The Path to Admiralship of a Certain Star Destroyer

First of all, this is really a serious Correction Building! Any typos, wrong sentences, unfilled holes and other questions you can find can be put here, and I will answer them one by one. (Including what you think is unreasonable in the character design and storyline) In addition, I will not say the spoilers part (laughing)! Above!

I pushed it through Chapter 1, but the first chapter didn't exist. . . You tell me whether I should watch it or not. . .

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1. Starting from May 20, I will update at 8 a. M.. If there are additional updates, I will update at 8 p. M.. 2. Daily updates Depending on my mood, basically in order to save manuscripts, there may be very few updates (whisper). 3. Suddenly I feel that it has been in stand-alone status since last week. If it hadn't been for a few clicks, I would have thought I had abandoned the book altogether (whispering). If you have any questions, you can post them in the newly opened Correction Building (seriously). 4. Finally, please collect! Please recommend! If anyone is willing to give a long review or a short review, I would warmly welcome it! (Depending on the situation, enhance, stick)

I feel that the author's setting is okay, but the writing style and character control are not good. Some places read strangely. I hope the author can pay more attention to the writing style and character (the emphasis is on character). Add some energy!

Well, for a new author, his writing skills are quite good. I just feel that the plot tension is insufficient, and some plots are not explained concisely and clearly enough. It might be better to add more details.

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