The Parasite in the Sharingan

Author, you have made a fatal mistake. There is no heroine, especially in these 49 chapters. This is a girl-gating stream. After all, what we are watching is that it is fun. How can you watch a group of gays fighting and you are the only single guy in the world? It doesn't feel good at all.

The timeline is so messed up, Naruto was about to be born before Kakashi even had the Sharingan installed, And at this point in time, Madara in this book has just awakened the Samsara Eye, but the title of Sannin has been sealed. In the original book, Jiraiya and the others met Konan and the others not long after the fight with Hanzo. At that time, the Samsara Eye had been installed on Nagato for several years. The most important thing is that Shisui here has awakened the Mangekyo. My God I won't go into details about the others. By the way, since you are writing fan fiction, you must use the world view of the original work and the timeline. You are not allowed to write any fan fiction. Just create your own world view. The results may be better than this one. To put it bluntly, it is still here to gain popularity.

I originally thought it was another old Yinbi's rise and calculations—— After deceiving the mother and son of Kaguya and Seizing Madara, he successfully transformed from a parasite into the boss of Master Seizing (elderly) Madara. Next, as long as the youth of the body taken from him is restored, it will be a perfect parasite counterattack! As a result, after much thought, the protagonist finally thought of a way to restore physical youth, and then the protagonist decided to go to Konoha... Press??? What did I see? The protagonist decides to go to Konoha??? Who do you think you are? Do you think your body is still the invincible Uchiha Madara? Or the parasite that can't be hurt? Or do you think Uchiha Madara and Konoha have a good relationship? Or do you mean you don't care about this body at all? Dragging a half-broken body to the enemy's den, I really admire your courage (intelligence) and energy (quotient)!

The author always talks about aging, and the secondary concept of how old you age with just one move is not good, and the idea that the will of the sacred tree will invade when you inject the white reagent is also quite inconsistent. Because, the original work clearly stated that Madara was directly connected to the sacred tree, and the life-extending ability he obtained from the sacred tree did not see any intrusion of will. If you want to limit your strength, don't choose Madara. Since you have chosen Madara, even if you want to limit your strength, don't use these methods that look like old tricks. These are the two biggest failings of the entire article so far. Every time I read this, I want to go straight to it.

In the original work, Madara can easily suppress Yagura with his Sharingan. You also need to impose a chakra limit here. Don't forcefully suppress the strength of the pig's feet just for the sake of a few more chapters! At least, don't be too different from the character in the original plot! After all, the pig's foot is Madara now, and he is Madara with someone else's Madara's body! Author, if you write like this, you will easily lose fans! Readers don't care if the plot requires you to suppress Madara, a max-level character.

I personally recommend changing the body to a human body, without changing into another form.

Author, let me make some suggestions. When I save Kaguya from the moon in the future, that scumbag Otsutsuki Hagoromo will definitely jump out. How about letting the pig's feet swallow him and the chakra bodies of their two sons together? In fact, there is really no need to focus Pig's Foot's attention on Kaguya. There are many people in the Otsutsuki family in outer space, and their eye power is much stronger than Kaguya's. I don't know if the author has any plans in this area. If not, please refer to it! 😁

What are you looking forward to, what are you looking forward to? Stopping updates is equal to entering the palace. Does the author still know?

I just discovered this book It turns out it has been discontinued for half a year 🤐🤐🤐

Can I use Madara's body to play in other worlds later?