Internet Complaints System

1. Change your introduction (you even posted it, I was so innocent! I have a headache), don't just shoot it without reading it 2. Break it into paragraphs and don't make them so long. Readers will usually skip reading long paragraphs, resulting in missing some details and important plots. 3. Go back and change your punctuation marks Check it yourself, I can't post the picture There are many places —some use commas indiscriminately, such as: xxxx, xxx, xxxx, xxx. It is a paragraph. What you used at the end is ",", not "." ——Use quotation marks in dialogue, you always write like this: xxxx said, xxxxx It should be: xxxx said: "xxxx"

Dear author, I have taken a rough look at your book. The humor is a bit lacking, but the overall article is okay. But there is one thing, there is a bit too much foul language. It may make readers feel a little disgusted, but most readers will like it.

[Self-recommendation] "Internet Tucao System" Author: What is Water? 10,000 words of online entertainment funny novels, please review and collect them. One update per day. Please forgive me because working hours are limited. Hello everyone, my name is Li Xiang. I am looking at the car that suddenly stopped in front of me. There is no fluctuation in my heart, and I even want to laugh a little! You may not believe it when I say it, but I really don't want to get into trouble, really. Originally, I was thinking that I would finally have a day off on Sunday and go to the Internet cafe to play chicken and let those dogs in PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds know that I, Hu Hansan, was back. But when I excitedly ran to the Internet cafe to get on the accelerator and get on STM, I sadly discovered that the script was totally wrong with me. The jerks who now play PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds have changed and are no longer the jerks they used to be. All kinds of gs are simply irresistible. After several rounds of boxing, I walked out of the Internet cafe angrily. I was just about to take out my phone, check Weibo, and click on hot searches, but nothing came up. At that time, my heart was broken. Who the hell took away the employee's phone! ! ! Ganliliang! ! ! It just smells sad and makes me cry.

(I'll scroll after reading the book) Name: Lin Dong Gender: Male Remainder: Author's discretion

Keep up the good work! Invested.

You haven't updated it for almost a week, are you a eunuch?

The book is very interesting, with rich plots and wonderful plots. Especially the writing is very good, at least it is much better than mine. Come on ^0^~, I have collected it and will read it slowly.

Collection and support! I also know the pain of writing novels! I'm trying to save a new book, and it just broke 600,000.

Great cheers. Already collected and hope to visit again (￣▽￣)

Goodbye, I'm gunning and I won't come back

Arrogant Introduction [Manual Funny]