The Invincible Tyranny of the Great Rivers and Lakes

It means that I will never be satisfied with your update speed unless you update five times a day, and so will my friends.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist's aura is not enough. In other words, can you help him get a few more? Give it to me by the way.

Thanks Lou! Every bit of support is here, let everyone grow with this book!

Good! Small reward support! 🙂

An ancient secret treasure and a stupid person! A bizarre and absurd experience, is this a conspiracy... Or is it a stand-in for future catastrophes!

Uh-huh, come to Liao~ It's not bad, it's definitely not a Chinese cabbage-type article. Great, great, great! Come on! Crazy Amway, everyone, look at it

Very well written, good luck to the author, looking forward to a big hit

The characters in the novel are well named, and the atmosphere and background are well created. I like it.

Let me take the top 3 comments Hehe~

The first comment was that I was right

Updates are so slow, I'm so anxious to read them!

It's not that I don't want to write a review. Our focus is completely different, and your readers are much higher than mine. It can be seen that the things you write are much more popular than mine, and I can't give a pertinent opinion from my own point of view. But out of respect, I tried my best to write a paragraph. First of all, I think it is better for martial arts to be more ancient, so some modern descriptive words should be avoided as much as possible, which can easily cause drama. For example, there is a paragraph in you that is very handsome. At first glance, I would think it was a campus romance. You can replace it with heroic, and so on. But this is just my personal opinion, because some people have said that if you look at my novels at a glance, you can't understand anything. If you read them carefully, they are too clumsy and very tiring to read. Some people think that literate description is writing style, some people think that concise and unnecessary narration is writing style, and some people think that making people look relaxed and comfortable is writing style, but readers don't understand. Most readers refer to these three collectively as writing style. In terms of character creation, it should be clearer. The choices he makes when encountering things should also be linked to his character. The character should be linked to his childhood experience, and the narration should be transformed into a psychological description as much as possible. Try to turn the psychological description into dialogue as much as possible to make it more interesting. As for fighting, I like the description of fighting actions to be smooth, punching, palm closing, one move after another, which makes people think of being relaxed, powerful or agile, rather than just describing moves and level attributes. As far as the plot is concerned, it is important to be happy and relaxed. After all, it brings a better viewing experience to readers. However, as far as I am concerned, I still like a more emotional story, and it is better if the emotions are expressed naturally, rather than deliberately writing emotions for the sake of writing emotions. But since the protagonist is only a twelve or thirteen-year-old child, it is too early to tell. And I think that martial arts, whether it is about real history or an imaginary world, cannot just be separated into two words: peerless martial arts and chivalry. Such a martial arts world is not full of Jianghu and court, conspiracy and calculation of good and evil, grievances and hatred. Resentful women, chivalrous bones, soft intestines, music, chess, calligraphy and painting, famous rivers, food, clothing, housing and transportation, customs and customs should all be included in it. The reason why martial arts is difficult to write is not only the taste of modern people has changed, but also because readers who like martial arts have very picky tastes. After all, there are five mountains: "Golden, Ancient, Huangliang, Wen". Therefore, I suggest you consider switching to fantasy and otherworldly genres. After all, there are popular system elements in it, which will make it even more brilliant.

What time will it be updated? Just update at a fixed time!

The story has twists and turns and is full of dangers. It is worth watching. I beg you to update it soon!

The subject matter is novel, and it's a good book. I haven't seen it in a long time.

Very interesting article, please update it soon

Okay, gotta keep it up

Coming! Looking forward to the update, it looks great!

Collected, author Junjun, come on 😜

I now understand why No. 9 Asked the little girl if she was thrown away in the first place. The emotion is love.

The author writes very well, keep up the good work!

It's a pity that I can't subscribe, it's so well written!

Haha, it's so enjoyable to watch, a very interesting plot!

Dear author, please work hard and update it quickly. The suspense now is getting more and more exciting, that's what it looks like.

Looking at it now, this article feels clean and not greasy!

I don't know how to describe it, but it's so well written! Recommended for everyone to watch!

How great! I like this kind of rhythm the most. Come on＾0＾~

I hope Xiaobai has a good ending!

So far, this book is developing at a pretty good momentum, but it seems that it would be better if more elements go hand in hand~

The book is very good and worth investing in, but the plot could be more nuanced. Keep it up.