Warm Spring Wine Passed Across the Table

The writing is very good and worth reading. I look forward to more updates. I have collected it and keep working hard!

I really like this book and hope the author won't update it.

Hello everyone, I am Zhou Xiaofeng, the author of this book. "Give Hooks and Wine to Warm Each Other" means that a group of people play a game together, guess whose hand the hook is in, and the loser is fined with alcohol. It can be interpreted in many ways, and I hope you can use your own discretion (laughing)

If there weren't five updates a day, would you believe it if I went to your house to be gay?

Nalan Youci, but not gay, 🐶Persimmon is great

Be the first audience🙂🙂

A very talented friend's new work. I hope everyone can support it and give new writers a chance to debut in a C position. Blah blah blah~

The writing style is naturally excellent, and I feel inferior to it, but yes, I have to say but, there are too many things to be described in the first chapter, the events are messy, and there is no obvious line to connect them. In addition, the wording is slightly classical, making it difficult for readers to understand. It feels like the author is not writing a novel for readers, but for himself. As a book friend commented, this book does not cater to the general atmosphere of the starting point. The story setting can be complicated, but the narrative must not be complicated. Because my novel involves theology, the setting is also extremely complex. However, because I adopt a first-person narrative, the straightforward wording does not dazzle the reader. You and I have different writing styles. You describe the world and knights, while I describe the church and magicians. What you depict in your pen is ancient tenderness, while what I depict in my pen is the sin of human nature. I can't provide much help to your work. You have your own characteristics. In my eyes, this is the reflection of your personality. Don't care about other people's opinions. Please be sure to serialize this novel full of your characteristics.

Shock! Updated! Come on... It's so hard to gain weight.

The word count is too small, put it on the bookshelf first and read later