Pokemon: Dark Fantasy

New readers who are scared away by the so-called "testing drugs" can come in and take a look. . . (There are a few spoilers I have read two-thirds of it so far, and I feel that it is a very high-end work among the pm books I have read in the past two years. Although it is not as good as the White Moonlight (Axu Licking Xiaoyou) that I have in mind, I personally feel that the author's writing style and plot are not much worse than those of Tingshu's author. Why are the results so disastrous? In the end, it is still I blame the author himself... I am a fan fiction author from an external website, let me analyze it from the perspective of an online author - the title and cover of the book are not pleasing to the eye. First of all, the title of the book is dark fantasy, the setting is more of a comic book, and the protagonist has a pretty decent outlook. (I like this very much). This will dissatisfy many secondary readers who come to the dark novel. Why are you selling it? The shark is okay, but I made a round land shark with a subtle composition, which is not cute or handsome. It is very low. The last one is the most important and the most critical point of poison! The main one is the character of Frost Leaf, and the other is the time traveler Eevee. Personally, I can accept the double-wearing setting. Yes, but Ibrahimovic's character, especially in the early stage, is very unlikable and can easily make people feel annoyed. Of course, characters with similar personalities can be written. If the author can add a plot in the early stage where Ibrahimovic desperately saves the protagonist under certain circumstances, the readers' tolerance for this character will be greatly increased, instead of being like a shameless relative living at home. Pure disgust. Shuang Ye, who poisoned countless people, was put at the end. To be honest, I was shocked by this character twice. I couldn't read it until I read it the third time. Anyway, this character disappeared soon. First of all, is there really something wrong with her behavior? , The protagonist has a dark background, and as a police officer, Shuangye's hatred and distrust of the protagonist are completely logical. What I want to say is, what is the meaning of this character? Maybe the author wants to write her as a person who is slowly influenced by the protagonist's changes. Br>The patience of online readers is always the lowest, because they have too many choices, and they will give up if they feel unhappy for a moment. For example, the existence of Shuangye is like a beautiful girl. It is reasonable, but it is forbidden. Just take a cute dolphin show as a case. Live, if the character is constipated in the toilet, and then the camera depicts her being constipated from multiple angles, then this character will definitely be cool... Is this a problem with constipation? Tsundere characters (frost leaf is a variant?) Are difficult to write, and the character of Louise in Zero's Demons will be scolded by readers. The painting has various bonuses such as voice acting and graphics. To put it bluntly, non-villains who are not good to the protagonist will be labeled as "toxic" in the eyes of most readers. It may be a bit nonsense to write this long review after the book is finished. I just hope that new readers can be more patient.

Man, after 4 months and 580,000 words, I finally signed the contract hahahahahaha. Although the book has been signed to this extent, it is almost equivalent to being scrapped, but it is meaningful. This is an encouragement to me. Persistence has paid off, even if it is insignificant in the eyes of others, but compared to the first four months when there was no harvest, I am already very satisfied. Now I am so happy Love you (˘ ³˘)♡~🌹🌹💋

This is one of the rare Pokemon fan novels with a special episode as the background. The author's description of Pokemon battles and tactics and moves are eye-catching. The description of the bond with Pokemon is not a cookie-cutter good baby, but flesh and blood with different characteristics. Personally, I like Iron Han Han Swampert, haha. Moreover, the author's writing skills have improved rapidly, and his character portrayal is also at a high level. It only took me a few days to go from a tentative attempt in the literary wilderness to my current obsession. I would like to give the author a special boost. Although I don't pay much attention to it now, please stick to it. You will get monthly tickets and subscriptions. It also gives a boost to readers who were persuaded to quit at the beginning. The rest is really exciting. In terms of content, I started to become a fan when I was playing the battle tower.

It's so fucking toxic. The mini dragon is worth 10,000 yuan. The protagonist, a Rockets soldier, can buy a round land shark with one bet. This is so worthless. It's like the national treasure panda in reality, selling for 10,000 yuan on the black market. . . 😅😅😅😅

I really don't know what the point of arranging such an opening is, just for such a bet? I think it would be better for the protagonist to go to jail than to have his destiny in the hands of others, like a puppet.

Apart from anything else, the writing style is really not very good. There are some places that don't need to be written, but they are written. Just like when giving an order to the elf, just "attack" is enough, but you just add "do it", which seems retarded. I hope you can refer to the writing style of other people's good works. I still like the story.

Is there something wrong with the author's mentality? While I don't really want to have too much contact with the protagonists of the special episode, I keep pushing the number of words towards them. Is it interesting? You are either exposed to the plot, or you are regarded as a passerby, like a slam dunk master, writing a bunch of awesome characters, but in the end you have never played against them! The book is not a big hit, and I think about the word count every day ~ How much useful information can there be in this book apart from the psychological descriptions that repeat nonsense and the settings that have nothing to do with promoting the plot? Ready-made example: In Chapter 409, we started preparing to go to Silver Mountain, but in Chapter 419, we were still talking about the setting, and we didn't even find a camp. We talked about the ranger setting in Chapter 5. The result was that we had less than one chapter of the plot and no interaction.        ，，，？

I feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit twisted. He treats reality as a game and wants to clear every plot, but most of the time he is still playing soy sauce on the side. In order not to deviate from the plot, the main character is beaten to death in order to let them grow up like the original work. This feels disgusting. Even if the protagonists do not play a decisive role in this incident, I think it will not prevent them from growing up. And the preparation before each event is completely like playing. To sum up, the protagonist has no role in the subsequent plot, even if he is so powerful

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I feel like this is an urban novel disguised as an elf 🙂

I don't understand the use of carrying that Eevee