Become a Master from Shield Hero

Sorry, I can't hold on any longer. I was treated like a servant by Kaguya at the beginning, and her character fell apart in the middle. I can't accept it because it's easy to assume the role of the protagonist. Also, has the shelf life of the previous Infinite Tsukuyomi expired?

I want to tell all readers that this book is an unlimited flow of comics. It is impossible to stay in just one world. You can tell from the title of the book, okay? Where to start? It's impossible to be in the same world from beginning to end. If you want to read a book about the same world, please go find it. Those are either original worlds and then add two-dimensional settings. For example, Tudou added the God of Death in Battle of the Sky until the end. So, is it okay for everyone who reads the book to understand the basic situation?

At the beginning, you will get the ancestor, and at level 20, you will get the rebel cub.

The beginning of the Dunyong Volume and the Qin Shi Volume feels like a lot of dissuasion. If you can't accept it, just start with the Naruto Volume. Generally speaking, there are too many pitfalls in the early stages of the novel to fill, so you can only make up for it later.

Give a chestnut: Kaguya Otsutsuki (Naruto) Ability: Immortality (can only be sealed, can absorb any ninjutsu, and can recover from any damage) White Eyes (see the other person's meridians, nerves and acupuncture points, and can detect things one kilometer away) Samsara Sharingan (the pupil technique opened by swallowing the fruit of the sacred tree, able to cast infinite moon reading and sky no middle) Blood Successor's Snare (existences that transcend the Blood Successor's limits and Blood Successor's elimination, including the Samsara Sharingan and the Path-Seeking Jade, are also a type of Blood Successor's Snare) Ninjutsu: Levitation (the ability to move freely through the air) White Eyes·Coercion (making the enemy faint or die through the air) Byakugan·Illusion (Use the Byakugan to control the enemy's will) Natural integration (integrate with nature and control the natural environment to attack enemies) Infinite Tsukuyomi (The illusion of the Rinne Sharingan turns the sky like daylight, and cannot be resisted except by Susanoo and those who have been reincarnated in the land with the Rinnegan opened. Those who are caught lose consciousness and will be trapped in the illusion forever) The Birth of the Divine Tree Realm (Summons the Divine Tree, wraps and connects people in the infinite Tsukuyomi state, absorbs chakra and eventually turns into White Zetsu) Huangquan Hirazaka (the ability to travel freely through space, no seal required) Heaven's Royal Center (Transfer the world you are in and the people around you to the "Heaven's Royal Middle" space in an instant) Expanding Tao-seeking jade (summons a huge Tao-seeking jade, annihilating all matter) Kill the Ash Bones together (change the structure of the bones, use the bones as weapons, they will collapse and be destroyed as soon as they come into contact) Chakra fruit creation (turn the absorbed chakra into fruits or elixirs, which can be taken to restore and enhance one's own strength and increase lifespan) Yasogami Air Attack (concentrates the ultimate chakra in the palm of the hand, without any flaws or flaws, forming the strongest physical technique that integrates offense and defense) Rabbit Hair Needle (turn the hair into sharp thorns, and use the white eyes to hit the enemy's weak point, sealing the opponent's actions) Interested book lovers can make a Servant Card

The main character of "Dun Yong" is always in trouble, which shows that the author has insufficient control over the plot. If you don't subvert the entire plot when entering a tragedy, you are abusing the protagonist. What's more, the main character's name is too embarrassing. It's really unskilled to choose such a middle-class name.

What can I say? The beginning is weird. There is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. How can the heroic spirit be Kaguya or something, a heroic spirit from another world? Legend? Or some person who is famous throughout the ages, and what abilities does he have? Job agency? A treasure? Is the ability worth it? Aren't you the dimensional summoning type? What does it have to do with heroic spirits? When I saw Chaldea in Chapter 35, she looked like a black man with a question mark face. It was nonsense. The protagonist still feels like a borderline ob. His personality has not been shown yet. It feels very toxic. On the whole, it's just a mess, all put together, which feels inconsistent and looks awkward. . . . . . . . . . .

It's not like holding back at all, it feels like an otaku, it's too fake, you should write it according to the character of Uchiha Madara, instead of writing the water character like a holy mother, which is so frustrating 🤫

The protagonist of your setting is a god of death who participates in the war, but I only saw a middle-class otaku. In chapter 12, an invincible existence in the world would actually become so angry because of a few children slandering each other, "incompetent"?

First, why is the protagonist set to be a murderer or the kind who kills tens of thousands of people? Secondly, why are the protagonist and Kaguya so powerful that they are always being walked around?

The writing is a bit poor, the plot is a bit silly, nothing else, I won't watch it anyway

Haha, disgusting. Hundreds of thousands of people have been killed. If you don't like it, just kill it. You are still speechless and self-destructive. I don't know what the author is thinking.

Seeing the Saiyans instantly makes me feel bored.

It's not a question of whether Shield Hero is happy or not, the problem is that the characters in the early stage are as if they are brainless. In other words, one queen has an IQ and the others are as mentally retarded. I don't know how that country can survive for so long.

Forget it, I won't read it anymore. If Dunyong doesn't kill the bitch and the king, then there is no need to read it. Goodbye

I jumped when I saw the Hall of Heroes appearing. I know the setting of Type Moon very well, but it was so uncomfortable to watch. There were some small bugs in the front and it was hard to endure. After seeing this, it really didn't work.

He killed more than 100,000 people, and even though he has invincible power, his character can still collapse. What a Ninja Turtle.

I'll let Ilya go 🙂

Although it is well written. But what about summoning Kaguya? I just gave up based on this. I hope it can be changed.

Just watched it, the protagonist licking Kaguya is really unbearable. Really summon an ancestor.

I don't quite understand, why do we have to give in to the servant? Isn't the only way the spell can be used is to strengthen it? Look at that person!

Except for the bad writing, everything else is pretty good. 🐶 Just kidding, but author, can't you stop challenging yourself all the time? Choose the difficulty level from the very beginning, and you will collapse all the way to the end. Naruto's introduction of the Dragon Balls is even more deceptive. Dragon Ball is sentimental, but not exquisite. I'm referring to the dog-tailed mink. But because of their age, most people are more familiar with the latter one. In summary, there are too many elements, the setting is explosive, it is still too imaginative, and the character portrayal is crooked from the beginning.

Learn from it

All of you guys have read "The Rising of the Shield Hero". Can you read the Shield Hero fanfic I wrote? A different world of shield heroes

It's too messy, you can still read it earlier, but I don't recommend it after Naruto, the characters are flying around.

Well, everything else is fine. It's just that when I developed my power in Shield Hero and became a farmer, my scalp went numb and I slipped away.

This is a very discouraging fan fiction.

Although I don't know whether you can see the author or not, I still want to say that the writing is beautiful! Support!

Is this the virtue of the three great ninjas who possess the Mangekyo Sharingan and are as famous as Hashirama and Madara?

Author, although I haven't read the last chapter, I think your update time is too unstable, so I don't dare to follow it. I finally found a book that is not poisonous, but don't be a eunuch.