Shaolin in Another World

It's a poisonous batch. Sometimes I can't read the sentences clearly. I won't mention the typos. The wording is completely made up.

There is a problem with the mentality of the male protagonist at the beginning. He has a high vision but a low hand. It would be good if he has martial arts, but is he not strong in martial arts? Then you uninstalled it directly, and allowed me to serve as a historical general to compete with fantasy martial arts? It makes my head look big.

It's been on the shelves for almost half a month, and you've updated 10 chapters. I'm going to ask you if you don't, who will? ! ! ! ! !

This update is awesome👍👍👍👍👍🙏

Three recommendation votes, one monthly vote has been voted for the author. You should hurry up and update. I still have three monthly votes, so vote for them all.

I don't know why there are so many negative reviews on this book, I almost got scared. I advise the author to remember to delete the reviews. Too many bad reviews will affect the book's performance. Overall, it's okay. A few bugs are acceptable. The characters are not brainless either. Come on, author.

Chapter 1: Discourage resignation, infinitely despise gold fingers, and be able to live again. Background: The little beggar does not want to change his life, so he only complains about his own system**. He has no awareness that he is just a rookie who has just time-traveled. He cannot see the role of his background as a top student in his previous life.

After reading the beginning, I actually don't quite understand the plot of treating a system as a routine but still despising it after time travel... In my previous life, I was often hit by a car. It's a good thing to live again. I'm lucky to have a golden finger. No matter how much you don't like it, you can only use this golden finger. So why pretend that you have many choices and dislike it? But this is actually a problem in many time-travel novels. The male protagonist inexplicably dislikes the only golden finger that can save his life (although it will definitely be reversed later). Where does this dislike the mantou who is not a beggar who is not well-dressed and well-fed? ? If you don't like it, don't use it, just rely on your skills from the previous life to become stronger (although I don't see the use)

There is a poisonous point at the beginning of this book. It is hard not to complain about it. After practicing the magic skills of the metal system to its peak, it is no more than the tiger idiot Xu Chu. Oh My God? Is Xu Chu so powerful? Let's not talk about others. When Yang Guo fought against the Mongolian army, he could take the enemy's head out of ten thousand troops. Could Xu Chu do that? According to the setting, Xu Chu has no internal strength. At most, he has strong physical strength and strong martial arts. There are many warriors at the same level as him, and there are even more inferior ones. After practicing internal strength together, will he be stronger than ordinary warriors? Then this inner strength is too cheap. Qiao Feng defeated the Liao army and beat them to pieces with the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. Is there not a few fierce generals in the hundreds of thousands of Liao army who could compare with Xu Chu? Even if not, there is always something close. To sum up, the author still needs to think more carefully when writing a book. Don't take it for granted. Maybe it's just me being picky.

The protagonist is really low. He graduated from 985 and traveled through time just like a gangster who graduated from junior high school. He even cursed at the system and looked down on him in various ways. He had three poisonous hair 😐

The author's writing style is quite good, and the book is also quite beautiful. However, I personally think there are a few questions that I would like to mention. First of all, martial arts is about understanding. Of course it doesn't matter if the protagonist has a systematic direct initiation, but the speed of several younger brothers and sisters is too fast. It took us a long time to learn radio gymnastics when we were in school, let alone practice martial arts. It is obvious that the author is forcing the plot to let the younger brothers and sisters keep up with the protagonist. The same goes for practicing Boy Kung Fu, it seems that martial arts is not difficult at all. Secondly, there is no god in the martial arts written by the author. For him, martial arts should be just a tool or skill. In fact, when writing martial arts novels, it is more important to highlight people or martial arts. Just like Qiao Feng comes to mind when mentioning the Eighteen Palms of the Dragon, and Zhang Wuji comes to mind when mentioning the Nine Sun Magic Kung Fu. There must always be one outstanding person in terms of martial arts and people, so that it can impress people. It's a pity that the protagonist's punch is just a punch, without any fancy, without any sound and light effects, it is really in line with reality. Martial arts and martial arts should include both martial arts and xia, but this book basically doesn't have them. The author created a completely farming-style protagonist, and the characteristics of the martial arts protagonist and supporting characters are basically invisible. So, the identification is completed. This is a pretty good systematic farming and hegemony-style novel in the guise of martial arts.

You don't care if you cheat, you can teach other people to cheat too. Once you teach them, you will know how to do it. After a while, you will know your strength and secret strength. You are really invincible.

