playing gyms. The plot of the Rockets was not as good as the plot of the gym. Are you an alliance trainer or a normal person? Civilian trainers, if you write a realistic version, civilian trainers will definitely not be qualified to go to the gym to participate in the competition in the early stage, otherwise the gym will be busy. If you write a nostalgic anime version of the pm article, then don't start in a dark way. To be honest, it is a bit different, and it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. . .

They were all bullied like that. As long as they have a temper, they should at least take revenge. They have never killed anyone from beginning to end. Is this Team Rocket? Whatever others say is what it is, and I have no opinion at all. Too cowardly, I persuaded you to quit, I

I don't discuss the protagonist's IQ, I don't discuss the random skills, and I can tolerate the issue of qualifications, but I am here to read a book. If you meet Yukira and you don't accept it, I don't understand. You can make your own energy cubes, but are you afraid you can't afford it? Don't mention any other reasons. If you write a book, you can add adventures and other things so that you can afford it, so why not accept it? When you encounter them, the elves under you are all rotten sweet potatoes and stinky bird eggs, and you don't accept them. This is really unbearable.

I haven't finished reading it and only read a few chapters after it was released, but that Lulili is so damn disgusting and disobedient and runs around. Even if the author is doing it for the chance of that Lulili, he can't indulge his elves too much, right? And are four-star elves really that common? Can't you just write dark stories seriously after taking all the bad elves and joining Team Rocket? Whose Rockets team allows you to wander around casually after collecting the elves? Just go out and wander around, are you still going to follow Xiaozhi's path? He's obviously from Team Rocket and yet he writes so brightly? If you want to find a long-term club from the beginning, write Alliance or Bounty Hunter. Have you ever seen a Rockets team that is so laid-back? Don't even have any tasks? Want to run away after taking the elf? Don't have to do anything? 🙂🙂🙂

I think this book is pretty good, why doesn't anyone read it?

A time-traveling businessman with such an IQ must have committed suicide because he had no money. Your method of time-traveling is wrong.

I just don't understand the purpose of conquering so many elves. There is no so-called primary and secondary elves. It would be better if the number of elves can be controlled within 12 at the beginning. Later, I personally feel that too many elves can easily become poisonous.