I Am the Lord of This City

There is nothing wrong with the writing, but the dialogue gives people a very awkward feeling. I can accept it if it is placed in a light novel, but a fantasy system flow looks very strange, and the author needs to pay more attention to shaping the characters. Many people like the tsundere character, but if it is not well written, it will become the poisonous point of the book (this is the case for many authors). You can know from the comments that I am not the only one who dislikes Tang Xiaochun. Let's not talk about the beginning and introduce the world view, but at least introduce the early stage of the realm clearly. The realm is a bit confusing. Summary: It's not too bad. I want to watch it but I can't stand it. However, it seems that the author has already written 125k, and there may be improvements in the future, so if you are a reader who likes fantasy system farming (?), You can read this book.

We welcome all your advice, good or bad, and welcome all who come. 🙏😡

Finally found a good novel.

Come on, the writing is very attractive so far!

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Excellent writing, come on, the writing is beautiful. "Who Will Bite the Dog" comes to visit, I will add it to the bookshelf to collect yours, and please help me add it to the bookshelf to collect mine. If you have a vote, please vote for it! If you are willing to give a reward, then even more---thank you!

Is this book called the City Lord or the City Lord's Personal Bodyguard?

Brother, has your next round of recommendation slots arrived today, Friday?🤔🤔🤔

The writing is sophisticated and the plot is quite engaging. With support

I thought it was food after reading the introduction, but after reading about five chapters, I felt it had the potential to become arsenic! The name and introduction are so beautiful and domineering. There are no three golden chapters. Farewell!

The beginning is too depressing, and there is something wrong with the woman. The positioning is a bit wrong. It should be the opening thigh, the position of the important assistant, but the author forcibly added a scene and added many chapters. It made people have a headache and caused many people to abandon the book. I hope the author will change it. After all, people read books to relax, not to suffer. Your book is positioned as a system-flowing article, but the beginning is so depressing. It must not be good.

The author should go to a female channel, which would be more suitable for this type of article.

This is not fantasy, this is romance novel

Is the author a female? The realm of martial arts is not clearly written. An Nan's affection for the protagonist is inexplicable. Although it is a life-saving grace, it is not enough to be honest with him. The battle dialogue is too neutral, "This is not fair, you are cheating" "Come out! Summon the Nether Tiger, this is a bit like the Elf Pokémon" The author portrays An Nan very carefully, although he is a bit tender.

On the top of the immortal world, proud of the world, there will be heaven with me, Anlan.

That guy surnamed Tang is really doing it. The more I watch it, the more angry I get. I don't know why 😂

It has reached 300,000 words, I hope you guys will support me! ! 😄

I would like to ask, as a modern person, will the male protagonist be loyal to An Nan? As a woman, I can't stand NPCs, whether they are female or male.

Haha, come on, author! I like your style, so I'll give you the ticket. I'm a student now, and I'm rich, so I'll definitely pay for it. Please improve!

I have only read Chapter 23 so far, and I want to know two things: 1. Is the heroine Tang Xiaochun or An Nan? 2. Will the protagonist always build An City? If the heroine is Tang and the protagonist doesn't have Kaicheng, I won't watch it. Reading these twenty chapters made me sick to death.

Finished today? Although I have only read the third volume, sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers!

If a protagonist is soft-hearted, the results will not be good. Nowadays, everyone likes to see the protagonist be cruel and cruel, and make decisions that do not recognize his true nature.

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I didn't do anything at the beginning, I just equipped a mask to hide my identity.

There is nothing wrong with the character, but the article is too wordy and boring.

The title of the book reminded me of Zhentian Haicheng. Am I hopeless?😅