Cultivating an Immortal in the Martial Arts World

The first four chapters are well written, the writing is very comfortable to read, and the plot is good. However, after the protagonist decided to agree to his father's refining medicine in the pharmacy's alchemy furnace, the plot and writing collapsed. I endured the discomfort and read dozens of chapters. I really didn't understand what was written. It made my brain hurt to read it. If I continue along the lines of the first four chapters, I will write a martial arts scumbag for two to three hundred chapters. The writing is totally fine, I really don't understand it. Judging from the title and introduction, the concept is very clever and attractive, but then there is a teleportation, and another inexplicable village chief thinks that the protagonist is using Qingzhan to be hostile to the protagonist, but the protagonist has just eliminated the Youyun Army and saved the village. The progress between the protagonist and Qinghe is also too fast, and the details of their relationship are written stiffly and awkwardly.

What kind of silly plot is this? The more I watch it, the more it looks like a Qiong Yao drama.

I feel like this male protagonist isn't a scumbag either!

I don't know what to write, bad review

On the verge of collapse, I checked the fan list. I am not the top vote-getter, and I am not the number one fan. I have not even made it up the rankings. Yuluo is in shame. Next, try to change the procrastination as much as possible, change the outline, and try not to think about where to write. As for the previous plot, because the chapters are locked, there is no way to change it, and Yuluo is also very helpless In short, seeing that there are still people paying attention to the story Yuluo tells, Yuluo will definitely work hard to finish the book, and will definitely not supervise it. As for whether it will be unfinished in the end, let's talk about it when the time comes Yuluo doesn't know if the ending he chooses now is what everyone wants. It will depend on the situation. The new book has been deleted and edited several times, and it has been aborted several times. I hope you will be happy to read it in the future, and I hope you will still be there in the future.

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What the hell is this written? It's blunt and embarrassing. This is Ooka, right?

I found the worst little author Monthly tickets and recommendations are sent to you, come on

Brother, you are really miserable😅