
Marvel Returns to Be a Dad
漫威归来当奶爸
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 174k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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85Chapters
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Some common sense of life needs to be strengthened, and you can't be blind. . .
The pig's trotters from Marvel are back. To neutralize many superpowers and black technologies, do you still need to buy a machine? The protagonist who has neutralized most of the superpowers is already an industrial machine, let alone one that cannot be built.
The writing is so beautiful, why haven't you updated it?
Yes, yes, yes, the writing is really nice 😏
Yuewen has stopped running for a few days, but the reward amount is only 1 million soft girl coins. You are so poor, so you can just reward this small amount. No one who has the ability is too lazy to deal with such a company! The protagonist has been in the Marvel world for 10 years at the peak of its development, but his eyesight is so low 🙂
Come on, old man, there are too many Marvel eunuchs, I hope you can stick to it! !
The subject matter is quite novel, the setting is very good after coming back from the Marvel world, and the author's writing is not faulty. After all, he is an old author 🥺
Personally, I think the words that can describe the protagonist are one word, coward, two words, loser, three words, not confident, four words, no plan, five words, no experience in the world. He loves his wife but cannot completely trust her, nor can he firmly and firmly refuse external temptations. He has various agreements with his wife and children but cannot complete them perfectly. There are always some twists and turns. In short, if the performance of the protagonist is not forcibly set by the author, he must be a scumbag in Hezhong, which is a conflict of characters... There is no problem overall. There are really many small flaws in details and common sense, so it can be read, but people who watch it are very depressed... Another problem is that there are a lot of waste plots. Such unnecessary plots are mixed with the pits dug by the author, which will cause readers to be confused, and they will not be able to distinguish which is the useful information I want to remember later, which will make the novel overlong and boring...
I want to ask how a ten-year-old child can be cute
The author definitely does not know how precocious the nine-year-old children raised by a single-parent family are.
What's going on with these two kids?
If you talk like this when you are five years old, it is called cute. If you still talk like this when you are ten years old, then the parents should be fooled! Did the author choose the wrong age package?
The golden fingers are too big. Why do urban novels need such big golden fingers? It breaks easily. The novel should not be exaggerated, as exaggeration is a poisonous point. What's the point of having a protagonist with such a golden finger in the city like an adult in a kindergarten? It is no different from the rebirth of the Immortal King or Demon Emperor a few years ago.
After reading the first chapter, I couldn't help but complain.
You have achieved so much in Marvel, and you want to be a Ding Dong when you come back? Hold it in when something happens? There are also three chapters of the agreement, it's amazing! Look at the style of the big guys when they appear. Are they willing? It's because our strength doesn't allow it. From the high-tech plane to the high-martial plane, don't you feel there is a gap when you return to the ordinary world? Don't you want to change something?
So, don't exaggerate the protagonist's previous experience, ability, and status too much, because the subsequent plot cannot express that powerful character and mentality. Do you think this is just showing off? No, this is pretending to be sb.
After reading Chapter 30, I found the following puzzling.
Since you choose to write urban life novels, please note that social foundations often make mistakes. 1. After disappearing for 10 years, you must go to the police station to report and re-apply to establish a personal file. (Because disappearing for a certain period of time will be regarded as a 'death' and the file will be closed) 2. Laboratory-purchasing (batch) chemical raw materials must be reported to the police station! (Approval license under application but not yet obtained) Laboratories involving chemical raw materials must go to the fire protection, police station or relevant units to report and indicate the relevant raw materials required (anything beyond the scope can be re-reported), and the fire protection committee will send personnel to on-site inspection whether the experimental site meets the relevant requirements. 3. Writing novels, for a pure newcomer, there is basically no income in the first month, and it is a process of accumulating popularity. Even the new king's income doubled after being launched. (You should know this as the author) 4. The state stipulates that you must be 7 years old or older to attend elementary school, (6.5 Is okay) (you disappeared for 10 years = your wife was pregnant + the age of the child), so it is impossible to be in 5th grade with your child's grades. Don't compare the 80s and 90s to now, especially in cities. 5. The child's tone of voice gives me the impression that he is 3-5 years old, and does not have the style of the contemporary post-10 generation at all. That's all. Of course, if you think I'm wrong about the author, you'll be happy.
I have always felt that it would be best if the main character's biological children are only six years old. Although missing for ten years.
The author omits the current situation of the protagonist's family after returning to the real world after 10 years of absence and the explanation for this. He also briefly mentions a few words about his experience in Marvel. It would be better to write that the protagonist has Marvel's black technology. It feels like this book is covered in a layer of Marvel fandom... Personal opinion
The protagonist lacks his own personality, principles and soul, and it feels very awkward no matter how you look at it. If you don't love money, you will go back to your hometown to farm and make mountains. If you love money, you will use your avatar to keep the red flag at home. The colorful flags are fluttering outside.
This money is really funny, why not just pick up 100 million?
I liked all the people who raised questions about the book. At least in my opinion, the questions raised were real problems, and I didn't find anyone complaining just for the sake of criticizing. However, the author did not reply to any questions about the book's shortcomings and bugs, nor did he change them. All the authors who talked about the book's beauty responded without exception.
Does the protagonist feel like he came back from Marvel? First, when I saw the annual salary of 100 RMB, I felt that Yuewen Group had given me too much money. As mentioned before, all the technical talents were copied. Even if I worked for Tony, I couldn't believe that I wouldn't even get an annual salary of 10 million U. S. Dollars, and I couldn't believe that I could start my own business and earn 100,000 U. S. Dollars a year. Second, the protagonist's wife knew that the protagonist was back from Marvel, and she was immediately shocked when she found out that the protagonist had earned one million life coins. We all know that the protagonist has so many abilities, various technologies, black technologies, super powers, and talents, but he still can't make a mere one million? There are also many details that really make the protagonist feel very low, and the pretense is too fake.
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
Why do you recommend so many eunuch books?
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
Eunuch 😅😅😅
He's a eunuch. The author's classmate is not easy to get along with in the palace.
If it's hot chicken, just continue being a eunuch.
🙂In fact, it's quite good to be a eunuch. Did you, the author, go astray in your writing? Your book is obviously about baby daddy, so should the theme revolve around children? Throughout the whole process, the children were picked up and dropped off from school without any interaction. Is this still a story about a dad?
If the child is 10 years old, can he still be considered a father? How come 10-year-old twins talk almost like 5-year-olds? Yuewen Group, with a market value of 100 billion, was worth 1 million after being hacked? ? ? He also said there was a huge reward on his head. He was so poor.