King of Time in Super God Academy
超神学院之时王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 981k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
362Chapters
0Votes
3.7kRecs
27.6kFans
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Reader comments 39
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Can you please not borrow Shi Wang's colleagues to write such a thing? The Super Seminary you wrote is not like the Super Seminary, and the King of Time is not like the King of Time. I am also drunk when you write a good fan novel into a counterattack by a diaosi. Don't think I am being slanderous. This is the fact. If you are just trying to satisfy your own pretentiousness, I have nothing to say.
Have you really watched Kamen Rider? I can't even figure out who rides what.
Don't let me spoil it, okay, it's impossible.
You will know after reading it.
You must have only watched the TV series King of Time, otherwise you would not have such a one-sided understanding of the knights. The King of Time is completely written as a loser and a licker, and the props will change when the knight uses the abilities of other knights. The time and space drive of King of Time cannot be swiped, and can only be used with the dial. Also, there is a little demon king behind you, which is very awkward to watch. Your emotional scenes are also very stiff, which makes people feel embarrassed. The plot is also very cliché, and the knight and super god you wrote in this book want the power of Naruto. Don't you think it is very conflicting? Tokio hasn't fully mastered his power yet, so why don't he go and practice lightning and sharingan.
Whatever I wrote, I wrote King of Time just like King of Time. He added all kinds of abilities, and they haven't changed a few times. Why don't you write an online game and show King of Time to deceive people? And judging from the plot, you only know a few knights. You probably haven't recognized all the 20 main knights, let alone the deputy knights and villain knights.
The lowly King of Time, even non-hosts can wear battle armor, ugh
It feels like the protagonist is licking a dog, licking Angel and Lena.
Brother, could you please read the original work before writing a fanfic? The character of your little brother Ming is very different from the original work. It is understandable that there is a difference between writing a fan and the original work, but you are completely different from the original work. Although this is your book, I can only give you some opinions at most. However, as a person who has fallen into the trap of Kamen Rider, I really can't stand your little brother Ming's character.
What you wrote is completely random. Even if you want to change some settings as a fan, you can't change it in a messy way. Let's not say that the third level of the King of Time appears so casually. According to you, the third level is the final one, what about Enchanting and Tangwang. Those two can create the world, right?
If there are only one or two comments saying that your writing is bad, maybe it's nothing. But if most of the comments say that your writing is poor, maybe you should really reflect on your writing.