DC Valhalla

Author, we are here to see DC, not to see Xingyue. You have to make it clear! And Superman can't beat that pirate? Those who prefer film and television can also go for it.

I feel like I blew Xingyue a little too hard, DC forcefully cut him off, and the protagonist was passively suppressed everywhere, which was extremely unpleasant to watch.

To be honest, when I came in, I thought it was just the DC world with the Heroes of the Moon, but after watching it, I found that characters from other anime had joined it. Actually, I don't like this very much. I prefer that in the DC world, only the Moon Heroic Spirits are added and the others don't need to be added.

The subject matter is quite good, but the more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. There are already enough incidents in DC, and you are throwing out a lot of spiritual bases to cause trouble in the universe. For you, I recommend you to read a book called DC Knights and check out what he wrote. You haven't written too much yet and you can still adjust it.

Does this book really need a protagonist?

Can I ask why those systems that throw away some scraps are more NB than the main character who has the main body of the system? Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is a salted fish, but I have read many books where the protagonist works hard but is beaten by the supporting character who takes the scraps. I would like to ask whether the system is the protagonist's system or someone else's.

Did the pirate ship intentionally deceive Superman? Superman, you, Freeze Breath, couldn't run away at all, but in the end, you let me take the picture. The pirate in the back also pretended to be a B. Why are we just pure pirates who plunder the weak and run away when they encounter the strong? It's simply mdzz Aren't pure pirates bad people? The one who commits all kinds of crimes by burning, killing, and robbing. A single freeze breath or hurricane breath will kill them all. What are you thinking, author? Did the Xingyue series wash your mind? Can a pretty girl be white no matter what she does? Like Jack the Ripper? Mdzz,

The setting is good, but the protagonist is useless and I can't stand it.

My previous solicitation posts were deleted by the website... All of them were deleted... I can only create another post. If you delete it again... I will - create another one... Requirements: Heroic spirit name + job introduction + origin + camp Factions include 'Misty Faust' and 'Sanren'.

It's been two years, and there are only about 70 photos, ugh

I feel dizzy when I read it, and I don't know what is written here.

Regarding deletion of posts. Recently, the website has been undergoing rectification, deleting posts and so on. Everyone should be calmer. There is no comment from my author account, so I will leave a long comment to explain...

Personal advice. Since even Superman, The Flash and Supergirl have it. Then there are enough villains. Then there is no need to add additional self-created villain organizations. This will be messy. You can try to make a copy of a singularity like this. Rather than being generated directly in the world. After all, the DC world is not an ordinary world, and there are many people in it who travel through time. There are many people who can calculate fate. And it's fine now, but has the author figured out how to deal with people like King Arthur and Merlin in the middle and later stages? DC has Merlin, King Arthur's sister and Mordred.

We like this kind of fate fanfic, let's take a look at it first, please support the author

About the book club group Solicit everyone's opinions. If there are ten people, start a group, otherwise it will be too embarrassing...

One thing to tell the author, don't let little Jack use the Noble Phantasm on Batman and Superman, otherwise most people will really be unable to control the scene. Even when I think about the children who formed Jack the Ripper, I burst into tears, let alone Batman! He might kill people... It shouldn't be said that he will definitely kill people, and then Gotham's disaster will come.

Why doesn't the king's treasure last forever?

This post is a collection post for heroic spirits. Remarks on the name of the heroic spirit + origin + ability (although I don't know how many friends will pay attention to me emmm) Lineup 1: Mist Faust Lineup 2: Individual heroic spirit (not affiliated with any force, such as Jack the Ripper) For the time being, these are the two lineups.