Old Stories

Mulan, the flower of rebirth... I feel like reading this book is like drinking old tea. Of course the fragrance is strong, because the writing is very good, and the author of the book is very kind to read. The story is a bit long and you need to calm down and taste it slowly. If the cow drinks it, it will probably be as bland and tasteless as boiled water. The refreshing and explosive points of legends in online articles are very sparse. After all, it is tea, not coffee and beer, but shouldn't a reasonable story be like this? I heard that this book needs one million words to be completed, so I'd better take my time. After all, the author's pen name has not yet arrived. It's not easy for moms. Come on~

Because there was a jump in the middle, I'll break it down in sections: 👩🏻‍🏫Starting [10,000 words]: The novel didn't get off to a good start. The first thunderbolt shakes the reader up, and then he focuses on the messy and trivial arrangements in the house, the fragmented main line of information that is not clear enough, the emotional line that is not complete, and then the aimless road to the north. This opening is too peaceful. Except for the flustered rhythm and compactness of the opening paragraph, the rest of the content is uninspiring. It's like watching a movie with no focus. A big thing happens at the beginning. You know there will be exciting things later. You keep looking forward to it. Ten minutes have passed and there is no tension. The camera is full of blurry people coming and going and a slightly pretentious emotional scene with no weight or foreshadowing. The amount of information is too small and thin, resulting in insufficient stickiness. Even if you know there are exciting things later, you will still feel powerless. 🐣 Quail's Suggestion Session: The emotional scene at the beginning actually needs to be written. The young lovers who know each other but cannot stay together can use more foreshadowing and more memories to build up the emotional atmosphere and make the plot more moving and grab the readers (I even hope that there will be no meeting here, just a farewell letter, which will make the later feelings of Mr. Han and Brother Wei more touching). The description of characters and the journey should be greatly compressed and the amount of information should be concentrated in one scene to increase the richness and thickness of the plot. 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍ 🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻 ‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 👩🏻‍🏫 Laying out period [two to two hundred thousand]: Starting from Su Jin's arrival in Liaodong, The story's readability and ability to capture people have been greatly improved. A series of planning strategies are very watchable. It can be seen that Sister Chichi has worked hard in this aspect (praise 🌺) This part of the plot is very complete and exciting. The only part that can be criticized is that the plot is probably a little unbalanced. At first, Qin Yuan's main task was to find out the grievances between her father and brother, but the content of 100,000 words almost stopped before rebirth. It was strict for Yu Li, but it was too slow for the pace of the novel. Secondly, the focus of the novel is all about military strategy, and it has become a bit aesthetically fatigued over time. Perhaps it could be interrupted by more whip-like episodes, the situation in the capital, or some touching memories to adjust the taste and enrich the content. Thirdly, the plot is a bit aimless and loose. I don't know how long this battle will last. The lack of a little "feedback" and "hope" will allow Su Jin to have a clearer plan and progress? In addition, this part of Sister Chi Chi's plot is well written, thick and meaningful, but military novels seem to be really cold, let alone writing about military affairs in the guise of ancient proverbs. You may want to think more about the subject matter and positioning of the work~ 🐣Quail's suggestion link: After reading 200,000, there is probably a better way to unfold the story, which is currently widely used: start with opening your eyes. One can avoid the procrastination and triviality of the protagonist's death, and the other can make the plot more shocking and moving. Imagine, Qin Yuan opens her eyes and wakes up, and the story is still a blank page. It starts from her brother's joining the army, and it is enriched little by little. Until the moment she steps on the battlefield, the picture of the bloody battle in her past life suddenly unfolds. Before the reader can recover, the protagonist meets the sweetheart who was bound by the past life again, and falls from the righteousness of family and country to the deep love. In the development of the story, "Uncle Zhongyong's Mansion was framed" is the suspense. It is not introduced as clearly as at the beginning of the story. Instead, it becomes an elusive mystery like the Nirvana in Fire, using the asymmetry in the amount of information to create the depth of the conspiracy. 