Game System Bugs

"Game System Loophole" Author: Pluto Boss Mouse Type: Game Alien Rating: 8.2 Book Review: DaDa's writing style is very smooth, and he is also very good at depicting characters. The characters in the article are all vivid, but DaDa's language description of the characters may not be delicate enough, and the reading will feel a little rushed. It is recommended that DaDa modify the modifiers so that readers will have a stronger sense of involvement. For example, in the dialogue between the protagonist and the burly man, I personally think that some details can be modified (*≧ω≦). Moving on to the plot, the main plot setting is a sleep-style VR game, which is the way in which human consciousness is completely integrated with the game. This setting is very interesting, very attractive to readers, and will make people want to continue reading. I would like to make a small suggestion. I think the introduction of the game background can be used as a separate prologue, and the text content after the game background can be placed at the beginning of the first chapter. The reading structure will be more comfortable! In general, the writing style and plot of Dada are very good. 19 Has already been collected and subscribed. Keep up the good work Dada! From：chu shi

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