All Things in the World Are Refined

The writing of this protagonist is really a failure. The Buddhist salted fish is not written. Instead, it reveals a kind of villain who becomes rampant when he succeeds. A diaosi is a diaosi. Even if he gets the golden finger and becomes the protagonist, he is still a diaosi. Farewell.

After reading the first few chapters, I always felt a bit... Wordy? If you want to write a cool article, some descriptions are unnecessary. (For example, the part about burning the back of your hand and having no money to go to the hospital felt like it was explained too carefully.) Although some of your detailed descriptions are better, generally in suspense books, these detailed descriptions are more important. Also, do some of the words and expressions feel a bit too arrogant and rude? Although this may be the protagonist's personality... Some third-party descriptions (narration) are not needed. (Just complaining, don't worry)

I suddenly wanted to reward myself, so I did it. After I finished the reward, I felt like it was a bit shameless, wasn't it? By the way, brothers, is this okay?

I think the main reason is that the author's writing is too messy. The plot is still very good, but there is a feeling that makes people want to read it but makes it uncomfortable to read it. Please improve

I don't like the protagonist's character, don't cherish life, get angry after watching it, stop watching it, give up

Feel sorry! I really can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 72. The author is too deliberate in order for the plot to develop according to his ideas. Pig's Foot can completely return to another world, adjust the time ratio, and come back as a Yuanying Realm monk with incredible combat power. What's more, Pig's Foot is an orphan on Earth, and he has no worries. It doesn't matter even if he doesn't return to Earth, why should he be plotted by others? The writing is too stiff. Even if the pig's trotters gain extraordinary power, they are still useless. Not to mention doing whatever they want, at least they have some sense of being strong! A pig's trotter is not afraid of missiles, let alone a big mushroom. As long as the pig's trotter does not leave the city, a big mushroom? Who dares to let go! A person who can be said to be invincible, but living such a miserable life, is nothing but a waste.

Well written, keep it up! ! ! ! ! !

Speaking of the author, you are right to want to retain readers, but your attitude is a bit too low. Your top priority is to write the novel well, not to retain readers one by one. How long can you keep them? I know how painful it is for newcomers to write without a sense of identity. Let's do this. I can promise to take a look at it every day and give you some suggestions. Don't be burdened and work hard.

The details are written very carefully, please like it

It was very late, and I was coughing badly. I suddenly remembered that it was time to ask for votes, so I got up decisively, picked up my phone, and typed this line. Dear readers, please open a ticket.

I can only say rubbish about this. I have seen about 70 or 80 of them. Then, I found that the author's three views are a bit inconsistent with some of the three views of Qidian novels. What he wrote can only be said to be too holy and too in line with the national standards. So if you want to see Qidian novels, don't read this type of novel. If you want to read this type of novel that is in line with the country, it will definitely be a hit.

I don't want to delete the comments, but I just want to see if some of the comments can be useful. Brother, we are all human beings, it would be wrong for you to just curse them! You can tell me my shortcomings and you can scold me as much as you want, but I won't retaliate. It's just not good to just curse people directly. After all, we are all civilized people. Well, I just want to say that being scolded is also a kind of treatment, which means that someone is quite happy to read my novel. I'm so happy! Forget it, let's just say this! I drank some wine and saw this as soon as I woke up. I am a bit temperamental, please forgive me. Sorry, that book friend, although I know what I said is wrong, but! I really want to say that writing a book is not easy, it's very tiring, and you don't have much money to throw yourself at me like this! Even if you have perfect attendance, you won't be able to make it! Writing a book is just a hobby, how can I not criticize it?

Is it too...? ? ? ? ? ? The protagonist was bullied by others... But he didn't even have a temper? ? ? Even if he can be reborn... He still has a temper, right? ? ? Look... It's so crowded, right? ? ? Don't say anything... Things will change after more experience? ? ? The protagonist of that novel has not changed...? Such as... How does the protagonist of Dou Po change in the early and late stages? How did the protagonist of Zhe Tian change in the early and late stages? ? ... Wait? ? This is considered... The protagonist's normal operation... Huh? ? ?

. . . . Come on, come on, come on

I have a cold. Perhaps familiar readers have already felt that the author's updates are ineffective. These past few days have been a disaster for me! First something happened, then I got sick again! The author's bacteria are also mortals! There will also be sickness and old age... So happy! Hahahaha Dear readers, please bear with me.