Dazejie

First of all, the introduction attracted me, moving the entire earth to the continent, what a great idea! When I officially started reading, I could feel the author's seriousness and meticulousness between the lines. The first few chapters seem to be introductions, so it's hard to say, just wait for the update Also, wait and see if you can become a god!

Because I like the subject matter, I thought the writing was pretty good when I read it, so I saved it. I don't think it's a problem if it's slow, as long as it's good-looking, I'm not afraid of being slow, but I'm afraid of being poisonous. The background setting is pretty good and interesting, but when I look at the back, I feel like the painting style has changed a bit... From science fiction to fantasy and immortality? At first, it felt like it was about the explosion of technology and the evolution of species in a post-apocalyptic setting. The Great Swamp World was full of alien life, and then there were survival wars such as species invasion. As a result... I started practicing and competing (still in the game (they don't need to reduce population pressure) The settings for the distribution of environmental species in the Daze world are quite good. It can be seen that the map is very large, and some of the games are also very interesting. I look forward to the follow-up (but the ancient Chinese mission of the protagonist feels weird, as if it has become a fast-traveling system text, and it is a bit boring. I hope there are more About the task of species culture unique to the Osawa World) The plot is a bit forced in some places. Although it is understandable, it feels too obvious to be "arranged". For example, in the first volume, the people related to the male protagonist have suffered various degrees of harm, and then the male protagonist The host exploded. The flag was set at the beginning, but he was unconscious and woke up at the last moment. Then he was in a coma before the competition. He was in a coma for three years, and when he woke up, it was two days before the competition. The male protagonist was still confused, "Holy shit, I've been in a coma for three years?" (Manual Dog head) I'm sorry that your biological clock is so accurate when you wake up. You can arrange to faint in the future. Hahahahaha (just kidding ) I don't think it's a big problem at all, and there's nothing very discouraging. It just feels a little flat and lacks a little bit of irritation. Excited, some game modes are a bit boring. The author should be able to come up with a more interesting preliminary round than "turn into a bug to eat grass and evolve into a human to devour the contestants" (facepalm) I don't think there is anything wrong with the protagonist's personality. It's commonplace, but it feels a bit unclear? It's really quite ordinary hahaha (I suddenly remembered seeing the comment 23333 asking who the protagonist is). I wonder if there will be a massacre when it changes into three heads and six arms due to the wood carving Personal recommendation It's better to write a double-edited book according to your ability. I'm so busy with taking the civil service exam. It's already very laborious to write this kind of book and I have to divide my time to write new articles... I'm afraid of doing one thing and losing the other. It's better to write this book into a masterpiece. If you promote it more, more and more readers will come. Come on!

You can clearly see that my chapter schedules are scattered and complicated, because I change the article every day, trying to make each chapter read more smoothly, come on! For the friends who come to support me, at least two chapters a day

He is not a born saint He will be afraid, he will escape He will be scared, collapse and go crazy But he will grow, and the experience of every thing will make him more stable when facing this kind of situation next time No one is born perfect The growth of the protagonist Long, witnessed by everyone As for the upper levels of the earth, I have not described too much for several reasons 1. Sensitivity, many things cannot be written, and some chapters have been blocked several times 2. The upper levels of the earth are weak, and the earth has entered an environment of jungle and dominance, and their right to speak is getting weaker and weaker br>3. In terms of power and leadership, I will focus on the chapter on Dazejie 4. The main purpose of this article includes not only the confrontation between people and aliens, but also the confrontation with people in Dazejie (The author gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning, walks for half an hour to the training institution for training, and has two hours to go home for lunch at noon. It only took me an hour to write while walking. In the afternoon, since I only had one hour of free time, I didn't have time to go home and have a meal. I wrote at the training institution for an hour and waited until class ended at 6:30. I got home at 9:00. I am too exhausted recently. Thank you for your support.)

"Daze World" is a work that gave me a headache to write. Due to some sensitive restrictions, a lot of things cannot be described. It is generally relatively slow to develop. The protagonist's ability to be reborn is determined to be in Chapter 72. Furthermore, because I was not familiar with the writing business mechanism of Qidian, the Golden Three Chapters came out too slowly. If I didn't calm down and look back, I would be easily abandoned. So, the author decided to write a book that echoes the characteristics of the starting point, which can attract people and divert them to Dazejie. The new book currently has 10,000 words written. It is in the internal investment stage and is being revised and improved. I believe I will meet you all soon. This is just one requirement for the new book. It's great!

Some people praise others and others criticize them. Isn't this normal? When you read it, you didn't feel the true emotion When I read it, I just integrated into it Not every book can perfectly suit everyone's appetite Let's put it this way, even if it is the first book on your list I can still find its shortcomings and say it is rubbish and ugly And publicize it, and constantly amplify the shortcomings Why bother to accuse it? It's a fact that the book was a little slow in the early stages It's a fact that Cao Yuan was a little embarrassed when he died I didn't find anything wrong with Jizi closing the door, after all, everyone's appreciation level is different

The book friend came to visit and was very pleased so he wrote quickly to write back.

Update soon, the plot is so fascinating!

It's very smooth to read, and it's pretty and not too toxic. Why am I the only one voting for it 😰

The author respects the readers, really

Originally it was a bit boring, but I didn't expect the author to add a paragraph. It's quite different. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. Are there many people who feel the same as me?

Although I have only read two chapters, I can see that the author has a great world view, big scenes, and a big plot. It is very good. Come on, I am really looking forward to the next development of the plot. What will Lao Hu become?

I haven't read it for two days, there are six more chapters, okay okay

It's well written, very interesting, and worth collecting

It's still available during the day, so stay tuned! All night coding

He actually carried a huge train carriage and jumped up and down the mountain stream, causing fallen leaves to fly in the forest. That carriage weighs at least a thousand kilograms! This young man who looks about the same size as himself is actually a hidden warrior! A train carriage weighs a thousand kilograms? ? ? ?

The highlight is coming🤫

Dear author, please remember your original intention and don't make a fantasy disguised as science fiction.

With a little bit of effort, the author please continue to work hard, and at least it will be successful on the day it is put on the shelves.

I also hope that the author will sign the contract as soon as possible

Very well written! Already collected! Big cheers for the author ↖(^ω^)↗! Looking forward to a return visit! Evaluate!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Three updates a day? I hope the author can attract popularity through the author friends around him. You can see who is willing to help you in the writer group. This book is at least a dry food level book. It is a pity that no one will read it. There is no malice here. I just want to make a suggestion. I am a high school student and I don't have time to watch it, so I can only watch it every Sunday afternoon for 5 hours. (High school is really tiring:'()

I have nothing to help but send a red envelope. I support you, bro.

Walking, supporting, waiting for your new work

Usually watch quietly and rarely speak

Will the Quanzhen game world be a real plane, or actually exist?

Come on л̵ʱªʱªʱª (ᕑᗢᓫา∗)˒ Finish it early so you can see more

Hasn't it been updated for a long time? Hey, please update quickly Ｏ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

Just write one book. Do you want to open two books?