Lord of Fortune

I haven't read it yet, but now I read a book review that says there is no heroine. I don't know what's going on. This kind of novel about being an emperor without a woman is not interesting. In fact, to me, it is better to read without a heroine, but the protagonist must have concubines in the harem. In my opinion, without a heroine, it means that he has no feelings for women, and it has nothing to do with whether there is a woman or not!

🙂 I glanced at the chapter title. There are only gods qi but no gods zhi. I don't have much expectations for the content.

First of all, I read the free chapter, and I can see that the book has a huge layout. First there are the borderlands of the mortal world, followed by the central realm, and then the fairyland. But there are three big problems with this book. One, it's just too wordy. It starts with various inner monologues by the protagonist and the author. There's a lot of nonsense, but it's a setting, and it's hard for you to jump in. It's tiring to watch. Second, the progress is too slow. The main plot is very clear, but the borderland here is obviously the Novice Village. Judging from the author's description, it is more complicated than the Three Kingdoms. The protagonist can even master the most rubbish state of an ordinary dynasty in the Novice Village. It seems that it is far away, which is really tiring. Third, it's not that exciting, which can be summarized by the above two points. The protagonist's inner monologue throughout the whole process is added, and the battle scenes are just description skills. In addition, according to the author, there is no female protagonist.

I haven't read it, but I pass by it occasionally. I think you can definitely learn from Kanqi's Immortality in Yunchao Liu's books. To be honest, if you write a book similar to his, people will read it. But in fact, you can learn from his cool points, such as the pregnancy upgrade, and the national beast. , Such as the National Preceptor, the Scripture, and the most important thing - opponents and partners. Many years ago, I still remember the ones such as Ying Zheng, Tu Shengli Tianting, who was really domineering, such as Lu Ya's Immortal-Slaying Flying Dagger, such as Emperor Xuan's World-Severing Golden Wheel, such as King Zhou You, etc.

If you are traveling through time, you can also check it out! However, it is only a local rebirth

The author must be an immortal book lover.

I like the Yun Dynasty Hegemony series the most, but it's a pity that there aren't many books in the starting point.

To be honest, the author's writing style is good, and the macro structure of the book is quite large, but is it really good to get to know the characters in the early stage and later in the book? Are clones useful? Maybe, but the clone you wrote is not new. Go and see Huang Ting Daozu, the clone and the vest are really handsome.

Now when looking at the cultivation genre, I really don't like the setting of spiritual roots. Even if it is spiritual roots, the balance of the five elements is the best. When does it become the worst? Moreover, Taoist cultivation does not require spiritual roots at all. It feels like the setting of spiritual roots is like a genetic mutation giving rise to a redundant energy-absorbing organ.

Just read a few chapters! I really can't stand it anymore! It doesn't feel like you're trying to live forever like this! It seems you are cunning to think of immortality, but you are so self-righteous! Author, if you really like immortality, you can write a fanfic! I have never found a fanfic about immortality until now! What a shame!

Alas, for personal reasons, I really don't like the setting of clones, so I'll quit now, but author, your writing is very good, keep up the good work😊

You can refer to the author. Immortality (Guanqi) is also about luck.

The book is good. I have already invested in it. Good luck to the author.

The first time I liked the novel Yun Chao was Immortality. I thought it was pretty good at that time.

Watching Chess is the first of its kind. I like novels of this type. I hope the author will stick to it.

This is a bit like the way Shinto-ryu is written.

Are you planning to stay at the Qi training level for the rest of your life?

Congratulations on the launch, Brother Feng, come on 😍😍😍, the first order must support 🙂🙂

I can only say that I have learned all the different things. The good ones have not been learned and the bad ones are a big recommendation. It has been almost more than 300 chapters and I haven't established the Yun Dynasty. This kind of novel is very difficult to test the author's writing skills. After all, there are people who watch chess and the origin of the Yun Dynasty before and after me. No matter how I write, I feel that I don't have that kind of Yun Dynasty state. Also, look at what Zhong Shan learned to have a clone during the Qi training period, and the price is also very high.

The pig's feet are very rubbish, and the rebirth feels like rubbish. In addition, there is no heroine with a good setting, so she should be aloof forever.

After reading the previous article, many settings can be explained clearly in a few words. It's a lot of verbosity and too fragmentary. It takes a lot of effort to look at it. Bye bye.

The author's writing style can be improved, and the results of this book will be impressive if it can be sustained.

I'm also a programmer, so I probably work more overtime than you do. It's my first time writing a novel, and I want to persevere, but sometimes I feel overwhelmed. After seeing what you said, I decided to persevere and realize myself. Let's work together. If you have time, help me read what I wrote and give you some suggestions. Support your first order

Is the dragon an existence that can be killed by the acquired realm? In the Perfect World book, the cubs of mythical beasts have a power of 100,000 tons. If the dragon cub is not as good as the cub of the mythical beast, it will not be killed by people in the acquired realm. Besides, it is not said to be a cub. This is a trap.

Not restored yet?

Not much to say, I'm here to advertise, hahahaha

Brother, how long did it take for your Confucian, Taoist, and Literary Sage to be released from the ban? 🌹

Here is the only monthly ticket, come on Maple

I'm here for seven days of National Day fun!

It's a complete imitation of Immortality, but it looks good and I like it.