Crime and Sword

I don't know how to evaluate it. I feel that the protagonist is very childish, but the book also says that he is burdened with some sins. His actions in the first few chapters when exploring Yayu Pavilion feel like he is a fledgling. I feel very uncomfortable. The setting of the protagonist is also very inconsistent, and he keeps going off track 🤝

The following opinions are purely personal, please point out if there are any errors After reading Chapter 852, I found that the language description format in the first half of your article is too monotonous, almost all actions/expression + how to say: "xxxxx" There is too little interaction with external objects during the entire conversation, almost none. In fact, it can be written like this, for example, xxx smiled, rubbed the purple sand cup, took a sip, and suddenly frowned, "I'm not happy." At the same time, too long a verbal communication can easily make people tired. Writing such a long text requires superb writing skills, so I don't recommend too long a verbal description. Also, the character's behavior is a bit childish. In such a world, the protagonist's mind should be polished, which means that the protagonist's character needs to be reshaped as the storyline develops, and his character should be continuously improved until he matures.

Just for your word count, come on, author, you are so perseverant. I would like to ask if you have published it on other websites? Maybe the starting point is not popular, but other websites are not necessarily popular. In short, the author is awesome, and the two million words really blinded me 😰.

Come here because of its reputation, it's really awesome.

From now on, I will push it every day. Cheers, author↖(^ω^)↗

Come on, author ^0^~, don't give up, it's all valuable experience

I came here because of the reputation, and in one word, "What the hell!" The writing style needs to be improved! It is recommended to add more knowledge! You have to learn while coding!

Come on, author, more and more people are reading your books now 😁

Update every day, I will follow your example from now on.

The author is very strong, and at least his perseverance is comparable to others. Come on!

I have recommended it to the author in Diandianquan😁

The perseverance is commendable. I didn't sign for one million before, but I signed it when I moved to another place.

I don't know what to say. Just leave your name.

No matter how low the number of words is, it's time to sign a contract.

A lot of nonsense: the detailed description is not well grasped. The writing style needs to be improved: the description of characters and scenes is slightly lacking. The author's spirit is commendable: he has persisted for so long without signing a contract, and there are no unfinished works or eunuchs, which is very good. I hope the author will work hard and persevere. ❤️❤️❤️

Come on Rolls, gold will always shine. Although it is not very popular now, don't give up. I can make this book seen by more readers. Wowei: yaayaa335

This book is free of charge. Can it make money?

It's amazing. You generate electricity for love. You persist so much without making money. You have enough perseverance. I have read a lot of books. I would like to give you a suggestion. When writing a new book, the author should remember that the protagonist will grow and mature. If the protagonist becomes a god later, remember that the protagonist's mentality will also change accordingly.

You are a talent and you have shattered my million-dollar dream of becoming a god!