I Changed the World

I have read five or six hundred chapters, and I feel that the biggest problem with this book is that the world view is very confusing. Since the author is a newcomer, I will not comment much. If the author wants to keep writing books, I would like to give you a suggestion. Before writing this book, take the time to read some famous works of great masters to learn some of their excellent settings of the world view, the characterization of the characters and the smooth advancement of the plot. Finally, I hope that the author's next book can make great progress (if so, I will still be willing to give a small support)

Advantages: The book is finished, Disadvantages: The wrong armor is given to the protagonist, and the protagonist cannot use it if he has the armor. The protagonist is obviously a modern person, but he has a background in the information age but does not use it. This armor can obviously be used as a farming stream or an undead stream, Heaven, earth, god, human, ghost, five paths, The protagonist's armor can only choose earth, human beings and ghosts, >The problem is that the protagonist actually chooses a weird guy like Emperor Xiu. It's okay to choose a weird guy, but the cheats on the protagonist are so bad. You shouldn't hack off such a weird guy like Emperor Xiu. Dixiu, why don't you bring this bunch of underlings to a just siege? Cutting off the protagonist's cheats leaves the protagonist with no choice but to grow up on his own. An Emperor Cultivator without a younger brother has to do everything by himself. How funny.

The title of the book is "I Mutated the World", why is it about Taoist ghost hunting?

Let me tell you what I think about this book now. The protagonist is impatient and escalates to look for trouble. This attitude is good and speeds up the growth period, but things are too compact. The connection in the middle is also a matter. There is no emotion or other descriptive lines. It feels too compact. Reading feels very tiring. In fact, the protagonist Goldfinger is not open enough. At least establishing a guild is inevitable. But as you said at the beginning, all the monsters and monsters in the world will find the protagonist and establish a guild. So I feel that the connection in the middle should fit the outline. After the protagonist picks up the mistakes, he uses his skills to strengthen other teammates. Either the emperor who grows up does not have a younger brother, or the younger brother is a bit ordinary.

Why is the main character shaking so much that my phone screen shattered?

The book is good, the world view is okay, but the map is a bit small. After reading the book, I feel that except for the protagonist, no one has special skills. If the protagonist doesn't come, others can't solve it. The protagonist can only solve it when he comes. The fighting scenes feel a bit small. It would be better to write it in a larger size. It is not a movie or TV show. I changed the map and walked around, and I saw that everything in the entire world is happening to the protagonist.

6666666666666666666666

The writing is good, but the author made a mistake. The heroine was added too suddenly. It's not that it can't be done, but that there is not enough foreshadowing.

Yes, Taoism should subjugate demons and eliminate demons, just like Uncle Ying. It's not like other works where the protagonist learns some tricks and then starts having fun picking up girls and being temptresses. Support the author! Come on

The biggest bug is that the world has become bigger. Will the wires be broken? Can I still access the Internet?🤫🤫🤫

Already fully booked, I hope your update speed can be as fast as all of us can read 😏

After reading less than 100 chapters, I feel like the protagonist always has no money to use. Isn't it okay to sell talisman paper if he has no money? Also, the Taoist profession is so shady and secretive. Also, the protagonist doesn't pay much attention to the information about the changes in the world and always realizes it later.

What the hell, I don't have the right worldview. It's awkward to look at it. Who in the right mind would attach so much importance to the ancestral temple every day? It's still in every house, it's in the local area, and it's not even at home.        ，，                                                        has a coy personality, likes to show off, and half-talk is of no use, except to make things mysterious. How come the book actually creates some arrogant and arrogant characters? Also, Lei Jiang's change of attitude in the abandoned girls' school is so abrupt and the contrast is huge. I'm very curious about how so many reckless people survived the struggle and managed to do so well, which made the protagonist feel so embarrassed.        ，，，（） Being reckless, arrogant and unreasonable does not look like a generation of heroes. If the world is full of such things, I think it is inevitable to be destroyed I have the above feeling after reading nearly two hundred chapters 🙂🙂🙂 I encourage you, the author, to work hard and strive to write better and better. Bring us more good works.

The Imperial Cultivator is really the bright spot. He has been at the starting point for decades and has only witnessed the domineering power of the Emperor.

