Tianyi Plan

Well, I am also a new V-family writer. After reading this masterpiece, I really felt a sense of shock. By the way - when I saw Tianyi encountering gangsters, I really wanted to chop the author with a knife. . . Ah, he killed the gangster. First of all, I can see that the author was very careful when conceiving and writing, and he has a good grasp of the rhythm of the entire short story. It is worth mentioning that there is a real sense of immersion in it---- This is reflected in that it did not make me feel "shy about going to the countryside". That is, he truly wrote Luo Tianyi as the author's own Luo Tianyi, instead of a girl in the guise of Luo Tianyi or a lot of empty data settings wrapped in a girl's skin. But why do you feel like something is missing? I don't know. Because everyone has their own interpretation. Perhaps I may feel that if I were the father of the protagonist, I might not create Luo Tianyi. . . Of course, this is only based on my three views. It cannot be used to evaluate the quality of a book at all. . . In short. It is worth reading for authors who write V articles. After reading this novel, it will not deliberately affect my writing style, but it is still helpful to grasp the overall situation. But I think the character creation still needs some improvement. Given time, it will become a great success.

The writing is quite good and the logic is very rigorous, but the military base at the back is really a bit rushed. Although it is a short novel, it is the top novel in Tianyi fan fiction that I have read so far 👍👍