I may be scolded for saying something, but I also want to say that when I first read Jin Gu's martial arts novels, I started to like them a little bit. They include fighting moves, brothel inns, debauchery, love and hatred, and now what? The martial arts moves have become third-rate, second-rate, first-rate super and the like. I don't know exactly how powerful they are. Anyway, the author said that when they are powerful, they are powerful. From powerful people to powerful moves, this is very strange. Now I am confused. Is martial arts more important or people more important? In this case, why are there still people like Fu Hongxue and Jing Wuming? As for the brothel inn, it has completely become a continuation of the political struggle. If you take out a woman, you will be a boss, a witch, and you will fall in love with the protagonist at first sight. What is even more frightening is that she is unruly and unruly. It has completely turned into a case-solving, taking and doing things. The whole thing is a suspense masterpiece, and the case is very stiff. The writing is not embarrassing, and the reading must be mindless, right? Love, hate, and hatred can be outrageous. I hate you all the time, and I don't know why I love you. I can just draw my sword at you without any reason, and then it becomes like the one who strikes first is definitely a reckless man, and the one who strikes last is definitely the old silver coin! I was puzzled, how do people with weak brains practice martial arts? Doesn't this stuff all mean that the poor are poor in culture and rich in martial arts? Are all poor people smart? Are rich people stupid? Of course, none of the above has anything to do with this book, because this book is well written, (yes! That's right! I'm just bragging, because I'm afraid someone will scold me, after all, I'm just complaining!) Finally! ! ! Let me ask you a question. It is understandable that the internal strength is graded. Why is the martial arts also graded? And without any explanation, they just say (Wow, this martial arts is really powerful. The second-rate ones are better than the third-rate ones.) What on earth is going on with this kind of thing? The one who loves to eat peanuts must be Ah Fei. He can't do anything but draw a sword quickly. How can this be calculated? What happened when Jian Shisan was beaten to death several times? Does Zhongyuan Yidianhong have the last sword? Could the author of this book be a eunuch?

I really hate that when writing something about Buddhism, the pig's feet are so vulgar and 'rogue', even though Buddhism also has its bad points. According to traditional martial arts novels, Buddhist martial arts require enlightenment and Zen. Basic martial arts may not require it, but later more advanced martial arts do.

Visual inspection of the author to enter the palace 😏

A grand and wonderful development story of Jianghu gradually begins.

Learning Shaolin Kung Fu is called Shaolin. What does this have to do with the title of the book? It's so disgusting, why not just call the Weihai Gang from another world, who cares about Shaolin?

The writing is very good, but it's too slow. It's getting fattened up, but I'm afraid I'll be fattened to death.

The martial arts is too low, and there is no sense of excitement or excitement. After looking through the catalog, I saw that apart from the main character who practiced tendon easing and marrow cleansing, the rest were all rubbish martial arts. Huo Gong Tutuo learned secretly and didn't even know the internal skills and mental techniques. At least he was familiar with the powerful Vajra Finger and Vajra Palm. Does it mean that Shaolin Kung Fu must be practiced from the basics? That is a promotion ladder for ordinary disciples. After the protagonist has practiced the Yi Jin Jing, he still needs to practice this garbage? For example, Zhang Wuji has mastered the Nine Yang Magic Skills. A glance at the Dragon Claw Hand makes him better than Kongxing. You Tanzhi can compete with Qiao Feng in the Yi Jin Jing. Jiumo Zhi has a small Wuxiang Kung Fu. Shaolin stunts can be used at will... The internal strength is first. Just practice some well-known martial arts moves. Author, are you a Shaolin soft article? I wrote almost 200 chapters about Shaolin's garbage martial arts of chopping wood and carrying water disciples. It needs to be more realistic. There are no less than 200 kinds of martial arts named Shaolin on Baidu. They are the famous 72 stunts on the second-rate background of various martial arts. You still want to do it in the later stage?

Is this a serious author? This update is too fucking annoying. Is there going to be a eunuch? If there is a real eunuch, I will give up. If there is no eunuch, can you update it quickly? ! ! ! ! ! !

This book is interesting to read. It is a new author and the results are not bad. Why is Dongfang Invincible?

I think if this book is updated normally, it will at least be a fine product.

As a bookworm for many years, this book was very enjoyable to read. The martial arts from another world have not been revealed too much yet, but the Shaolin martial arts of the protagonist has roots, trunks, branches and leaves. The sticks and sticks are in line with the foundation that a thousand-year-old Shaolin sect should have in my mind. The reward is not much, I hope the author will not dislike it 😁

I grew up reading Jin Yong's books, but there is only one sweeping monk in Jin Yong's book who is the only one who can make people feel that there are masters in Shaolin Temple. Shaolin's 72 stunts are like mass merchandisers. There are no famous martial arts names such as Six Meridians Divine Sword, Dugu Nine Swords, and Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. The only thing I remember that is more powerful is the golden bell shield and other beating-type kung fu skills.

Why did the author go away? I can't bear to delete it even after several years.

Author, the book is very good, but there are few updates. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

Come on! I like this type very much! All available now! Stop being a eunuch!

Will the protagonist build a Shaolin Temple on the mountain later?

Where did the author go? His writing is obviously good.

If you write well, you might be able to make it into the top 10 bestsellers of martial arts.