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 👩🏻‍🏫Flood [Twenty to Two Hundred and Fifty Thousand]: Although Sister Chi Chi asked me not to watch it, my obsessive-compulsive disorder drove me to watch some... That's right. At the beginning of the dungeon plot, the same look and feel of sluggishness and triviality as at the beginning of the novel appeared. How to concisely and quickly pave the way for the subsequent plot is a topic worthy of study. The whole plot is indeed a bit light. Before the trip, the assassination, and walking from place to place. Generally speaking, there is no plot that can overwhelm the readers and it is a bit clueless. After reading 50,000 words, there is nothing to remember, but it does not feel very toxic. It is probably just a lack of creation in the middle of the work. I won't make suggestions until I've finished reading🙈 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 👩🏻‍🏫Suppression of Bandits [Around 400,000 to 600,000]: The story line is very clear, interspersed with Xiao Wanluotuo's branch plot, Lu Qizhong's branch plot, Kangzhen's (groundhog screaming) and the situation in the capital, so that the story does not seem thin. Overall, the breadth of the story is amazing. Even a veteran like me found it shocking. However, the depth is a bit thin (only for the bandit suppression section). The grandness of the story can be regarded as a group portrait, but what is more likely to happen in group portrait works is that the story is spread out too much and the depth seems insufficient, lacking a twists and turns and ups and downs to catch people. The way the story advances is to connect short and quick events. Whether it was a conscription, a snowstorm, or the elaborate incident or poisoning that made me think there would be a big move later, I was looking forward to some designs that could reflect the solver's plan from the front. Compared with the confrontation, I discovered something fishy, ​​and the problem was solved easily, and there were less unexpected arrangements (but the reversal of the Dog Prince was really beyond my expectation). The reason for this phenomenon may not be insufficient design, but the reason from God's perspective. Among all the unexpected detective or strategy stories, there are few such comprehensive perspectives, because the concealment of information will bring suspense, and from a God's perspective, you will only feel that there is nothing new under the sun. Secondly, some of the philosophical thinking in the book is still lacking. For example, when Qin Yuan kills people... I really can't accept her confession. It's acceptable for her to kill people, even if she doesn't explain, I can accept it, but this explanation is a little far-fetched (for me) (probably because it involves the orthodoxy and rationality of judicial trials, so it is difficult to be convinced by such a simple reason). Reasoning like making tea is also a bit superficial. Maybe I can write more in depth. If possible, I also look forward to Sister Chichi thinking more about reality~ And... I really wandered between the cold-blooded elder and the loyal dog Wei Er for a long time. The plot of Shen Shen snatching Qin Yuan away by any means and then falling in love and killing each other was so touching ( Ah hey! ) 👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍ 🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻 ‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫👩🏻‍🏫 💍 seize (fa) concubine (tang) The Civil Affairs Bureau has moved here for you! As a line that runs through the beginning and end, the centripetal force of seizing the heir is very strong and can organize the entire story without being disjointed or skipping the scene. Maybe it's because I skipped a section in the middle and didn't see the flood or hunting. However, looking at the two parts of the Liaodong war and the suppression of bandits, I felt that the part of seizing the direct descendants was too indirect. Because I read too slowly, I have always been afraid of falling in love with Sister Chichi. I actually felt relieved when I saw that the two of them could finally be honest and honest. 💍💍💍💍💍💍💍💍💍💍💍💍 🌈Some touches: Unknowingly, I have been with Qin Yuan, brother Wei Er, Luo Tuo (strange sense of substitution), and Shen Shen After experiencing so many stories, Qin Yuan is really not a reborn heroine in the secular sense. It is rare to see such a heroine relive her life not for revenge or counterattack, but simply for the persistence and desire of her previous life. Su Jin is completely different from the previous reborn heroines. She is not even reborn in the true sense. She just changes her identity and lives her life seriously and firmly. Looking back, who hasn't imagined being reborn to make up for all the regrets in the past? But there are so many choices in a person's life, how can he not leave any regrets? The beauty of aging is perhaps seeing clearly that those who have passed must not be rebuked, but those who have come can be chased. Just keep the regrets of 2019 in your heart, and work hard to become better in 2020~

