I Can Track Everything

It was very interesting in the early stage, but in the middle stage, I had to increase the depth and implement heavenly suppression. I couldn't understand it. I felt uncomfortable watching it. I said goodbye halfway through. Goodbye.

The first part is obviously good, but why does it become more and more vicious later on? He was being hunted by others and could hardly save his life, yet he went to save some people who had nothing to do with him or who were hostile to him. Do you think that after you saved them, they will be merciless when it's time to kill you? It's right to think that the human race is the main one, but why are you so brainless? Maybe some people like to watch it, but most people hate the Virgin

The early stage is relatively happy, but unfortunately the transition in the middle stage is boring. The later stage is more imaginative and exciting. However, the author still needs to practice. The appearance and role of some characters are often one-time. Commonly known as a supporting role, but the protagonist's brothers, wife and daughter, these must not be forgotten. Their role is reflected in the emotional aspect, which is often the most touching and can add some different excitement to the work. Now this book is roughly on the main line. The plot is okay, but there are no more exciting embellishments, such as emotional drama - it can be about family, love and friendship. Or you can add some of the author's own views on the world and express them in the play in a subtle way. Ang ang ang, the author should practice how to highlight the expression of emotions. The love with the heroine was a bit embarrassing to me, and the friendship with Feifeng Fairy King was also a bit embarrassing. The expression of brotherhood is very thin, mostly in psychological description, which is relatively weak. In short, I like the main plot better. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write the emotions well. Well, you can practice this aspect in the next book (if you have better ideas, stick to yourself), and in the next book I hope you can become a god👀 Also, you need to continue to practice basic writing (the revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard)

I ordered them all. I have ordered all the books to be honest, not many.

To be honest, I enjoyed watching it. The protagonist is pretty good, so give it a thumbs up to the author! ! !

In order to cooperate with the protagonist's pretense, all the supporting actors and actresses around him are of inferior intelligence. When the protagonist wants to pretend, he instantly becomes smarter and engages in all kinds of funny conversations with the supporting actors. I don't even know what to say anymore

In fact, I think it's okay. I've read each chapter. On a 10-point scale, it should be an 8. I've found something I can watch for a long time. Ascension is too convenient, obviously increasing the progress randomly. Enhancing realms is all a matter of hard work, don't be enlightened, the rise is like a rocket. In this case, it makes no sense that only the protagonist can rise so fast, and the elders can pass on the skills faster It feels like the author wants to finish the book as soon as possible

I just finished watching The Lower World, so the demon queen is really gone? ? ?

It feels like I've been in a state of mindless exhilaration since Chapter 8.

Not bad, it looks very enjoyable and worth recommending!

Good book. I'm not a porn star. The author's writing skills need to be improved, but the story really appealed to me.

I haven't read much yet, and I just saw a little bit earlier in the book, about playing villains in the stone forest after getting a chance, which is a bit toxic. I hope it will be better later on.

Well written, give it a try, keep up the good work

The writing is pretty good, at least I read it in one sitting

Hahaha, I read it in one go. It's quite funny. Looking forward to the update. . . .

Come on, author! ! 🌹🌹🌹

The most important thing is not to be a licking dog

So far, the writing is quite good. I hope the protagonist will kill decisively and not be a licker or a dark person. . .

Why do the books look good but the grades are not good? First of all, most of the system articles are cool articles, and there are too many cool articles in Qidian. Furthermore, the beginning of the book is indeed a systematic and refreshing routine, and it is the fantasy path in the later stage. Here comes the most important question. In the early stage, it attracted readers who like to read systematic and exciting books. These readers like books that have no twists and turns, from the earth to the sky, from the earth to the universe. Later, the writing style changed again, and I wrote some things that obeyed human nature and gave up on the fun (such as the death of the demon god, Bai Dongsheng's ascension, seclusion on the island, etc.) And later even the system was rarely used. In this way, a contradiction arises, and the readers attracted in the early stage do not like this change at all. Just like you like sweet tofu curd, if you buy a bowl with sugar sprinkled on the surface, you will naturally think that it is sweet. But halfway through eating, I discovered that apart from the sugar on the surface, it was salty underneath 😡, so I either cursed or abandoned the book. Those who liked the style of the later period gave up on the cool writing style of the previous system at the beginning. I think this is one of the reasons why the results of a book that is obviously well written are not ideal. In my opinion, if this book is updated a little more every day, it would be enough to make it into the top ten. To be honest, I prefer the latter one. I read the first one because it's free and to pass the time. I think no matter what kind of book you read, you still need some logic. The author's writing style is also good. I really hope this book does well! Blessings!

