Realistic Monster Game

I have read more than 200 chapters. Let me tell you my feelings. If you don't like it, I will complain! The creativity of this book is really good, the writing style is also good, and overall it is very innovative! However, when I saw the middle, I realized that there was a problem... The plot in the early stage was normal, but in the middle stage, it became obvious that the author was a little out of his depth. Why? Personally, I think it's because I'm not creative enough! The book describes the strength of the country too much. The name of the book is a game. It can be written according to the game routines, such as: occupying territory, human beings fighting each other, attracting big bosses, building cities, and finally saving the country (refer to the routines of apocalyptic games) ... But in the middle period, the country was written too strong. The spiritual power was only one year old when it was full of power. However, all kinds of spiritual power speed cars and spiritual power weapons came out. This resulted in the country being the most powerful in the world, blocking all plot paths, except for treason! So the question becomes, what to write next? I only have to write about tasks, catching demon souls, and team battles... But I have seen these things in the early stage, and I have begun to get tired of it... I can still write about it in the middle stage, but what should I do in the later stage? ? Summary: A shocking start, no new ideas in the mid-term, and collapse in the later stage! ——The author's layout is too small!

I like the setting very much, but the writing of the fights is too awkward, and the content starting from the three kings of Chenghai gives people a very strange sense of incongruity.

I finally finished two new chapters, why did I stop again? It's a very nice book. The background, world settings, levels, and map settings are all very reasonable. It's a work that has the potential to become a god. It's a pity that the author gave up.

I've read more than 70 chapters, but I'm still complaining about it. There are a lot of loopholes in the author's logic, and there are some problems with the protagonist's character. There are also problems with the description of the character's character. He is extremely reckless, the mysterious Jiang Wentao is mysterious and inexplicable, Fatty Guo is a logic genius, and the female anchor Xiaolu is also very poisonous. When you fight the first boss, all weaklings come to join in the fun. The protagonist comes with whatever he lacks. It's not that he can't come, it's that he lacks medicine in the previous sentence, and he can contribute some medicine in the next paragraph. However, I think the subject matter is novel, the plot is compact, and there are many bad points, but the new author will gradually get better. I think it can be regarded as a good source of food for pets.

I hope the update speed can be faster, recommended

This book has a bit of a twist at the beginning (after all, it collides with a certain game setting, haha). As long as you read a few more chapters, you will feel that it is a good work. I recommend it. The descriptions of the protagonist and the demon soul are very good, very warm, and the focus is not on the stallion story, so you can follow it with peace of mind.

Although the previous writing is average, the more I read later, the better it gets. I'm addicted. Why did I stop updating?

The subject matter of the novel is good. If there are no serious poisonous points, it may be because the author's writing style is limited. This seems to be a novice YY novel four or five years ago. In some places, the IQ is forced to lower due to incompetence in writing. Sometimes the male protagonist is a bit mentally retarded. The setting of the male protagonist should be a more narcissistic and naughty one. But in the first few chapters, you have to be narcissistic and emphasize the setting. If it is too much, it will appear very deliberate and pretentious. If you want to relax, read the rigorous one, but don't read the novel.

I'm particularly curious, why don't you tell your family how you got the special ability? You've already read Chapter 64, the agency, and your friends don't know how to download the Demon Sealing on your mobile phone. Regardless of whether you have talent or not, if you have more spiritual power and resistance, you won't know how to die if you encounter something strange, and then the protagonist will join the Qidian Orphanage...

Originally I didn't want to write about it because it's already written very clearly in the book, but maybe some of you didn't pay attention while reading the book, so I'll explain it briefly. (Please also stop scolding me casually) Regarding the Ghost and God Sect, many people previously thought that the Ghost and God Sect was too strong and its early development was too rapid. These problems will be introduced later. The predecessor of the Ghost and God Sect is the largest underground organization, Black Nest, with a large number of forces behind it. The plot of the spirit group with more than 100 pictures is indeed a bit weak (that is only the spirit group stationed in the city), but if you look at it, the real combat power of the spirit group is revealed after the spirit group stationed in the wild appears. Because of the threat of demon spirits in the early stage, the main combat team of the spirit group is stationed in the wild. (More details later) There is also resting at night in the secret realm. I should have written in the book that the secret realm at night is extremely dangerous. With the strength of the male protagonist at the time, it is basically free to run safely at night, so I took a chance, but I lost the bet. I am just saying this here to give you a brief introduction. Many of the contents have some foreshadowing, so you can wait a moment. Finally, I am really grateful for everyone's support. As a newbie, I am working very hard to write this book again. . Thank you very much! ! ! PS: It would be better if I don't have random fragrances (●°u°●)​"

You can talk about all the monsters you have imagined in your heart. I think everyone has imagined such a monster, god, ghost, or spirit that only belongs to them, right? First of all, I admit that I am such a person who likes fantasy😓

I strongly recommend the author to write down this book. This book is really good and a rare good book.

The ghost sect is definitely a failure, and the secret realm is scum, bad reviews.

I have been waiting for your update. I have never waited so long for a book. If you really can't update, just post a single chapter to explain the break. Every morning when I get up, I will see that you haven't updated. I am disappointed every time. Even so, don't just post a single chapter, so that people like me can give up waiting for updates.

Are there any similar books, about fighting ghosts and the like?

Here we go again, so many years have passed and I still can't forget this book

The idea is good, but the writing is not good. The author made the protagonist look like a clown.

I'm so impressed, I still miss him after two years 😭

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the author is really a noob. He doesn't hide his identity and exposes it directly to the public. Even if the country doesn't mess with you, other players will.

Is there any hope? This makes me very embarrassed. I want to see but I'm afraid you won't update me. I'm halfway there.

Not many people will appreciate the protagonist's funny personality! So neurotic! ! ! !

It's been 28 days... I started to read it when you updated more than 30 chapters... If you feel that your grades are not good and this book is too eunuch... Then I will not read it. If you have something to do and you can't update it for the time being... You can explain it to us. We will understand when people have difficulties... It is really a eunuch, so there is nothing we can do... I won't waste my money.

Cut off the roots again? ? ? 🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

The subject matter is good and not too toxic, but the writing style is average, and the content is like an assembly line, with no ups and downs. It is often a soliloquy comment, which makes people unable to take it in. I hope the author will work hard to improve his skills. Forget this one, I look forward to the author's next book.

I took the time to take a look, it's great that the author is finally alive, I burst into tears 😭😭😭

It's been three years, and I've never forgotten it. It's the best animal-control novel in my mind.

Grave Sweeping, what a pity for a book with such a good subject

It's a pity that the author really doesn't write anymore. I really like this book. I can only continue it in the future or make a new one of the same type based on this one.