There are some things that you don't know much about at first, but as you think about them bit by bit, you realize that they have endless charm. The same goes for people getting acquainted with each other. The great fate between Wuli and this author cannot be explained clearly in a few words, so in order to avoid taking up space, it is better to talk about the book itself. Once the Chen family was defeated, Chen Jin, who learned that her eldest brother and father were in trouble, resolutely went to the battlefield. I almost talked about this before I was reborn. After being reborn, Chen Jin woke up and found herself in a different place. She looked in the mirror and learned that she had borrowed a corpse to return her soul, and the girl she borrowed was named Qin Yuan. ...... The reason why ancient sayings fascinate people over and over again lies in the impact that the background of the past era has had on modern people. In other words, look at something different. Because it doesn't exist, it is out of reach in daily life, so it is novel. The author has obviously achieved this. From the maids, wives, and ladies to the details of the characters' language and behavior, everything attracts the readers' attention. It can be seen that the author has put in a lot of effort before opening the book. What is very comfortable is that every time the screen is switched, the reader can have a general impression through the existing text - as if one ancient picture scroll after another is presented in front of them. The details are handled well. …… After all that has been said above, two words cannot escape: language. As far as many ancient romance novels are concerned, this book is above average. Some people may read this sentence and think that the evaluation is too high, but in fact it is not. Not to mention whether what the character said is consistent with the character, just looking at whether the text itself is out of the historical background is a kind of polish for the author himself. I still remember that I tried reading an ancient book not long ago. I won't mention my name to avoid starting a fight. The use of words in the book is very different from this one. Rich people are called tyrants. Exclamation marks and question marks can be seen everywhere. What's more, in many places one has to suspect that it is a so-called ancient romance work cloaked in modern words - it is really funny. In fact, there are many similar works. Maybe it's because people's different needs have led to changes in the market, maybe it's because the use of ancient proverbs makes the brain unable to stop working and can't relax, maybe it's because laziness has become a major trend... Who knows. In short, the very act of carving words is worthy of praise. …… As the title says: Taste one product, old wine. There are many unknown works that require us to do this in order to understand the painstaking efforts involved. For example, a look in the character's eyes, or an action that does not fit the setting. If you don't pay attention when reading, you will easily be confused later. It is necessary to complain quietly here. . Who is Mr. Qingyuan? After seeing the heroine reborn, I still don't know who he is. Before he died, he said that he lived up to the master's trust and took care of the heroine. And when he mentioned the male protagonist before, he used "that person", so Mr. Qingyuan cannot be the male protagonist. Then the question is, who is this guy? . . And when he interacts with the heroine, it's a bit curious. It's a bit ambiguous but I can't say it is, and he seems to be interested in the heroine. But didn't he take orders from others, so why did he fall in love with the heroine? Ahem, Sorry, the complaining reader couldn't hold back his words for a while. Also, I secretly hope that if the author has a chance to see this, please give me an answer. …… Let's talk about some of the highlights of this book. 1. Speak fluently and won't play tricks. 2. The writing is good and not embarrassing. 3. The details are in place and not awkward. 4. Guaranteed cheating, no eunuchs. 5. The plot has twists and turns and you won't get bored. 6. The male protagonist is affectionate and will not get angry. 7.......... The most important thing is that the name sounds nice! I don't know if other people have this problem, but in my case, if the protagonist's name is not catchy, I won't continue reading it, no matter how good the story is. It may be due to obsessive-compulsive disorder or perfectionism. . . …… Come on, I've been praising you for so long. If a book review is all about praise and praise, it will really be like a rainbow. Moreover, relying on the fact that I have a strong head and the author's self-confidence that he is very good at cutting people with a knife, as an enthusiastic reader, here is my opinion. It's not really an opinion, it's just a suggestion. In short, the following remarks are all personal opinions and are a series of thoughts arising from personal writing experience. If there is anything inappropriate, please ignore it. First of all, I think the character design needs to be strengthened. This does not refer to changing the persona or adding to the original setting. It means that it would be better if what a person says and does can be slightly closer to the persona. The first is personality, and the second is human nature. There is no need to say much here about the nature of human nature. As written in a review post in the review area of ​​this book, the heroine went to talk to the hero at the beginning. She probably knew that she would not have a future with him, so the heroine addressed the hero very politely, even with alienation. There is nothing wrong with this, However, If a woman knows that there is no future with the person she loves, then even if she has a strong temperament and even clearly breaks up with her, if there is no expression in the details such as facial expressions and movements, it will make the character look dull. The eyelashes are trembling slightly, the hand that wants to reach out is retracted, if that doesn't work, a little psychological description is okay. (This is just an example) Secondly, there is a little more writing on unnecessary supporting characters. This mother-in-law, that maid, the wife of which room, the prince and the emperor's first assistant, and so on. Especially when writing about plots such as a house, it is easy for people to forget the character names if they are too many. It would be better for a more attentive reader. If you just swallow the whole story, you may still not know who does that by the time you vomit it out. How can I put it, too many things appear at once, and there is no corresponding easy-to-remember plot. It plays a role in promoting the plot, but sometimes it needs to be reconsidered. No matter whether the character's status is important or not, if they are all written as A, B, C and D, it will be difficult to grasp the key points. Then, the interaction between the protagonists became less interesting. ...... That's about it. Anyway, I hope that readers who are willing to take the time will read this book. It's a good book, a good book. The authors who have put in their thoughts and hard work, will not let you down. Recommended~

