League of Legends Demon King Coach

The author's writing is good, but one thing is that it's fine to intersperse some past data, but throwing out all the data at once will dissuade readers.

Brother, you and the next door book "Watch Me Playing Games" are on the cover, right? 😰

I don't see who has expanded. Can't g2 be called a strong team this year? RNG just can't beat the middle and upper jungle due to the strength of the middle and upper lanes. Others only need to help the top lane to gain an advantage first and then grab the bottom lane to win. The output pressure is all on the puppy. rng can either start a team in the top lane or start a team as an assistant. Uzi can still show off when he is a tank in the top lane. How can he show off after he becomes a DPS in the top lane? The hard damage will kill you. Note that it is not a tank version now, nor is it even a half-tank. Do you think anyone cares about AD during the ig game? The top laner, jungler, and mid laner all go in to show off. JK draws a from behind and then gets five kills. Does Bao Lan need to start the team first? I wonder if people nowadays can't understand the game and only read the posts? By the way, the various memes in rng now just copy the edg from back then, without any new ideas.

1: If there are any mistakes, I will definitely correct them. For example, there are a few team names in this chapter that were wrongly typed, flashes were misremembered, etc. If there are any mistakes, please feel free to report them and I will definitely make corrections. 2: Style issue, I can only say that this is due to insufficient writing skills. Most of the protagonists of league articles are professional players. The perspective of analyzing the problem is how do I kill him alone and how do I show him off? But the coach is unlikely to consider this issue. There is a lot of rational analysis. If I didn't write so carefully, I probably wouldn't be able to understand it. I'm not very good at writing exciting plots of violent beatings and bloody torture. I've never read it. I'll try to change it. 3: The data is taken from reality*10, such as annual salary, monthly salary, number of people on site, etc. 4: Water plot, I've only seen one saying this so far. There's nothing I can do about it, and I think the writing is okay... It can't always be a competition, and the competition is only one of the main lines. 5: It should get better in the future... Right? I know that the subject matter is not pleasing to the eye, and what I wrote is too bad, but since I got the recommendation, I will still write it seriously.

I read Chapter 24 and would like to share my thoughts. The biggest problem for the author is that he cannot create a sense of immersion. To put it simply, there are too many narrations. And there is too little dialogue. Without dialogue, the plot seems hard. I can't say the specifics, so please give it a try, author.

I can't wait to watch the game.

Chapter 39, I really can't stand it anymore, most of it is narration. This is a novel, not a documentary. I read novels just for fun. I would care so much about it. What I want to read most in a League of Legends novel is the game and the daily life between the players. I don't want to understand the principles of the e-sports circle at all.

I've read more than thirty chapters, and I just want to say that I can't understand what's written at all. Isn't it about an e-sports competition? Why are you talking about sports again? When I read it, I almost thought I was reading a sports article. The more I read, the more confused I became. It was written like a documentary, and it was all about things that had nothing to do with playing games.

After reading Chapter 33, let me summarize my feelings after reading it. This is not a novel at all, this is simply a documentary. From the first chapter to the present, I only have a vague impression of what the protagonist did and what impact it had. Looking back at the past history, I know it all!

After reading a few chapters, I didn't feel like I was immersed in it. The author was already ruthless when he started to virtually summon players! In the mid-term, if the team is all SSS virtual players, wouldn't it be invincible?

It's too watery. The first few dozen chapters are all narration.

I don't know whether it's because of the author's writing skills or because I don't like some of the author's narrative techniques. I feel that the author's business wars and team operations are not very attractive to me. . . Personally, I feel that the things I wrote are too slow and a bit unrefined.

There is a book next door with the same cover as yours

I just don't want iG to be sprayed so hard…. There are also those LOL novels written about iG. I don't know how many authors want to blackmail iG and switch to other teams. 😥😥😥😥

I have seen water. This is the first time I have seen an entire analysis report as the text.

How do I cancel the reading background of 515? The yellow background looks very dramatic 😭