Extremely poisonous, irritating, mentally retarded characters, clichéd plot, severe water character, what the hell

The biggest problem with this book is that the first part is for one type of readers; the second half is for another type of readers! ! You're a bit dissatisfied with both sides.

It was good before the 300th chapter, but after that it was no different from an ordinary short story. The protagonist begins to become inexplicably hypocritical, hesitant and hesitant, just like a **. Don't tell me you're good at it, I'm a reader. If the refrigerator doesn't cool well, why should I build my own refrigerator?

This book is poisonous starting from the plant demon. Why is this happening? Because the protagonist's cheats are so unbelievable that even if you want to slowly play the realm, you can grab all the natural and earthly treasures at your fingertips, and you can't be steady. So we forcefully create a racial antagonism. But there is a very "natural" problem: forcing lions to eat meat, forcing fish to fly in the sky, and other practices that go against nature are called "evil". So, aren't you messing around by asking so many practicing beings not to take spiritual objects from plants and trees? The reason why humans and demons fight so fiercely and cannot destroy each other is because these races are seeking to gain living space through self-strengthening. You grass and tree elves, who are born with treasures, are still unable to strengthen your own race to survive. Do you really blame Heaven and blame other races? Nothing is fair. Humans have brains, monsters have blood, and herbs are inherently valuable. No one is worse than anyone else. If you can't use them yourself, who is to blame? This book can be read by the Taoist master. The random writing in the back is not a question of whether there is an outline, but the author's own lack of ability and experience, and he wrote a lot of facts instead of facts.

He is an invincible piece of shit, a second-rate guy, he can't skip a level, he is always jumping on the edge of a knife, and he is beaten to death by people of high level at every turn, so many people say he is invincible.

Logically speaking, the performance of this book should be quite good. Why is this so? Not enough publicity? I rarely see this book in the book lists I have read, no wonder there are so few people... It's a pity

I just finished reading the Lower Realm Chapter (War between Humans and Demons). To be honest, I don't understand what the poisonous points of the novel are at all. My book friends are too violent 🤔 On the contrary, what the book friends said about Long Aotianliu who kills all the way and is really poisonous to me... If everything can be solved by killing people alone, how can there be any friendship or benevolence? Perhaps, I am only suitable for reading "little white articles" 🤤. Maybe they are very white, but this group of people who sacrifice their lives for the sake of the community and the future generations are really cute. I feel like this is the kind of writing that makes me feel passionate about reading it. So far, the only poisonous points in my opinion are the excessive routine at the beginning and the old thief Bai. I can't feel the poison at all in other places. Alas, actually I don't know what to say, I just want to say that this book is quite good. But it may also be because I have little experience. After all... I have only read six books at Qidian (excluding the cheating ones), and none of them are famous on the list. Maybe I don't know Qidian's routines yet.

Some people say that the protagonist is the Virgin, and some people say that the protagonist is inhumane... Sure enough, there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people? This is considered a good portrayal of the characters in the author's works 😁 Everyone's stance on the same thing is different, and what they see and feel is not exactly the same. As the same saying goes, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables; Whether tomatoes are fruits or vegetables, it all depends on each book lover's preference! Sanmao, come on, come on!

OMG, I haven't watched it in months and you're done. It's true that things are different and people are different, but what's even more coincidental is Red Mist Warrior, I'm from My Talent Full Strength, I didn't expect it was also written by you, I just finished reading it yesterday. 🤓🤭

It's been a long time since I wanted to read a novel so much. This novel simply made me feel sick. I still want a monthly pass for a book like this.

I came back to read this book after a long time. It's really good and interesting. I hope the author will write more funny books in the future. This is what the author is good at.