📝Writing Style: Sister Chi Chi's writing style is very clean, with no fancy words to interfere with reading. She is a calm and objective narrator. The only shortcoming is probably that the depiction of the big scenes is slightly lacking, and maybe it can be more detailed and realistic. But I have always had high expectations for Sister Chi Chi's writing style, so I was a little disappointed. Disappointment comes from the lack of recognition. If you click on the old saying, the stories that people can read are probably the same. As a storyteller, it is certainly enough, but it will occasionally make people feel aesthetic fatigue; but as a creator, recognizable writing can quickly catch people's attention and attract fans. Sister Chichi may be able to go one step further. Play with jokes playfully, write interesting things in an elegant way, or use serious dry humor (which is already a bit interesting), come on! Sister Chi Chi fighting~🙌🏻 📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝 👩‍👩‍👧‍👦Characters: The characters in the novel are very clear and vivid, but I always feel that the heroine lacks something. The power of clicking directly touches people's hearts. The excessive calmness and restraint in the early stage caused the sense of distance to be too strong, and there was no way to achieve empathy; compared to Brother Wei Er, who is flustered, willful, stubborn, and a little love-minded, Su Jin is more likely to be popular among passers-by. In the later period, Su Jin and brother Wei Er recognized each other. The first scene was very, very touching. Su Jin's helplessness, brother Wei Er's eagerness, and their affection were all unspeakable. But later on, the two gradually became tired of each other, and the heart-pounding affection as in the first scene was missing. It wasn't until they reunited after a long separation that I let out a woodchuck scream. My favorite love line so far (in terms of technique and appeal) should be Minglan and the second uncle. Do you know that both the novel and the TV series have retained a plot. In the novel, Minglan accuses Uncle Gu of not being flustered for her. In the TV series, it is changed to Uncle Gu being angry that Minglan doesn't care about him. This awkwardness is real and very cute. When the emotional scene enters the state of being as stable as a dog, it is difficult to have the power to move people (maybe I am older...) Similarly, when a character enters the state of being as stable as a dog, it is difficult to read closely. Of course, Su Jin hides her emotions and is relatively restrained, but it is not appropriate to give the character more inner monologues and the reality of being alone when no one is around. Whether she collapses or loses control, don't think about taking it back as soon as she collapses (who hasn't collapsed yet), and let the readers' pent-up energy be vented. Only in this way can readers feel that "she turns out to be an ordinary person like us." Maybe the popularity among passers-by will be much better. In addition, although the supporting roles are few (of course because I have seen less), they still have their own characteristics, including the outstanding Luo Zhixing (Camel?), Shen Shen, and Su Xin. They are really beautiful. There are so many men, which one should I choose... 👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩 ‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨 ‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍👦👨‍👩‍👧‍ 👦 🗒Plot: Judging from the previous 200,000 words, Sister Chi Chi has already written the title The plot is almost perfect within the scope of the material. Even if I want to be picky, I can't fault the plot, the empty content or the lack of description. I personally like such a detailed and grand plot that is not boring. Being able to write the story in my heart to this extent, in terms of the degree of completion, I can have a clear conscience. I will only mention a few disappointing points below (actually, the flaws are not concealed). 1. Su Jin's father and her brother are actually not dead. Su Jin went to Liaodong just to see her father once, and she lost her life (it would be a pity if she didn't have the golden finger of resurrection). At the same time, the end of the war had a relatively dramatic element, which seemed too stingy. 2. Finding out that her father was murdered gave the readers a lot of expectations at first, but the follow-up was obviously weak and the suspense was not always grasped. So when Su Jin returned to Beijing and started investigating the matter, I was not interested in knowing who committed the murder (cue Langya List here).

