Superstar Hongze

How do you evaluate this book? The early part is full of poisonous points, but the later part is too ordinary. There is no climax at all in the whole book. It's still worth reading if you have a leisurely time.

It would be too childish not to send it! Not for adults!

When the protagonist enters the first year of Chinese drama, he basically focuses on study. However, the protagonist is in the directing department, so there are certain operations. First of all, there will definitely be practice after school, so I will list a film and television drama for the author as a reference. First of all, when I first entered school, my study and practice were just on paper. It is recommended to start filming with "Welcome to School Together". After all, the focus of this drama is sincerity. Then, the first season of "Classmate Together" is over (winter vacation shooting is recommended), and you can shoot the first season of "Mao Liang". As an after-school hobby in the second half of the first year, watch the plot development of the second season of "Classmate". If the time is too tight, you can leave it to a friend who has a good relationship with you to film (after all, the biggest benefit of this type of film and television drama is to be groundbreaking). In the summer vacation of the first semester, you can continue "Mao Liang". However, it is recommended that the second and third seasons be compressed, merged and filmed together. The plot needs to be adapted to some extent. After all, the original drama was canceled in the third season. It can be seen that there are foreshadowings. Of course, there is also a short drama "Unkillable" that you can consider. As a substitute drama, this drama is also quite excellent. The above are my little suggestions. I hope the author can consider them. Of course, the specific plot choices still need to be made by the author himself.

I feel like the Korean plot is very embarrassing, so it's best not to write about it. Everything else seems to be well written, so keep up the good work!

I was in my 30s and put on the body of a 16-year-old high school sophomore, with a middle-school personality like him. One day I had an argument with someone and didn't take it in. It looked awkward and childish, and I couldn't stand it.

To be honest, this book only became better after deleting all the articles about campus life, adoptive parents, and girlfriends. Author, you really don't know how to write emotional lines. It looks awkward. You just write a cool article honestly. Isn't it just pretending to be a comparison? You have to go here and there, and it's useless to force a lot of water. It really gives me a headache looking at it

To become famous by singing online songs, to get started with it, to earn the first pot of gold from it, and to be dissatisfied with online songs, you are a bitch who is hypocritical, with a fake literary appearance, and the protagonist's rubbish singing skills, and if it weren't for the support of resources from another world, the protagonist's loser-like appearance would be worse than a bricklayer. What right do you have to look down on online songs? The writing is really disgusting.

I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 20. The protagonist really feels sorry for your sister, who is also your adoptive mother. Seeing how hard she is on her own and still not debuting. If she doesn't want to debut, why don't you find other ways to help your sister reduce the burden? You were an adult before you time traveled. How can an adult man be so embarrassed to see a woman you are not familiar with working so hard to support the family while you are just hanging around at home waiting to die? When you go to school, you read comics and copy homework, and you still get the first place in the exam. That's high school. It's said that you went to college in your previous life, but you have been there for so many years and you can still get the first place in the exam so easily? Is it possessed by Einstein or Newton? So poisonous!

Okay, I only read three chapters and then I ran away and stuffed poison into your mouth when I came up. 1. I won the Golden Horse Award at the age of eight (16 nominations for Oscars and so on). Even if the Golden Horse Award is shameless, I don't want the Oscar? 2. The manager had to force Pigfoot to enter the entertainment industry because he didn't have an artist to guide him, so he did all sorts of shit 3. The manager got pregnant before marriage (there's nothing wrong with this, but isn't it poisonous to write this kind of article right at the beginning?) 4. Manager Pigfoot's adoptive mother, guardianship People, you do all kinds of drunken things at home, I'm fooled... You have no sense of responsibility, you adopted a child that is a piece of shit 5. Zhujiao doesn't want to enter the entertainment industry as Zhang Ang (please, you are also a copycat anyway, why are you afraid of not being famous? Isn't it easier to have your original identity? Sooner or later, you won't be picked out)

The internet singer Pengci said that he sold it to the protagonist in Mouse Loves Rice. I was curious. Is there no contract when buying the copyright? It's not as simple as asking Pengci to come up with a contract, but all kinds of other plots have to be inked for so long? Is it just for hydrology? Don't tell me that you don't need to sign a contract for something as important as buying the copyright, and you don't know that person well.

To be honest, I can't stand it anymore. It's too toxic. Even though I have been adopted for more than ten years, I still have feelings. Okay, just for a little feud, your son must sign with the company. Why don't you tell me? If I don't tell others, they won't know that you are Zhang Ang. It makes sense that this agent is not popular. It also makes sense that the author's book is not popular.

It's a bunch of poisonous ones. It's really uncomfortable. I can't stand it anymore after about 40 chapters. It's so poisonous. Doesn't any agent have any IQ? Md

I doubt the author has read the comments at all. . . .

You bitch is just pretentious. You are a newcomer and don't use your original name. If you have the ability, don't be a copycat later! ! I gave up after reading four chapters

Too poisonous, Shen Nong died💀💀💀💀

Set garbage. Sister or not, mother or not. Still pregnant. The protagonist buying a server just for a game is so rubbish. Weren't you very famous before? No money left? It's too much

I've seen people persuade me to quit in the early stage, and in the middle and late stages, but I've never seen the second chapter where it was so poisonous that I couldn't watch it directly. Even if this person adopted by Nima is not related by blood, you can't call her mom, but the age difference is nearly twenty, so calling her aunt is not too much, right? Also, if someone adopts you and raises you, your conversation is the same as with your classmates, and you still call me sister? What's going on, you still want to adopt this adoptive mother? Archmother? The author should be more careful

Is this agent a fool

I read Chapter 221. Do you believe it?😰

What I hate the most is liking foreign comics. Aren't Chinese ones good?

It makes me so sick. I keep forcing the protagonist to become a star, but then the protagonist disagrees, and the stalemate continues. Then in the end, the protagonist compromises. Is the adoption of the protagonist just to make him a star? Then make money for him, right? ​​You can write such a bad plot just from the beginning, can you still watch it later?

I don't know how much the author spent on 30,000 recommendation votes.

Can an agent like this still survive in the industry? ? ?

I just want to say that if you want to be messy, you have to do everything. Sometimes you do this, and sometimes you do that.

Why add a character like Qin Siyao? I don't like it, I really don't like it

The good guy just persuaded him to quit in the first chapter... A woman drank six bottles of 52% wine, and then the protagonist said that this amount of alcohol and 6 bottles without any s are considered good... Can a person with a poor emotional tolerance drink six bottles casually?

I couldn't stand it in the fourth chapter. First of all, let's talk about the writing. It's really weird, even a novice reader can see it. Secondly, the logic problem is very confusing, very abnormal, and very non-mainstream. Furthermore, the most embarrassing thing is the dialogue. Yes, it is dialogue. The dialogue is extremely two-dimensional and unrealistic. It has a sense of déjà vu of daily dialogue in Japanese comics. Anyway, this book looks very good, but it is not useless.

I read the first two chapters and I think the protagonist is right. If you don't like it, don't do it.

It's okay, just a little too slow.

Thank you for your hard work, the author❤️❤️❤️