Since you don't care about energy crystals, why not join a national organization and use the country's energy to form a team to fight bosses and gain energy points. As for worrying about anything, do you think you are the son of destiny? Is everyone paying attention to you?

1 The subject matter is quite interesting, the world view is great, but the author's writing skills are not enough 2 There is too much nonsense, and deleting 1/3 basically does not affect the reading. It feels like the author wrote a few sentences in each chapter and then added thousands of words to it 3 There is no logic, the character relationships change inexplicably, the source of the information is unknown, every incident basically happened accidentally without any accident, and the routine is simple. Obviously the protagonist is simple-minded and acts recklessly. It seems that people in this world are so reckless. Well, the author wants to write a story that is decisive and decisive. You don't even tell your teammates about the plan and rely on tacit understanding. You have obviously never worked with them before. Is this because you are trying to trick someone... Or your writing is not strong enough 4 ideas It's quite big, but ordinary humans have so many mutations, why are there so few ordinary animals and plants? At least explain why 5 You don't use plug-ins reasonably. Obviously the plug-ins are very strong and you should attack from all sides, but you are just sitting there all day long. How can you still be so domineering as Xiu Tian Emperor? I would say he is prudent, but he has no brains in doing things. 6 After seeing the free version, in the end, the protagonist wants to cultivate the emperor's way or become the emperor of heaven... Is it just a junior high school level strategy to fight for world domination? After looking at the comments and future chapter lists, there are no major war scenes If you don't have a book, just read it. It's quite interesting to imagine the world for yourself.

What a rubbish setting, there is no basis. The online game is set like this because the artificial limit is too fast for upgrading, and the energy of low-level ghosts has never changed. Why do you get less energy points as you become stronger? The author only talks about the setting, but can't tell why. The setting that appears out of thin air has no basis. If the settings in the future are like this and have no basis, just add them casually, then it is not what you want to write.

Is there any misunderstanding about the invincible flow? 😒

I only went to see The Avengers for the special effects, and the plot was just shit in my eyes 🙂

There is a question. There are so many online resources. Why doesn't the protagonist buy a printer? Those street stalls also come from this way. Theirs may be a little older, but the protagonist doesn't need it. He only needs to add energy to alienate. Also, I see that the protagonist has so many younger brothers, but I have never thought of giving some secrets to the younger brothers. It is strange. If you want to be powerful, you must be attractive. Only Zhao in the protagonist team has some money, but he is not very rich. Can he support it if this continues?

How are you saving those little bitches in Chapter 60 any different from the Holy Mother?

I feel that the setting is not good. The earth has become larger. Will the house not collapse? Even if it does not collapse, the water pipes, electric wires, and network cables will definitely be torn off.

It is said that the world has mutated, but in fact it is because the Taoism taught by the protagonist is all about ghosts and zombies.

Bugs don't matter, and irrationality doesn't matter either. But the supporting character is cut out of the same mold and is arrogant, and the protagonist is hypocritical.

When I see a Bai Xiaosheng, I feel very annoyed. Author, you ignore the country's intelligence and integration capabilities.

Why should I buy ginseng? Can't Ganoderma lucidum, Polygonum multiflorum and other medicinal materials work? What's more, it can also mutate other fruits and vegetables that are good for the human body. The exercises don't have to be Taoist! Anyway, you are directly mutated. You can also choose the techniques of cultivating immortality, fantasy, and martial arts from novels to restrain ghosts and monsters, right? It can also improve physical fitness🤔🤔🤔

The writing is really bad. Money is of no use in a mutated world. Bartering is almost the same. It's like the outbreak of a world war. Your money is just waste paper and numbers. If you give someone a million in cash, will they give you a steamed bun? It's hard to wipe your butt 😅😅😅

I mutated Tintin... Into a "Golden Cudgel"? ? ? I mutated my left hand... Into a "True Qilin Arm"? ? ? I mutated my hair... And became a "tentacle monster"? ? ?

With such a bad setting, worldview, and wording problems, I have to be convinced that I can still write so many words. Also, I wonder if the author dares to read the comments?

What I wrote is a bit off topic.