The Way of All Realms

The writing style is a bit too immature and the routines are a bit old. I hope the author can keep up the good work!

What kind of mindless harem flow is invincible at the beginning?

If you don't write Doupo, don't put it in the introduction.

It's too white. The protagonist is still a single and stupid type. The routine is the same as that of street comics from around 2011, and the realistic narrative is also the same as that of girls' comics.

I have no problem with whether it's a harem or a stallion, but after five chapters I couldn't stand this childish psychological activity. The author made the protagonist look like a fool.

Another stud book, abandoned book. Hate stallion writing.

Naming the system elf is too quick, without much sense of substitution. It should be possible to add context to the name. Hope to work harder in the future.

You are not suitable for Zhutianliu, you should look for campus romance dramas

As soon as you think of it, it comes out! Can you think about it carefully before writing?

Um, when we were trying to save an old man on a plane, someone came out to slap him in the face. The supporting character had a low IQ! Shouldn't ordinary people just ignore things that don't concern themselves? Why would they jump out and let the protagonist step on them? The old man vomited blood, and someone immediately wanted to accuse him. It was so embarrassing 😅

If you are not suitable for Zhutianliu, go write about cities.

Forget about the harem story, I saw that the male protagonist was about to die when Kurumi absorbed him, and then suddenly a dragon tribe member came out and saved him, but he wanted to beat the dragon tribe member to death. I don't know what you think, but I didn't want to read it when I saw this. It's too ridiculous, right? The author is an animal who can only think with his lower body

When will we fight back to break the sky?

It's almost 2020, and I can still see routines from before 2010. It's so scary. Was it me who was reborn or the author traveled through time?

The four great lords in the capital and the top ten beauties 😰 are extremely poisonous.

I crashed after reading the first chapter 😰

Can the author write about the national team?

The protagonist's IQ is a bit too stupid, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch

It's too perfunctory. Why did you give me a runner in the first place? Are all the heavens losing their cities?

When I open the traffic, I can only say one thing: What an innocent and romantic teenage wolf!

After reading the first chapter, it's too white, the donkey's lips are wrong, and the classification of cultivation levels is good. I am an old reader, but the system Daozu created, Pangu bloodline and Hongjun bloodline are these things, Daozu is too awesome haha ​​(; 1_1)