Prince of Golden Balls

Nowadays, there are very few authors writing football articles. It is very good to write an unsystematic football article. I give the author a thumbs up 👍👍. I have read half of it now, and I feel that there are still some minor problems. I have some suggestions that I hope can give the author some help, which should make the book even better. 1. Is the setting of the protagonist a reference to Wang Chu? It feels too similar to the greenery. If compared with the master, the beginning seems too white, and the time-travel routine of the bull head and horse face more than ten years ago makes the reading experience too embarrassing 😁😁 2. There are too many introductions to the protagonist's family background. Except for the role of the protagonist San Bo joining PSG, the rest of it feels completely meaningless to write. 3. There are too many descriptions about the appearance of the protagonist, and female fans often like the protagonist. It's acceptable once in a while, but for a new player like the protagonist who has appeared several times, just being good-looking has no meaning. Beckham didn't become a superstar just by being handsome, and Ronaldinho didn't become a heartthrob just by looking good. Wang Chu is so handsome, can he be one-tenth as famous as Zheng Zhi? 4. In the Serie A and French Ligue 1 written by the author, no matter what nationality the players are, the description feels like they are all Chinese A players, or the local ones 😅, and the psychological activities are also deliberately ***, which is embarrassing. The above is my feeling after reading half of the book. I hope it can help the author. It's not easy to write a book, it's not easy for readers, and it's even harder for fans. I hope everyone can persevere.

I just hope that I won't join the national football team in the future. The national football team is a pit. Although every national team has some messed up things, it's just that although others are messy, they have strength, but the national football team will be messy if they don't have the ability. But there is no chance even if you think about it. The protagonist has already entered the Italian youth team. In a few years, as long as the head coach is not blind, he will also enter the Italian national team.

Finally I came across an unsystematic one. I'm really tired of reading system articles. I would like to make a suggestion: this training should be scientific. The longer it is, the better. It is the 21st century, and we should not stay in the last century.

It looks okay, I hope there will be no content about joining the national football team in the future

To be honest, I feel that the national team after naturalization can no longer be regarded as the national team. I am very confused, but I am very clear in my heart that I don't want to watch the national team play after naturalization. Even if we win the championship, even if we enter the World Cup, is it really our own ability? Can you really feel the glory?

Italy is famous for being xenophobic and particularly discriminatory against Chinese people.

There are so many people who hate the national football team. Alas, it is sad. In fact, I also hate their lack of effort and lack of effort, and the short-term management of the leadership who only cares about results. However, the national football team is no matter how good it is and how rubbish it is. They are still the national football team, and they are still the national football team that represents China. Understand.

The process from Vicenza to Paris Saint-Germain is not clearly written. Is it loan from Juto to Vicenza, and then from Vicenza to Paris Saint-Germain? Or will he go to Paris after his contract with Juto expires and he becomes free? How do you feel that the person who joined his third uncle will come back, and then he talked about the equity of Paris Saint-Germain, and pig feet went to Paris Saint-Germain.

Don't join the national football team, it's a sinkhole

As a Juventus fan, I still have a lot of affection for this protagonist... Write well, come on!

I read the beginning and thought that the protagonist would be naturalized and play in the national football team because Chinese people can choose to naturalize directly when they are 18 years old. But suddenly he joined the Italian U19? ? ? Farewell farewell

The character template should be Wang Yi from Juventus. Come on and write well and you will succeed.

Not joining the national football team is a major prerequisite. Also, is the author planning to create a Miracle at the Parc des Princes?

I just realized that I didn't come from Qidian, so I quickly supported it without even saying a word (≧∇≦)/

Come on ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭

Chapter 13: It's the third uncle, not the third uncle

Is the author quarantined🤐

I suddenly thought of that game with five goals in nine minutes, and I think the protagonist can also do it 🤓

Doesn't the author know anything about the income from playing football?

There is not much text, and there are a lot of various topics, which makes the reading experience not good. It is recommended to keep the first article and move the others to a private place. After all, no one cares until they are attracted by the novel.

It's such a pity that the Oranje have almost no football novels about joining the Dutch team.

It's best not to write about the national football team when writing about football, the gap is too big! If you write about the reform of the national football team and your writing is good, you won't be allowed to publish it? If the writing is not good and no one will read it, it is better to write something from abroad.

After reading Chapter 14, I felt like I was watching a pirated version. There are various errors. There are two paragraphs in Chapter Thirteen. The author writes that the main character is his third uncle who is doing business. However, in the first few paragraphs, you call him third uncle. In the middle paragraph, you call him second uncle and then change it to third uncle. I am confused. Also, don't blame me for writing this. Don't blame me for writing this. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye author

The writing is actually pretty good. After reading about twenty of them, I discovered a problem. Don't you want to give the protagonist a number?

It was so messy. It happened several times. In the previous chapter, there was no mention of a goal, but then it was 3-0, 4-0. No matter how hard you scored, you didn't score. Also, the writing competition was too messy, and I couldn't grasp the key points of writing at all.

The author's writing skills have still improved, but I feel that I can't find the key point, the description is not able to capture the readers, and the protagonist's presence is not strong, like soy sauce.

It's well written, without any passion at all, and I think it's just a piece of cake. There are no wonderful breakthroughs, no unparalleled goals, no turning the tide in moments of crisis. You say you are a prince, haha, just an ordinary starting player 😰😰😰

I would like to give you a suggestion. If the author wants to write a book, he should not write it so realistically, as it will not be easy to achieve good results.