The beginning of the chapter is about defeat. How should I put it? It feels like it is about to rise but it is suppressed first. It is actually a bit slow to warm up. I wrote a chapter about the various ways in which people in the house deal with each other, and then at the end the male protagonist Wei Yong appeared. After clicking on it, I saw the author's label for our male protagonist: a loyal dog. Loyal dog vs what? This is the only thing I am curious about. I have to say, Wei Yong, this name is very popular with me. It will happen again in the future to call like crazy just by looking at the name, haha. Let's talk about the plot. To be honest, I haven't read a drama-oriented book for a long time, especially the ancient novels, because the other book I am currently serializing is a drama-oriented ancient novel. One is that I don't dare to read it for fear of disturbing the plot, and the other is that reading this kind of book is really tiring. Not only are readers tired from reading, the author himself is also tired from writing. It's not groundless, it's a real drama – whoever wrote it knows. Off topic. Why did I read the book again? One is because the title of the book made me very curious. It seems to be a serious drama at first glance. The other is because the introduction mentioned a woman who disguises herself as a man and joins the army. Brother Bing is so handsome, even in ancient times. Again and again, the author is probably my fellow countryman. So everyone, why don't you come and take a look?

Since the starting point has changed the click calculation method, it is so difficult to keep clicking, and I feel tired~ In order to adapt to everyone's time, starting from next Monday, the update time of this article will be changed to 8 a. M. And one chapter will be updated at 6 p. M. Hmm~ Friends who like this article, please leave your suggestions~ Give me a small ticket of recommendation~ Finally, I would like to thank many friends for their support, thank you~

Zhongyongbo's eldest son lost his life due to a misguided action. Zhongyongbo was defeated and surrounded, and his mansion was ransacked. Zhongyongbo's eldest daughter Su Jin had to support the family and led the counselors to escort them all the way north to Liaodong, just to find out the grievances of her father and brother. After traveling through mountains and rivers and briefly reunited with her father, she found clues that his father was seriously injured, but could only die for the country with his father. When he opened his eyes again, Su Jin became Qin Yuan, the daughter of a military household in Liaodong. After the border was settled, Qin Yuan went south to Beijing, and the old conspiracy was uncovered layer by layer. Qin Yuan's identity gradually emerged. Floods, banditry, and heirloom seizures, let's see how Qin Yuan can help this world. Who said that the ancient story of Nupin does not have a careful and steady strategy, a majestic and magnificent world view, and a delicate and true picture of the border. Not only do we have it, but we also have the sincerity of a young man who makes people sigh in the face of adversity, and the affectionate love of Ladu that makes people move at the critical moment. Add helplessness, hesitation, unrequited love, and unrequited love into the cold old memories. In this way, the old memories not only reflect the righteousness of family and country, but also include small and real characters and their trivial but touching stories - those who insisted on going north for the sake of their father and brother's innocence. The girl in the boudoir, the young general who lost his sense of proportion in order to kill his enemy's sweetheart, the military son who missed his unmarried wife... Every little thing like this, all the little people, make the hatred between family and country more sympathetic, and add a little more warmth to the old story. Besides the temperature, the story is also very broad and rich. This is not a intrigue in the three acres of land in the inner house, but a journey between heaven and earth. In order to redress the injustice, to benefit the common people, to support justice, and to uphold the Taoist heart, the story goes from the heights of the temple to the far reaches of the rivers and lakes and then beyond the borders. In the extremely broad world, the author has created a large number of vivid and distinctive characters to support the richness of the stories in the court, battlefield, and folk. (PS: The calm and sinister handsome Mr. Xiaoge, the free and uninhibited arrogant Gong, the considerate and loyal dog general... As long as you want it, we have it here.) The author's writing style is not strong wine, not sugar water, but a cup of light and distant green tea (eh?). It is light and light, and nothing else disturbs the vision except the story itself. However, the more you read, the more you will be immersed in the scenes of the story, and taste the weight and excitement of the story. Sit and drink the cool water and watch the dust fry. Wuyou holds a bowl and sends it to tea lovers.

