Open an Underworld in Another World

I have only read a few chapters so far I have a question The protagonist's original world is the prehistoric planet, and he also mentioned the invasion of foreign religions, and he will take care of his parents after they die. Then the underworld ran away, and the protagonist should still be on the prehistoric planet at this time. As a result, he became a ghost and went to another world, which was a bit unclear. But ignoring this point will have no impact on the current plot. It is most likely just a background setting. In addition to the problem, if I put it bluntly, the protagonist is not a cold-blooded character who kills decisively and decisively every second, and he also does things that ordinary people would do if they are powerless. So it may make some people unhappy! I have read that some book reviews are based on grades, not to mention that grades are not determined by just one or two points. This kind of character design that is not "cool" enough will be weaker in terms of performance. I see that the author has written some other books, but not many. If it's because of grades or being scolded, I don't think it's necessary. If you really care about grades, just write popular and popular articles. If you insist on this style, don't care too much about grades and comments. Readers will filter the works. Authors also need to screen readers. There is no need to care too much if you are not the same person.

What's the point of crying blood and tears when two unrelated children are being beaten while I, as a ghost, cry blood and tears next to them? It's just to highlight the kindness of the protagonist, so it doesn't have to be like this. It really should be a one in 100 million chance...

The second chapter is a bit vicious because of the crying and fussing of two children who have never met each other. People can't stand this nowadays. The author can change it while there are fewer people. Otherwise, many people will quit after reading three chapters.

This is another novel where the author is proud of himself. All authors with poor grades think that this is the right way to write. It is because readers have no discernment. I will write like this, and there will always be people who will appreciate it.

Brother, be brave and protect your rights in accordance with the law! ! ! Positive energy

I endured the poison of the two children, because I thought that this kind of poison should never exist, but the local government interferes in the human world, and the protagonist directly kills people and takes their souls, is this still the underworld? The underworld should only enchant people's souls after death. No matter whether they are good or evil people, the underworld only takes over after death! What does the protagonist say? I couldn't explain clearly, but I just felt something was wrong and left.

It's so rubbish. When you see an adult, a god who doesn't want to be a god, you can't write a book after all. Those who look down on injustice are just tyrants or idiots. Just compare it yourself, there is no divinity.

It wouldn't be so bad if it were written normally! Look how silly this is, I'm addicted to self-pleasure

It is a waste of resources to write a good idea in a mess.

As the underworld, you should not interfere in the mortal world. You fight with various forces and punish rape and eliminate evil. ... The living and the dead should be two worlds. There is still faith in the setting, so the underworld can survive... The underworld should be there. Whether you believe it or not, it is there.

Holy Mother has no cerebral infarction. No wonder she is so short and weak. What kind of underworld can she open?

, I was persuaded to quit after reading two chapters. I can still read it without the first chapter, although it is a bit cliche.

Haha, two chapters. I just read two chapters. It would be weird if you wrote it like this and it's not an eunuch. What the hell.

There is a book called The Ancestor of All Ghosts that you can read.

It's so poisonous that it can kill people. I can't stand it anymore.

Holy Mother, I can cry so much. You must have the same experience in your works.

I feel more comfortable without that investor. .

Cultivation? Look at the introduction and the magic is rising

In the first chapter, I persuade you to quit and leave a claw. See the reason for yourself on the first floor.

The first sentence put me off. The protagonist is the Virgin.

The underworld conquers the underworld and makes all the major forces in the world surrender to the underworld? Is this different from keeping humans in captivity?

😥😥😥Shouldn't the underworld care about the souls of the dead? Why do you keep jumping in front of living people in the world? You don't care about good or evil, death is your business.