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Your writing needs to be improved. There is a lot of lack of descriptions of NPCs and character plots. Readers often have to rely on guessing. The characters in Bio-Naruto (especially the non-protagonists) are all forgotten. When the character appears, it would be much better to describe his appearance in twenty or thirty words to remind readers who this guy is. The same goes for the environment. If you want to make progress, you need to let people who have never seen the movie (or who have not watched it carefully, but have watched it) know what you are talking about.

Another novel that makes you unable to walk when you see a woman! It's directly lowered to a level, otherwise this book would be okay.

The failure of this book lies in the confusion in the middle period. One chapter has a world plot, and as soon as the interest is aroused, the next chapter goes to another world. However, even with such shortcomings, it cannot erase the golden reputation of the author lsp. Although Qiu Mingshan was closed and the old drivers were arrested, there are still people who remember the drift. So this book, the early biochemical world, can still be recommended and is worth reading.

To be honest, when I first started Sanjiang, I liked this book at first glance because I like this type of book, but I think this book is still a little short of other excellent books of the same type. I hope the author will work hard. If he can make up for the shortcomings in the past, I will continue to read it. I basically skipped reading the first part. The original book said that it was very awkward to read. I am embarrassed by books that are basically random, so I basically gave up when I saw them. But fortunately, the author of Random Academy should be a benefit forcibly given to us, but it is still very embarrassing, mainly because I personally can't accept it. Also, I'm taking the first step. I really hope that the author can write well. Keep up the hard work. I like this type of book very much. It's not easy to read a book of this type in Sanjiang. I hope you have any dissatisfaction with this book. If you can, please bring it up. Don't criticize. It's not easy for the author either. Please do it and cherish it. Come on, author! I hope the author can write a better book of this type, preferably without random words, because I always feel embarrassed when I read it. The author also needs to improve his writing skills, come on! 😁

Can the author please stop making random strings? Haphazard strings will lead to collapse. It's still embarrassing. Just write it carefully and wait and see. If it collapses later, just give up.

Really, it's much more comfortable if you can't see the random strings of (School Apocalypse) later.

Dear author, dear book friends, are there any follow-up chapters for the heroine's battle pet system? Asking for a book

One Punch Man

I think it's pretty good. . . . .

The writing is a bit weak. The protagonist uses firearms to kill people in Naruto. If the earth's technology can adapt to the Naruto world, the protagonist himself or issues a mission for the players to bring nuclear bombs to blow up the Thunder Ninja Village or Konoha (anyway, the protagonist can get the nuclear bomb in biochemistry, anyway, the protagonist can travel between two worlds at will). The energy gained in this way will not be very high (unfortunately, the protagonist is somewhat mentally retarded, and no netizens have the imagination). Speaking of which, there is an outline. Don't write down whatever you think of.

Leave your name, gender, basic settings, or the characteristics you want, and the author will partially adopt it. Don't worry, whether it's a cross-dressing boss turning into a beauty or something, just feel free to post it! ! !

I can't stand watching Busujima Saeko anymore

There are so few updates to wait for, too few! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Author, stop being salty! ! ! ! !

Sooner or later he will be banned, what values ​​​​do you have, and the harem will never end

The pig's feet are like a woman he hasn't seen in decades. Goodbye and abandon the book.

This book of yours was forced to death by the author yourself. The Apocalypse is simply poisonous.

Two updates a day is both watery and scanty. If you are such a Buddhist, it is natural to have poor grades. You will not be given anything if you ask for anything. At the same time, I am reading several books that are updated quickly and have guaranteed quality. Alas, I will give it to you for a month. I hope you don't become a eunuch.

Inexplicably writing about a bunch of Naruto, is this a Naruto fanfic? This is a behind-the-scenes system article, not a fan. When you see the Naruto chapter, jump to it and give it a thumbs up

Isn't it good? Must add anime characters disgusting people

This is a science fiction novel in the supernatural zone disguised as an online game... The author dominates the third zone of Qidian!

He is just a nerd who suddenly gets extraordinary power and thinks he can manipulate the world at his fingertips. In fact, he is a man with little intelligence, no strength, and a little poison.

The first 20 chapters are ok, Chapter 21 is 10 lines per glance, and Chapter 22 is deleted.

The character of the protagonist. . . He is simply sick and not like a normal person

I don't understand. What's the point of adding a harem to a book about the mastermind behind the scenes? ? ? In order to add a harem, I directly changed the character's settings.

It's okay if the eunuch has a statement, but many book authors simply stop changing their vests and lose contact.

After reading about 30 chapters, it is a complete failure. The protagonists in the anime can appear, but you are the mastermind behind the scenes. What are you doing? Your IQ and B-level have plummeted. Do you want to accept one after another? You can completely let players come. It is equivalent to NPCs in the game and even rewards for outstanding players. It is so poisonous. I think most readers of this kind of article will take the perspective of some players, especially the prominent players.

I have read the author's previous books, which are good. I hope to keep playing well. There is a shortcoming in this book. I hope the author will pay attention to it. The protagonist has a low sense of presence and the background is blurred. In fact, you don't need those players. The main thing is to maintain the sense of presence of the protagonist and your old style. Get more girls.

I originally liked watching the behind-the-scenes drama, but the personality of the protagonist always makes me unable to stand it He never regards people from other worlds as human beings. He likes two-dimensional characters and only likes their appearance. But if Yako Busujima mutates into a monster, his character will be discarded at that time The development of the game is slow and there is no new idea. I think of the dungeon players next door, who treat players as tools instead of a story.

I found a science fiction novel disguised as an online game in the supernatural department

It's very interesting to write, I like it very much, and I look forward to more exciting stories in the future. 🙂🙂