When I first heard that a book review of only fifty words could create a beautiful and exquisite notebook, I closed my eyes and thought about it... It's worth it! Then I opened your book, Sister Chi. After reading it for the first time, I still felt that the writing was very good, and the writing style was my favorite. (The number of words is enough) After turning two pages, the terrible idea of ​​becoming a disciple came to my mind. If one day I can get the true copy of Sister Chi's writing style, I will definitely be able to kill everyone in the street community and become an elegant person who can criticize people with poetry. Nothing to mention, the author's description of the scenes and the details of the characters are at their peak in my eyes. I am not good enough to comment on this. If you, a rough guy like me, are forced to pick a bone in the egg... The beginning is a group play, which is undoubtedly an invisible filter for readers. For a night owl like me who has a poor memory, after flipping through a few photos, I can't remember how many people came out. Although each character's identity, personality, and role are extremely distinct. But because I have been involved in Xiaobaiwen for many years, when I saw things that required a lot of thinking, I naturally wanted to quit... But Sister Chi, there is no need to dwell on my crude opinions. Because in my opinion, a story like yours is suitable to be remade into a beautiful costume drama. I heard that these crews only look at the story and not the results. So just write what you think. Come on＾0＾~. Also, good luck always comes late, maybe yours just hasn't arrived...

I have always felt that the title of this book has two meanings. One is that it is a period of history in Dachen, and the other is that it is a period of history that was sealed many years ago. When liberal arts students study history, they always feel inexplicably sad. Why? Because often two or three sentences can cover the entire life of a generation or even several generations. What would a girl in that era be like? They are a cold symbol printed in the family tree of the ancestral hall. Who can know what kind of life this symbol has lived? I want to write a biography for Su Jin. "Shen Su is a native of Beijing. Her father was an earl and named Zhongyong. She was proficient in poetry and poems, and she also practiced martial arts with her father and brother. She is different from ordinary Jiao'e. In the winter of the 25th year of Tianshun, Uncle Zhongyong was defeated in Liaodong. He went north to Liao to help his father. He broke the captives with a whip and was very brave. He died on the 30th of the twelfth lunar month in the 25th year of Tianshun, in the sixteenth year of his life. Entered into the shrine of the Shen family." ——"Chen Shi·Biography of Ming Fu and Qi Women·Biography of Shen Su" Her life will only have a few strokes in the history books, and she will not even be able to leave her own name. Su Jin's life is over, but Qin Yuan's is not. The young man's life will still shine in the history books of Dachen. Even if there is only one symbol left, it has been here before.

Well, my special session in the work exhibition circle will officially start on the 13th~ Friends who like "Old Chronicles" are welcome to come to the work exhibition circle to cheer me up~~ There will be small extras and various small activities. Of course, benefits are indispensable~ All relatives and friends are welcome to participate~~ Address: Starting Point Dot Circle - Works Exhibition Circle~~ Looking forward to your appearance~~~~Love you~~~🌹🌹❤️❤️

During the Tianshun period of the Great Chen Dynasty, Uncle Zhongyong was defeated and the prince died in the battle. After hearing this, Su Jin, in order to find out the truth, took only a few people and went north to Liaodong to find his father. When they arrived in the north, they fought with the garrison in the city and defended the territory. Unexpectedly, there were many Jin soldiers, and they were eventually killed by arrows. When she opened her eyes again, she had become the daughter of the Qin family. Due to the need for conscription, she had to join the army for her brother. From then on, Qin Yuan began her journey in the army. When I first read this book, my first impression was that Hua Mulan joined the army in place of her father. This is the story of the daughter of the Qin family joining the army in place of her brother. In this story, I particularly like the contrast between Qin Yuan before and after her rebirth. The original Qin Yuan was a girl from an ordinary family. She wanted to get married and have children and live an ordinary life. When she heard that her mother asked her brother-in-law to join the army, she would resist. She felt that this was whimsical and she was afraid. She did not have enough strength and courage to bear such a heavy burden. After the rebirth, Qin Yuan came from a family of generals and was very familiar with military affairs. In addition, she had practiced martial arts since she was a child, and there were a series of things such as the defeat of the Su family and the whereabouts of her brother waiting for her to find out the truth, so she insisted on agreeing to this matter. The other side is the contrast between Su Jin. Su Jin in the capital has the protection of her family and the convenience of her status. She is in love with Wei Yong and everything goes very smoothly. Although she has martial arts skills, she still looks like a noble lady in the capital. Someone will protect her from the wind and rain. After rebirth, Su Jin became Qin Yuan, a daughter of a low-level military family. She had no family protection, no brother's support, and even the people she loved were strangers. She was close at hand, but she couldn't tell the secrets in her heart. She was really weak at that time and had to rely on herself for everything. Fortunately, she had a strong heart and walked step by step with strength and belief. She especially liked this image of an independent heroine. There are also this kind of well-matched and online IQ strategies, war scenes in the army, Qin Yuan and Wei Yong's discussion on the use of troops, etc. In terms of emotional scenes, I actually felt a little sorry for Shen Shen, who could only guard Su Jin's memorial tablet, and when he saw that King Yan wanted to accept Qin Yuan, Wei Yong's careless attitude made me want to laugh, haha, you will regret it in the future. When the two of them had gone through so many things, and when Qin Yuan told Wei Yong that she was Su Jin, I particularly liked the sentence, "It's great that you are back." Wei Yong knows Su Jin too well. If he could choose again, Wei Yong would still let Su Jin do what he likes. I think this is Wei Yong's most sincere feeling.

