Cultivation Begins with Tragedy

The dialogue in the first chapter is awkward. If you don't mind missing half a word, you can consider cutting out the "war" you recalled and put it as a chapter preface related to the work. At first glance, I thought there were three protagonists, but in fact there are one protagonist and two supporting roles. This is also a newcomer's problem. After a few chapters, there are too many characters, and the protagonist has not left enough impression on people. Then, I think it can be simpler. It is best not to make it too complicated in the first few chapters. You can try to be more relaxed and don't keep mentioning how awesome you were in the past. Today's fantasy novels What is more popular is system data flow, and for your kind, the supporting role is the rebirth of the strong, but I haven't seen the protagonist yet. The protagonist, in the first few chapters, readers must remember him. Some aspects about the protagonist are completely skipped, but the supporting characters are always present. If it is a tree now, you have two branches, and you go farther and farther on the other two branches, and grow a small branch "Ye Qingcheng" again The protagonist is not going to have a role until Chapter 7, so your book does not have three golden chapters. (The number of words is too small, I can't see the protagonist's line) Simple line (Business text) Background (can be chapter preface, country, power) → Protagonist (name, don't use children or teenagers as titles) → Jin Finger (system, rebirth, time travel, etc.) → Enemy (enemies in the mid-term) → Villain (villain's mini-boss in the early stage) → Sidekick (the villain's thugs, subordinates) → Sidekick → Villain → Change pictures... Seedlings, the main line is not clear, and I can't tell. Small problem Change "xxx." To: "xxx." Use the (:) symbol, don't miss it. Newcomers don't have to be too anxious and unfold the story slowly. If the number of words is too small, no one will read it, because the seedlings are not sure whether it can be updated. Moreover, if the number of words is too small, it will be more tiring to follow. Whenever, just plan out the protagonist, cheat, main line, and short-term goals of the book, that's it. Knowledge Points I took a look at your update, it's 18,000 for 6 chapters. Let's talk about something off-topic. During the new book period, if the new book is less than 50,000 words, it is recommended to update 2,000 words a day. If it is more than 50,000 words, update 2,000 words a day. After signing the contract, it is recommended. On the basis of 4,000 words, you can add 2,000 words, because editing is relatively slow. There are too many fantasy books. Hundreds of new books a day, it takes a long time. I can find your book, but you update it too quickly. The contract may be more than 100,000 words later. By the time you reach the recommended position, it will be on the shelves, that is, it will be on the shelves naked. Subscriptions will be rushed to death... Testing the water and promoting it To put it simply, it still has a great impact on the author. Try to test the water and squeeze into the top three in the same period. There is still a lot to say, let's stop talking and come on.

Collect supporting name stickers! Sometimes I feel a headache when choosing a name because it feels like any name is too popular! If you guys have good names, please write them down below. I hope even the supporting cast can have different names 😁

Can The Eunuch also be included in the new book list?

This 31-chapter book is still on the new book list, which is awesome.

Congratulations on finishing the book! Throw flowers! I hope the next book will not be in the palace again! It is recommended that you write the main text after the outline is almost complete. After writing the first ten chapters, go back to the first chapter to see if there is anything that needs to be revised. After writing about twenty chapters, read it again against the outline. If there are no flaws or contradictions, publish it again. The outline starts with drawing the bones, then the tendons, and finally the flesh and blood. If you can draw the hair well, it will be a masterpiece! I wish the next one a success! Why do I say so much? Because the author found an editor to "complete the book" and is very worthy of these investors. He is an inexperienced but responsible author! Come on.

The old man's new book "Martial Arts": When darkness comes, God will make you crazy first...

We have a good mass base and are popular, so come on! We are all newbies and we support you🤝

Cultivation starts with comedy, even if it's tragic, it's the point of laughter, 🤓

Are you awesome for being ranked second?

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Since it is a tragedy, why practice?

