I'm Really Not a Crow's Mouth

It was good at first, but then it became amazing. Looking at the title and introduction, I'm off topic 🙂

It's so difficult for authors nowadays. Not only do they have to carefully serve their readers, but they also have to resist the poisonous milk from their peers. I'm exhausted~

I heard that it can be refined this way, you know the author

Describe this book in four words, it's earthy and refreshing. This book would have been absolutely excellent ten years ago, and it was not impossible to become a god, but now it seems that many of the plots feel too old-school. The detailed design is also on the older side, a bit too straightforward compared to today's trends, and all the characters are too simple. To be able to write such a book, the author's level must be good enough. I don't dare to give any advice, so I just express my opinion. Reading this book gives me a sense of time and space displacement, as when I was still in school and reading line by line with an MP3, but... This kind of book is indeed not popular anymore. When I saw the scene where Li Bai resurrected the protagonist, I felt so angry that I couldn't help but feel unhappy.

If the author maintains his writing style and improves the writing and plot a little bit, he will definitely have a chance to become a god. If there is a limited exemption or a recommendation, it will definitely become popular.

Four bills plus finessing

In this recent period, the climax has come a bit too quickly. It feels like there is no story between Tang Tang and the people of Sanjin, but they have no feelings, so they have to use their lives to conquer the mountains and rivers. As soon as the Medicine Sage appeared, he burst into tears. The feelings came out of nowhere, as if the process was only in the author's heart. Just reading one chapter, the writing is very good and well rendered, but it is very abrupt.

This book is a bit interesting. Compared with the hundreds of various novels at Qidian. Com, it is a bit like freshly ground soy milk, with the freshness of beans and the stale taste of old grinding. It is quite fragrant. I feel like I'm reading a modernized version of Liaozhai. I can't say it's good, but it's also unique.

Not one chapter a day, nor two short and feeble chapters.

I feel like this book gets more and more bloody towards the end.

I would like to suggest that the main plot of this book seems a bit fast, but the look and feel is a bit like that of Liao Zhai and Conan, where a large number of small stories are filled with mixed main plots. So, should you consider slowing down the main plot and marginalizing the traditional upgrade flow? Chapter 100 of the current plot is the enlightenment soaring level again, and the identity is revealed on a large scale. It is really fast. Even though the levels have been abolished and rebuilt, the rhythm still feels wrong. If we make some adjustments and add more chapters to talk about the main plot, identity, and level, and write more broadly about each side story, it may be more suitable for the author's writing style and rhythm.

Invincible snake skin, no ability to commit suicide

Everyone who has been benefited by Sister Lily, please gather here and let the author see the power of Sister Lily.

Although the tyrannical rule of Dao Zulong is harsh, who knows that the six countries have been blessed? Unification can destroy the enemy's invaders? How can there be a river of blood when the city is captured? If there is violence, the breeze can't pass by? Words and abuses are woven with sails and brocades? If the writings, carriages and tracks are completely different, how divided is China today? Don't say that reunification will happen sooner or later. If you don't see the victory or defeat of the emperor, what's the point? The alchemist's false words will lead to fire, and the rotten scholar will deceive the world. Who is talking about it? Will the clear way of heaven return? The history of Gong Gong has built its own coffin? History is written by people's mouth, how can future generations talk about great achievements?

To be honest, maybe you are more slow and your writing is not in line with the public, but I like to read it. Maybe it is because you are not famous, so I can't find pirated copies and can only read the original ones. You see, it's good not to be famous. No one will read the pirated copies of your books, right? Everyone is a genuine reader, so you can't let down these genuine readers. Come on and write.

In this era where novices and cool essays are rampant, this book has a unique feeling and is a rare masterpiece. Perhaps due to unlucky times, this book is not very popular, but the author, please keep it up ^0^~!

I feel that the setting in the book is a bit like Snow and Sword, Celestial Realm, one force can break through thousands of armors, Confucianism and Business Qi can break mirrors, and the Ten Realms of Martial Arts are just a bit more fantasy.

The beginning is well written, but the plot is a bit too small later on. I can count the two hands that can really successfully shape the character. I am also confused that the chapter where "Wei Zheng" appears is a bit too random. The story can be more coherent. I like the author's writing style and will continue reading. Come on, author💪

This book is really good, I will recommend it

The writing and plot are all in vain when it comes to characterization. After watching it for a long time, I still can't see what's invincible about it.

Please express your personal opinion The protagonist sees people on the roadside starving to death, so he goes to rob rich people's things and give to the poor. But this is different from banditry. Being rich is not wrong. Please pay attention when writing. Taking other people's things to build your own reputation is a mistake, a low-level mistake. Many people abandon the book because this kind of bandit logic has too much logic and is poisonous and fatal.

After reading Chapter 257, the first volume was really good. I fully ordered it, but the more I read the later, the more disgusting it was. The cemetery of the First Emperor was okay The traditional cool articles passed the time The killing of the female gangster and the encounter with the old monk later were inexplicable It was said that the dog surnamed Long depends on the owner, and then kills them all. That is to kill and eliminate harm for the people You have nothing to do, why don't you ask the old monk why he doesn't want to let go ? ? ? I'm afraid there's something wrong. You, an outsider, don't know anything about other people's affairs and you go to question them? ? ? Madonna watch or white lotus? Then we went to that restaurant, and there were even more evil guests coming Is it okay to collapse? Is this Tangtang still the Tangtang who doesn't have any integrity on the surface but has a pure heart?

I found #! ‼ (•'╻'• )꒳ᵒ꒳ᵎᵎᵎThe author's enhancement is not valuable at all

This book doesn't suit my taste, but I still hope Xiaobai can finish it soon.

I've read Chapter 16. The protagonist has traveled through time. The description of the ghosts, the people in the coffins, and the funeral ceremony. Anyone who has taken a history class can guess it. Why can't the protagonist guess it? He hasn't gone to school and watched TV?

Chapter 25, Guess Tang Li is Tang Bai

Damn, when can I finish Guo Fengxiao's book 😢, although this one is also very good...

I have to say, it's quite vulgar. Pig's Feet is a rotten person, either careless or very annoying. This character is destined not to be popular

Change the title of the book. You can't even find pirated copies. Hahahaha, how many have been exposed?

One look at this introduction will put people off.