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Book title🌱: "Old Chronicles" Author🌱: Has not arrived yet Watch word count🌱: ninety chapters Brief review🌱 (I have tried my best (ಥ_ಥ)): Drama-style ancient romances are very rare nowadays, so the first impression is very surprising! I like it~ First point🌸: The writing is very skillful and smooth, and it looks very comfortable. For example: after the heroine is reborn, through the dialogue with Qin's mother and the conflicts caused by the dialogue, the background of the heroine's environment after rebirth is quickly laid out. Then the relationship between each character is also vividly described, making people want to keep reading~ Second point🌸: The description of the characters of those people is great. (This is the feeling after reading the previous forty chapters) The heroine, who always straightens her back and looks proud, her strong character is fully revealed in her words. After her rebirth, her intelligence and wisdom are fully revealed, and she is not inferior to the male protagonist at all. There is also the male protagonist who worked silently and made a whip for the female protagonist without telling her. She didn't interfere with the heroine, but because of his non-interference, after the heroine passed away, she really felt sorry for him. There is also a crematorium for chasing his wife. Xiao Weiwei, please be more careful. Qin Yuan is your wife. ... There are many, many others, so I won't mention them one by one. Third point🌸: The scenes that first appear in the novel are very grand, especially the battle... Sister Chi is very powerful, but she lacks a little bit of characterization. (Desire for Survival) In the subsequent plot at the end of the war, I felt that the story became fuller instantly. But a slight drawback is that when the princes and princes appear on the stage and trigger the battle for the heir, the plot line becomes a little unclear, and the contradictions seem to deviate. Is it the heroine's revenge to find out the mastermind behind the scenes, or is it the main plot to seize the direct line? (Of course, the author still brings the reader back to the main line at almost chapter 90. Reference: The author's book has more than 400 chapters, so these are just minor problems. The book is still very good!) The fourth point🌸: The background description in the novel creates a very solemn atmosphere, and it also clearly highlights the character's taste, mood, etc. The fifth point🌸: The characters are not concrete enough, and some characters are not fleshed out enough. To be honest, there were a lot of characters appearing from the beginning, but none of them were accurately described. Moreover, the description of the appearance can reflect the character's heart, so I will put a little more detail here so that readers will not be confused. (This is just the feeling at the beginning. When you watch the later, you will find that each character has a distinct personality. Each character is so cute and cute. I like it so much!) 😍Wei Yong - I feel that I care about Qin Yuan very much, but I feel that I can't betray Su Jin. Those struggles really lead to many scenes of chasing his wife in the crematorium. But who told him not to know that they are the same person, hee hee ~ 😍Qin Yuan - that sentence "You will definitely regret it!" Is so domineering. It speaks of my psychological activities, but it also shows her inner struggle. Should she choose love or 'career'? She was very distressed. 😍Brother Taohua is thinking about it - he is very good-looking (this is a compliment to his beauty, there is no ambiguity!), And the hearts of those who look at him will be moved. At present, it seems that he is interested in Su Jin, and inviting Su Jin to the Shen family ancestral hall is really warm to me. 😍Su Xin's fierce little brother: On the surface, he is the eldest son of Su, but secretly he is a girl-controller (cover his mouth and laugh~) Especially the part where he is quarreling with Wei Yong, it is so cute~ 😍The fox brother Luo Zhixing - he wanders around looking for the heroine all day long, but I still like his character very much. 😍The last drama princes, they are also very cute, the upright prince, the cowardly King Yan, the drama king Ning, and the naughty King Jin... They all have their own cuteness! ⭐️Looking at these cuties, I consciously smiled like a girl~⭐️ The sixth point🌸: When the heroine received the news of her father's defeat, she was too calm at first. Although it has something to do with her character, she is a young lady from an aristocratic family. Without any past introduction, she was still a little too calm. Seventh point 🌸: I didn't react at first when the heroine was reborn. Although Sister Chi laid the foundation for it later, I think it would be more shocking if it was narrated not in flashback, but in chronological order, so that there would be no abrupt disconnection of the story. Point 8🌸: The story at the beginning is still a little delayed. Moreover, some transitions are a bit abrupt, because some are not written from the perspective of male and female characters, so you still need to think carefully when making transitions. Maybe it's because I think it interrupted the tension between the heroine and the hero on the battlefield and their previous emotional line, and the plot was slightly unbalanced. PS: I really like Sister Chi's Shusha! Looking forward to my fans, I stayed up late to write. 😖❤️