The setting sun is like blood. The originally shocking sound of fighting in the plain battlefield has gradually faded away. The dazzling yellow light is mixed with a shocking crimson, just like the red blood of hundreds of tribes on the plain battlefield, enchanting and beautiful. All kinds of mutilated weapons were randomly discarded on the ground, and blood gathered unbridled into a lake in the large pit that the extremely powerful man accidentally blasted with his magical power. There were corpses all around, piled up into mountains. There are the rising human race, the perfect God race, the desolate Desolate race, the innate supreme Dragon race, the water race with all kinds of strange things, the physically powerful demon race, the phoenix race reborn from the ashes, the giant race as huge as the mountains... As long as you need it, you can collect the corpse specimens of almost all the peak races on the continent here, but few of them are complete. "Is this the war that made you the Emperor of Heaven? Brother!" A young man in white clothes, no more than fourteen or fifteen years old, stood in front of a tombstone with the words "Tomb of the Emperor" engraved on it. Looking at the battlefield in front of him where the fighting had ended, he asked the young man in white clothes on the right who was slightly younger than him with a puzzled face. "You are right! This is the corner of the final decisive battle between the Alliance of Humans and Gods and the Alliance of Hundreds of Races nine million years ago!" The person who answered him was not the boy in white on his right, but another boy in white on his left who was still a little younger than him. The three young men in white clothes in front of the tombstone all come from the Ye family, one of the seven major human families on the Emperor's Sky Continent. Among them, the young man in white who spoke first and had a pretty face was named Ye Chen. However, although he came from three major families, he was just a mortal who could only stay on the ninth level of physical training. Just born fifteen years ago, due to some reasons, he completely lost the spiritual roots necessary for becoming a warrior on this continent. From then on, he was judged by everyone around him as having no hope of becoming a warrior for life. However, he did not regret the reason for losing his spiritual roots, nor did he give up on finding a way to become a warrior because of the judgments around him. Just because there are people in this world who never give up on him no matter how weak he is, people who will believe and support him no matter what his thoughts are, people who will protect him unconditionally no matter what the cost, and people who he wants to protect no matter what the cost he has to pay. He owed them too much, and he wanted to pay it back, but he couldn't afford it now. He is just a mortal, a mortal who has lost his cultivation qualifications, a mortal who is so weak that he is inconspicuous. Therefore, if he wants to pay back, he can only become stronger, only become a warrior, and only come here - the entrance to the Tomb of Heaven, the tombstone of the Tomb of the Emperor. Only then did he have the opportunity to repay everything he wanted to pay back and protect everything he wanted to protect. The second-placed boy in white, whom Ye Chen calls his eldest brother and has a perfect appearance, is named Ye Tian. He is the reincarnation of the "Emperor of Heaven" who was once the number one person in the God Realm. Thirteen years ago, when he was just over a year old in this life, he discovered and picked up Ye Chen who was on the verge of death on a cold night due to his special ability. From then on, he regarded Ye Chen as his biological brother. Ten years ago, in order to let Ye Chen have all the emotions that a normal person should have, he was brought into the Ye family of the seven major families, which changed his original destiny time and time again. This time, he was the one who suggested that Ye Chen enter the sky tomb to find opportunities for cultivation. He can be said to be the most respected and important person Ye Chen has respected in the past fifteen years. The third young man in white is Ye Chen's second brother Ye Dao. He is also a reincarnation like his eldest brother Ye Tianyuan, and he also has the perfect appearance to kill men, women, old and young. In his previous life, he was the "Wuji Heavenly Lord", one of the three great Heavenly Lords in the God Realm. At the same time, he was also the current young master of the Ye family. Ten years ago, due to some reasons, Ye Tian and Ye Chen became three brothers. The reason why Ye Tian and Ye Chen were not disturbed much by outsiders during these ten years was all due to his care. Ye Tian, ​​who did not answer Ye Chen's question, began to walk towards the battlefield exposed in the sunset in front of him. He stopped walking only when he was ten feet away from the tombstone. He stretched out his right hand with a sad face, trying to touch everything on the battlefield ahead. But at this time, on the battlefield where the sound of fighting had long gone away, leaving only corpses and mutilated weapons everywhere, which looked a bit desolate, a breeze suddenly blew by, and the corpses and mutilated weapons everywhere turned into dust all over the sky, and finally went away with the wind, as if to tell the young man that they were just traces of history after all. After the wind passed, the battlefield that was originally littered with corpses suddenly turned into a grassland with hundreds of silver wolves chasing a herd of silver-horned sheep. The surprisingly large Goshawk in the sky is also eyeing the sheep, trying to steal food from the wolves. In addition, there are many ordinary small beasts on the surrounding grasslands. Everything seems to be just a vibrant grassland, and it is completely impossible to tell that the largest decisive battle in the history of the lower world has occurred here, because except for the corpses and weapons that turned into dust, the desolate plain landform that was originally destroyed by the war has completely returned to its original state. "Can you bring everything back to the Wind of Silence thousands of years ago? It's a pity that you can't bring back their lives!" Ye Tian looked at the perfect scene in front of him with two lines of tears on his face, then turned around with a self-deprecating smile, looked at Ye Chen who looked surprised after seeing his tears and said: "You are wrong, that was not a war that made me successful, that was a war The war that made me lose everything. That's why I brought you here to let you gain the strength you want to protect everything you want to protect in the war that will happen in the future!" Ye Chen didn't understand what he had lost as the Emperor of Heaven, which made Ye Tian, who had never shed tears in front of him and always looked cynical no matter what he encountered, so sad that he shed tears. Could those be his companions and relatives nine million years ago? He thought so! But in the legends about the Emperor of Heaven that have been circulated in the world, there has never been any statement that he lost any relatives