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Kobe: You want to steal my boss? Zhou Hao: That's right. Kobe: Do you know Shaq? Got fucked by me. Zhou Hao: Yes, you are the next Shaq. Kobe:…………

The overall writing is pretty good. I originally thought it was a pure basketball competition story, but when I saw the plot of Li Yao, I realized that I took it for granted. It turns out that it has become an urban love story. Forget it, it is not our cup of tea.

The protagonist is 18 years old and his character can be described by Zheng Jihua's song ～Youth～. Only when you suffer a loss can you learn to behave once

What the hell did the author write? It's extremely poisonous.

This is a good basketball article. Can't it just rely on scores or other statistics? It must add other persuasion factors.

I'm convinced by this book, so let's go write anime. . Weird

Kobe and Tracy McGrady have a very good relationship. I don't even want to say more about what the author wrote.

The writing is very good and true. There are the laziness and bad habits of ordinary people in the first few chapters, and there are normal people's families and attitudes towards relatives There are the efforts to go from ordinary to seeing hope, and the growth after hard work, there is no one-stop writing to achieve success. The emotional aspect is also very good at the moment. I don't get excited when I shake my hips, nor do I reject it bluntly, and then regret it in the future As for the poisonous points, At present, there are no poisonous points. Some of the previous poisonous points seem to have been resolved. For example, the previous system that can control the body and have intelligence no longer exist, and they have been resolved cleverly😂 I hope there will be less supervision...

Things about scholars cannot be said to be stolen.

Don't write about teacher-student romances where the age gap between the protagonist and Li Yao is too big. If there are teachers and students nowadays, how many people choose a wife who is seven or eight years older than him?

Author: Don't write this novel, you will be blocked. If you dare to write about teacher-student love, I will be the first to report you. The protagonist and Li Yao are too old.

Please reduce the typos. Are you sure Ariza can wear Rockets jersey No. 11? That's Yao Ming's jersey!

It's better to start from China. It's more reasonable than those who go directly to the NBA.

179Kg bench press is too much

I feel like the protagonist is just a fool. As for emotional intelligence, emotional intelligence, emotional intelligence, important things should be said three times.

Your body fat rate is 3%. Do you write books with confidence? Those people on Baidu actually believe that Jordan's body fat is 3%, and they are also drunk. And comparing shooting with Kobe, shooting 30,000 times a day? Are you sure you're not writing fantasy?

What the hell is 1.7 Meters and 100 pounds considered fat?

No wonder the eunuch, what is this written about?