Beijing Men's Illustrated Book

I finished writing the most hilarious chapter today. I really laughed while writing it. When I was designing the plot, I didn't have this part, but I wrote that I felt like my character had come to life and I wanted to perform it, so I wrote it out, and the effect was pretty good. At least my husband laughed when he saw it.

Updated the most romantic chapter, I am no longer good at writing sweet articles 😅 Let's read it together

The plot is on the road to death and there is no turning back 😁😁😁😁 Absolute variety of life, hahahahahaha

Haha, this latest chapter is really fun, very interesting

Front row sofa🌹🌹

After reading it for less than ten minutes, I continued to go back and find faults.

It's tiring to wait until it gets better, it's so troublesome, collect it first, and then kill it when you're done.

Only when the machine is filled with oil can it have the power to move forward! Please support the original version and let the author be full of power to defeat all the little monsters!

🌹🌹 I learned from the previous book, waiting for update

Super super super super super super super happy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Come, report 🌹

I don't have much to say, just one word - like! Great work, looking forward to updates.

Isn't this a male-video novel? Why on a female channel? . .

Very well written! So tasty!

Let's start with language style. The author's language style is plain and smooth, without inappropriate rhetorical writing, and the article as a whole is easy to read without any hesitation. Especially the character dialogues, the language atmosphere is very happy. It's just that there are some minor language errors that are harmless (whisper bb Let's talk about the plot. Since I have been vaccinated, the author mentioned that this is a realistic novel, so the plot is in line with expectations, very close to life, and can give people some resonance. But in fact it is really true. It is both an advantage and a disadvantage. Too plain development makes the entire plot a smooth straight line. There is no big conflict, or the tension of the conflict is not enough. Although there is no big problem with this writing method, it can easily become a chronicle-style article. It can be done in the short term, but it must be read in the long term. The author still lacks stamina. I hope that the subsequent plot can develop well. (The comments below are only personal opinions, not suggestions, and may be a bit harsh. Regarding realism. I think the content of the article is realistic, but it does not need to be completely true. Add it appropriately. It's also good to add some drama elements. The conflict can be deeper and broader, instead of being resolved in one or two chapters. Personally, it feels a bit... Emmmm, it's a bit of a joke? (Purely my personal opinion Finally, I wish this book will get better and better! Come on, author!

I don't know how many people are watching, and the clicks have been cancelled. No one said anything. The collection went up today and dropped tomorrow. Qingyun has not given any, and has no recommendations. Too lazy to put it on the shelves...

The comments came back, and I burst into tears.

The Qingyun List was rejected again, why? It's really rare to think about it... It's not like the writing has no commercial value. It's not a novice. Why? ? Already 7 times Hey!