or companions. Only his great achievements are praised in the world, and only his great appearance that single-handedly ended the 10,000-year-long war nine million years ago! Ye Tian himself never mentioned anything about his previous life in front of him. He told him that it was enough to remember that his name was Ye Tian and that he was his eldest brother! So even though he was curious, he didn't want to touch Ye Tian's wound again! And at this time, Ye Chen felt that it was better to pretend that he had not seen anything. He believed that Ye Tian, ​​who usually maintained a cynical image in front of him, did not want him to see him like this. Then, Ye Chen, who didn't want to see the fragile appearance of the person he respected the most, turned around and looked at the entrance of his trip's goal - the tombstone of the Heavenly Tomb with the four words "Tomb of the Emperor" engraved on it. The tombstone is very ordinary, only more than three meters high. The four big characters "Tomb of the Emperor" written on it are also written very casually, and there is nothing extraordinary about it. In addition, there is a dirt bag less than two meters high behind the monument, which makes the tomb look like it was just erected recently. Such an ordinary tomb will make people feel inconspicuous no matter where it is placed. But it is such a tomb that connects the biggest legend spread in the world-Emperor Tian, ​​the only person in history who is called "Tian" by the world. That was a person who was considered by the world to be beyond the reach of even the Emperor of Heaven. Even the name of the current continent was changed to the Emperor Tian Continent because of him, which shows how much influence he had on the world. His origins are mysterious, the things he does are unbelievable, and the power he possesses is completely beyond common sense. It only took more than two hundred years for him to disappear from the mainland, but he left behind various legends that no one can do anymore. Just like liberating the human race in one sentence, creating and establishing the divine realm, opening up the divine realm, and giving eternal life to all things in the world... And the emperor's tomb here is where his legend ends, and it is also the last thing he did before disappearing. It is said that ten million years ago, the Emperor used a magical power that was beyond the understanding of the world - the Wind of Time and Silence to turn the plain with a radius of thousands of miles into a forbidden land - the Time of Silence Plain, and built himself an extremely ordinary-looking tomb in the middle of the plain - the Emperor's Tomb, which the world likes to call the Sky Tomb. Emperor Tian disappeared. Since then, there has been no trace of Emperor Tian in the world, but no one has believed that he is really dead. From now on, in this plain, anything that was not on the plain when the Emperor used this magical power will turn into dust in time as long as it is blown by the wind of silence at a specific time, and everything on the plain will return to what it was before the Emperor used his magical power. At the same time, due to the influence of this magical power, some scenes that happened on this plain in history will occasionally be replayed on this plain, and then blown away by the wind of silence at a specific time every day. Only everything within ten feet of the tombstone will not be affected by the wind of time and silence, and the entrance to the tomb on the tombstone will only open and remain open for six hours after each time the wind of time and silence passes. "Second Brother! Has the entrance to the Heavenly Tomb been opened on the tombstone now? Why can't I see any changes on the tombstone?" Ye Chen looked at the tombstone without any changes after the wind of silence and asked Ye Dao beside him with some doubts. "It has been opened. The space transmission on the tombstone is very special. It seems that there is no change on the tombstone, but in fact it has now become a special space door. You can now walk in directly from the front of the tombstone without any hindrance!" Ye Dao explained to Ye Chen seriously. "Really?" After listening to Ye Dao's explanation, Ye Chen asked again with a suspicious face. Although Ye Dao's explanation seemed to be without any problems, Ye Chen didn't believe it at all. Especially the serious look on his face made it even more difficult for him to believe it, because every time he showed this look, nothing good happened. Whenever he didn't pay attention at this time, he might be tricked by him and Ye Tian into doubting his life. Moreover, some of the behaviors of these two legendary figures in the past ten years or so often make him feel that his IQ has been seriously insulted. They usually do not have the majesty and magnanimity of being the Emperor and Lord of Heaven. They usually love to create hatred for him and try to trick him in every way. Sometimes it makes him seriously doubt the war that lasted for ten thousand years nine million years ago. The reason why the Alliance of Hundreds of Clans was defeated was probably due to the influence of the halo of the two protagonists at that era. The Alliance of Hundreds of Clans was severely suppressed by the aura of their protagonists. Therefore, they were delayed for ten thousand years without being killed by the opponent, which led to a comeback in the end! "Really, even if you don't believe me, you should believe in Emperor Tian! Can I do anything else on the tombstone he erected? Or you can ask your elder brother if what I said is right?" Seeing that Ye Chen didn't believe what he said, Ye Dao said again with absolute certainty. "It's true, my second brother didn't lie to you! We won't trick you for such an important matter as entering the Emperor's Tomb!" Ye Tian, ​​who was standing behind Ye Chen, also returned to his usual smiling self at this time, and confirmed that Ye Dao's words were correct. "Forget it! I might as well believe the pigs if I believe you! I'd better try it myself!" Ye Chen became even more disbelieving after listening to their words, so he decided to try it himself. He took a few steps to the tombstone, took out his only remaining spirit stone fragment in his arms, and threw it at the four characters on the tombstone with some distress. The spirit stone fragment did not bounce back as he imagined, but went directly into the tombstone. Ye Chen looked at this scene and smiled in disbelief: "I didn't expect you guys to be reliable sometimes!" Then he tried to put his hand into the tombstone. Sure enough, his hand was not blocked by the stone tablet and reached directly into the tombstone without any hindrance. Ye Chen had to admit in his heart that his eldest and second brother really didn't cheat him this time. Just after one breath, his smile became a little stiff. After two breaths, his smile became completely stiff. After three breaths, the smile on his face disappeared and turned dark. The reason why he was like this was that after he confirmed that Ye Tianye Dao's words were true. He wanted to pull his hand out, but found that his hand seemed to be stuck, and he couldn't pull it out even if he tried to pull it out.