Give Me a Smile

The level of dry food, interesting places and flaws are all there. What's interesting is that the world view is suddenly gamified but there is no chaos, including the protagonist's skills. The disadvantage is that there are very embarrassing plots, especially the gangster part. In addition, sometimes I feel that it is a drama, because the foreshadowing is huge, but the actual performance is very narrow. It is like a 3A masterpiece that is promoted, but in actual play, it is just a play on Blue Moon. Well, I can only say that the God of Creation is a greasy uncle.

The plot behind it is poisonous. Ranked among the top 1,000 in the world, why are everyone so timid? If you are all so cowardly, how did you reach the full level of the first level?

I will try my best to keep three updates a day, and strive to have four updates from time to time. No manuscripts are saved, and I will post as many codes as I can. Please support me.

After reading so many system articles, it is easy to find a problem. If the protagonist has a high status, and then obtains the system, he will easily become a super god.

Chapter 49: I really can't hold on any longer. If you don't know how to write about women, then don't write about them. I really can't stand it. The plot is good. The girl is a real poisonous pawn! ! ! ! ! !

As the most powerful person in the world (high probability), the protagonist is a bit too humble. He trembles every time he gives a speech, and kneels down to lick his capital.

Now I'm reading chapter 30~ It's a good book, but those girls... Emmm, I personally think it's a little bit toxic. The author's characters of those girls are really not good, so it would be better to make the protagonist single. Secondly, I am not a straight man with cancer or anything, I am a girl, but the women written by the author are really a bit... Maybe I can't understand what the goddess in your mind is like. When I ask for help, I seem too confident, and that best friend is a bit... A female figure. Don't scold me, I really think so. Actually, if the author wants to write about a girl, don't be too deliberate, just write it as a boy.

Come on. What a great book. I'll give you the ticket, but I want to give you a reward, but I can't.

Women are too poisonous. If you can't write, don't write.

Although the audience who described those sour protagonists are very silly, I suddenly discovered that the reality is really, too real. There are always some bastards who support A, B, and C. It is better for the netizens to be friendly and bring me joy.

According to the logic of this book, the protagonist traveling back in time to the 1920s to become a warlord is the career that maximizes his talents.

I'm looking forward to the author's next book. This one still has some minor problems. The author will try to see if he can apply for a limited exemption. A limited exemption should increase his popularity.

I think if the girl is not the main character, it would be best for both the male protagonist and the girl not to pay too many times, because there is no reason or motivation to go out of their way to do it, but it will feel like pretending to be 13. The interaction would not be so awkward if we were like companions. It seems that the author rarely interacts with girls. Didn't he think too much about asking for more book units? Come on code words

Let's just say this book is good. I should have signed the contract a long time ago. I haven't made any profit for so long.

This is my first time writing "Did the Young Man Come to Cultivate Immortality"? I'm not afraid of being criticized. Please give me some advice from someone who knows how to write.

It feels like the author thinks it's funny, but that's just a little bit. If you don't put the funniest stuff at the beginning, then not many people will read it if it's good at the end.

Haha, do you have Palkin syndrome? Shake, shake, shake, let the author shake it and have a look

Why do I think of the magical 8484848(눈_눈) when I see the picture?

I would like to give the author a suggestion to apply for a limited exemption. The popularity will increase a lot

After reading Chapter 17, he appears as a standard rich second-generation boy who listens to everything the protagonist says. There is also a school girl who looks fair and beautiful. She looks at the protagonist in a different light. It's a bit standardized. The important jokes in it are not funny.

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Get some investment, it's not even 100 yet

Now that I have read Chapter 21, I want to ask, why does the protagonist use possession without blessing? The first time can be understood as an experiment, but what about the second time? Or is it that if you attack once under the blessing but it is not an effective attack, the blessing effect will disappear?