I Really Didn't Create This Game

There is an extremely serious bug in Chapter 40. Has the author seen Infinite Horror? Zhang Jie is the leader. He is completely unqualified to directly kill his teammates. At most, he can only give hints and trick his teammates to death. If he wants to take action directly, that is when he hands over the captain's rights. As soon as he dies, the captain's rights will be handed over. If Zhang Jie, who had achieved great telekinesis, had not wanted to die, Zheng Zha, who had the second-level gene lock, would never have lived to become the captain. As a result, look at what you wrote. Zhang Jie doesn't say anything about taking action against newcomers, but the question is, should he be defeated? When he was about to die, he still said, "Even if you kill me, I won't tell you the secret of the Lord God's Space." Awkward or not? Moreover, if the genetic lock is turned on and the person is not physically strong enough, he will die, so this setting has also been eliminated. In terms of character setting, my sister eats 20 times as much? No one will die? Let's just say that she is different from ordinary people. In this life of sharing the joys and sorrows with her brother, at least she knew early on that life was not easy. As a result, I only saw her dragging her feet. And what about the characteristics of the protagonist? He didn't write any unusual results, but a bunch of young ladies were optimistic about him. What's the logic? The protagonist of Long Aotianliu? And the supporting character who was the first to break through to the second level was completely portrayed as a madman. His wisdom and layout were not written out, and he felt a bit inferior. He was a bit like a nouveau riche. Chu Xuan just disappeared. If he wanted Chu Xuan to be a stepping stone, he should at least write out the process. Making Chu Xuan mentally retarded to set off others will only make people who have watched Infinite Horror feel a (you are kidding me) kind of embarrassment.

The last suggestion is to write less about women. At least write less goodbye in the early stage.

There are so many women, so the author has to worry a lot. Too much yy is not good, this can be seen from the protagonist in the book. If the author is a woman, I'd pretend I didn't see it.

Author, I suggest you write less about your sister. The main character is so timid and timid, and he gives up Golden Finger because his sister is afraid of thunder! ! ! ! ! ! Author, you really poisoned me! ! ! I can't stand it anymore!

What can I say about the protagonist's character? Even the homeless man who picks up trash at the end has more ideas than the protagonist. If this were not a novel, a person like the protagonist probably wouldn't even be able to support his own sister.

A few poisonous points in my opinion. First, since the authority of the main god space is for everyone to fight for, you should not always write about women. Second, since you created it, you should have sovereignty instead of everyone competing together. Third, why would Zheng Zha and others die in the mission world if they failed to complete the mission, but not those who entered through a virtual device? This is not the style of the infinitely terrifying Lord God. What does the undead call the Lord God's space? What I want to see is not those people chattering about crazy nonsense, rolling around on the floor screaming at their mothers, and dying if they fail to complete the task. Do you think they are crazy? To be honest, the behavior and language of these characters written by the author made me feel as if they were insulting the book Infinite Horror. Don't comment if you don't like it, just my personal opinion.

I want to say that the author's ideas are very good, but the chapters and content are not closely connected. It feels like reading a running account. There are many things that can be written in detail, and the pace can be slowed down appropriately. I felt that the previous Miracle Nuan Nuan was completely useless other than giving money to the protagonist. After you write a lot of things, you must think about why you think that way, which will help the flow of the article.

Loud! Just came from a pirated website (The protagonist can fully realize that he is plagiarizing) It's great! Although, I can't reward now (but I decided to subscribe slowly)

Small 80,000-word single-digit recommendation vote!

How should I put it, your infinite flow, since you modeled it on the main god space, then it can reflect reality. But if the game you are playing dies, it can be restarted. Isn't this a bug? Then you can earn unlimited points. This is too poisonous. It's like giving it to them for free, an invincible hook, ***. Can't stand it.

Doesn't the protagonist know infinite horror? Why do you still trust Zhang Jie so much? Let him enter the laser channel and he will go in?

It was written in such a mess that it made my head hurt when I read it, so I left.

As I look at it, I don't know what's going on, and I feel very uncomfortable.

I took it off the shelves directly. Forget your efforts

What exactly does the first chapter want to express? I fainted

Boss, can you please stop writing too much about the things surrounding the protagonist? Forget it about some big things, but it would be boring to talk about small things at length.

Exist? Why not write about the main god construction flow?