Enjoy the Legend of Basketball

The progress is too fast and the writing is broken.

I haven't read all the information on the author. It seems that he is not old enough to play basketball, and he disagrees with his understanding of the basketball (because the protagonist is a PF/C, and the author does not want to strengthen his weak inside skills, but wants to add another three-point skill when the novice package has already given him a three-point skill? What if the protagonist decides in the future? If he is a big pitcher who is very bad inside, pretend I didn't say it), and the time point of the change of NCAA basketball rules described in the book is deviated. It is obviously a game in the 2013-2014 season, but the 30-second shot time limit that was only launched in 2015 is implemented, which means that this kind of mistake is a bit low-level. Finally, a male protagonist who is 2.08 Meters tall matches a female protagonist who is 1.57 Meters tall? This height difference is too cute, which is unacceptable and a bit eye-catching. Of course, in addition to these, the description of characters and plots is still acceptable, but when writing about the behavior and language of foreigners, it must be consistent with the character. Don't appear to be an American, but speak in Northeastern dialect when speaking. This will be very dramatic.

I like to watch the inside line. Is there any competition on the outside line in the NBA now? I've been reading a few books recently about three-pointers being boring. Outside defense is not as effective as inside defense. It's like the Rockets using three-pointers to kill themselves. But once the hand feels cold, you should also look at Duncan and Garnett's defense during the Celtics. In the NBA, only the inside is qualified to become the core of defense, and only those who can become the core of defense.

His height and wingspan are too high, which is very inconsistent.

Come on! Very well written. Unless you start from a supporting role after entering the NBA, don't give the protagonist three-point skills! Defensive skills, low post skills are also fine.

Just a common sense question, if a foreigner is called Joe Johnson, then his first name is Joe and his last name is Johnson. Your English was taught by your physical education teacher, right? Another thing is not to make the personalities of black American athletes look as dramatic as those of Chinese people. Don't try to talk about brotherhood in the same dormitory. Otherwise, it feels like you are living in the 1990s.

If Harrell was so good defensively, he would have gotten a big contract long ago. The offense is good.

It's really not easy to be an insider now! You can't do it without your body, you can't do it without your skills, you can't defend the big one and the small one, you can't hit open three-pointers, you can't protect the basket, and you have to post up in the low post at critical moments!

It's Chapter 82. I think the author's conscience found out that he added an extra chapter.

Chapter 82 is gone? The serial number is still wrong!

I just finished reading Chapter 17. Did the author forget that this book is a system flow, but it only appeared once in the first chapter, and then it was like there was no such system in Chapter 17? ? ?