Stealing Dreams and Becoming Immortals

I didn't finish it, I just read more than 100 chapters, and I just felt that the protagonist was too perverted. A newbie in the Qi training level can defeat a master of elixir formation, and even go to space to be baptized by the divine wind of the sun, and refine an invincible solar treasure. Then in the Qi refining stage, everyone kills the golden elixir. I think the chapter also kills the earth immortal in the golden elixir stage? ? ? (I haven't read the content, and I'm not willing to spend a penny for this book.) I can understand the protagonist's halo, and I can understand it if he is stronger, but if it is too perverted, it will be boring. It feels like the indigenous people who cultivate immortality have all cultivated themselves on pigs. . .

The first eight chapters constantly emphasize the importance of pig's feet in swordsmanship and Confucian qualities. In the ninth chapter, what is this thing? What kind of similarities in words and deeds are unknown.

Let's go, there's nothing to see,,,

Can the author see it? Advantages: The fighting scenes and narrative plot are well done, which caught my eye as a bookworm for 10 years. Disadvantages: The theme is not clear, there are too many pits, and the world view is too long. This is the Tomb of the Gods, a world view that covers the sky. It is imitated too much and has no own characteristics. The emotions of the protagonist are still too dramatic for novels. What readers hate most now is drama, because what readers like most is to be brought in, and you make readers feel emotionally suffocated after being brought in. It is a mess in 4 words.

I hope the author's next work will be better

Goldfinger has huge flaws. Judging from the description of the Butterfly of the World, does the Butterfly of the World carry all the worlds, or only part of the worlds? Does it include the world that covers the sky? If it is included, will people like ruthless people who have transcended all the worlds be aware of the butterfly of the world (transcendence is not mentioned in the original book, this is the author's second hypothesis)? Is the real world supported by the Butterfly of the World? If the ruthless person can really detect the protagonist's golden finger, why not seize it? With the feelings a ruthless person has for her brother, would she feel relieved if she was willing to wait for a stranger to grow up? Moreover, if the Butterfly of the World carries the world, why doesn't the ruthless person study the Butterfly of the World through the protagonist? After all, this seems to be related to the origin of the world. Moreover, when the Sun King gave the protagonist a special physique, he read through the protagonist's past and present memories. Wouldn't he be shocked that his existence is just a book and explore the truth? The Holy Emperor of the Sun can detect the protagonist, so there are many people in the world who can detect the protagonist. Still dreaming about Pangu? It's good if they don't slap you to death

. . . . It's really a strong recommendation, a strong recommendation

People in this town look down on you, and you vow to avenge them?

Just by looking at the introduction, you can tell that this is a novel written by a novice. It's like dreaming about Pangu. It's going to blow your brains out.

After reading Chapter 21, I had no choice but to abandon the book. If my sister is so awesome, then why is she still alive and not telling her family? Even if she can't tell her family, then it's okay to ask someone to take care of her, right? After all, the distance is not far, but what was the sister doing when her parents died, and she didn't care about her brother after that, and she didn't even know that the town was destroyed by the demon clan? As the senior sister, my sister let her junior brothers and sisters go down the mountain to go home, but she didn't let them inquire about the situation at home, and took care of them by the way. You must know that this is a world where humans and monsters coexist, and monsters eat humans! The city will be destroyed at every turn, which is too unreasonable.

After reading a few pictures, one reader was right when he said that practicing swordsmanship and cultivating one's mind will lead to an explosion of rage as soon as one arrives in the city! The character collapsed! You, a writer, have done nothing to cultivate your mind!

I can open up heaven and earth in the foundation building stage, where can I put my face in the tribulation stage?

The writing is so poor and the character descriptions are all the same, which is too embarrassing. To be honest, it is worse than Xiaobaiwen.

He was still a weakling and had so many karmic consequences. It was too dissuasive.

Do you think they will be able to sleep when they reach the level of a big boss? They are all cultivating. If they do sleep, they will be seriously injured and deeply asleep, subconsciously healing, and dreaming. This kind of creativity that can enter dreams can only write about the city at most, which is low-level martial arts.

Isn't it a bit cruel? The second level of Qi training starts to fight against the Mahayana stage? Being pursued by a fusion?

Forcibly sensationalizing, the younger brother is reborn and has never met his sister. I didn't say how I miss my sister before. Now my sister is injured and will die.

There is a reason why this book is not popular. If it is popular, there will be py transactions.

If you are a practitioner and go into a dream, be careful that you will be treated as an inner demon and be killed. If you are a ruthless person in a dream, let's not say whether they are dreaming or not. Even if they are dreaming, if you run into it, you will die.

The outline and setting are very good, but I couldn't read it. There were too many poisonous points. When I saw the siblings recognize each other, I had a severe drug attack and quit! The character of the protagonist, the storyline, the tough and sensational, and the mindless dialogue left me speechless!

I was thinking about how Cai Lianqi could be written in such a terrifying way as Transformation God. . . .

This introduction was written! Representative of Zhuangzi Taoism. Tathagata, Brother, you scared me! At the time of Zhuang Zhou, the bald monk had not yet entered China, right? ? The Tathagata who proves Mao! Is it possible to attain enlightenment in a dream?

I've seen it abandoned once before. Now that I have seen it for free, I picked it up and read it again. Sure enough, I was right before. This book stained my eyes.

Why can I recommend eunuch books! ! ! !

If you don't understand the mechanism of the starting point, you're a fucking eunuch and you're still recommending me?

Entering the palace? What a pity😅😅😅

The concept of this book is quite good, but the writing is so rubbish.

It's too poisonous. You don't even learn the principles of martial arts, you only learn the derived applications.

Why can't I keep going to the end? .

I haven't read this book yet. Just reading the introduction, I have an idea. You said that he gained his abilities through dreaming. If those immortals, those who can not sleep, don't sleep, then wouldn't the protagonist be finished?