Come on, little sister~ Wait until the little sister becomes a god and take me to fly.

Lingchi? So bloody😁

The beginning of all stories is probably because Qin Yuan picked up a husky. On her 29th birthday, Qin Yuan went for a morning run as usual and passed the bushes in the small park on time at seven o'clock. There is a bench in front of the bush. In the past, young lovers often sat on it, but there is no such bench today. There was a box on the chair today, and it was humming and calling inside. Listening to this sound, Qin Yuan knew what it was - oh, a puppy. She had no expression on her face and ran past the bench, leaving the poor little kid alone in the box barking miserably.        Qin Yuan ran out for 180 meters, when something suddenly went wrong under her feet. Instead of stopping, he started running backwards. She fell back to the bench and looked at the small items in the box.                                                                                                                                                                                              but huskies, I don't want to tear down the house. The dog in the box probably saw the contempt and disgust in her eyes, and immediately turned over with a groan, turning its soft belly in front of Qin Yuan, and only had to write a few big words - please support her. Qin Yuan blinked, slowly moved her face away, and walked away. If you can't even support yourself, why should you raise a dog? What she didn't expect was that when she came home from her morning run, she would have a box in her hand. The dog inside passed out happily, oh no, fell asleep in her arms.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br But the only relationship so far ended on the day of college graduation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       <br Among that kind of men, how about bringing back a soldier brother, right? Qin Yuan rolled her eyes, haha.                                                                                                                                 The social animal Qin Yuan threw the husky she just picked up at home, then went out to squeeze into the subway with two steamed buns and a bag of soy milk in her mouth. Within two minutes, the person came back, opened a crack in the door, and threw a bun through the crack, hitting the Husky's box very accurately. Meaty. After getting on the subway, Qin Yuan remembered that the gadget she picked up today didn't have a name yet? What should I call it?        ，……        ， Social animal Qin Yuan is neither a lawyer nor a judge, but a legal consultant for a private company. The small company couldn't sign a few contracts a year, and she had little use for it. The leader looked at her as if he saw a big piece of chicken ribs lying in front of him. Job-hopping? Don't dare. There are too many outstanding people in big cities, but I can barely afford to pay the rent. On the first day back home, Wei Er did not break up the house and got along well with Qin Yuan. The little thing just grumbled for a long time to express that he was not full. Well, he probably wanted to eat meat. The price of pork has increased again. Hey, ancestor. Qin Yuan thought to herself. In the end, Gouzi Weier and himself had takeout food together. After that day, Qin Yuan's morning running team became one person and one dog. Wei Er ran in front happily, holding his ears. Qin Yuan was panting and chasing after her, feeling that her old arms and legs were about to be broken.        ，， Qin Yuan looked at the big guys crowding in front of her, wanting to hug and rub her, and thought to herself, it's such a hot summer, don't you feel too hot? One night, when Qin Yuan came in, Wei Er felt that she was not in the right mood. I didn't come up to scold it, nor did I laugh with it. As soon as I got home and turned on the computer, it started to crackle.        ——，， Wei Er grunted, walked up to her, raised his feet and sat on the chair. "Wei Er, go to Bian'er." Qin Yuan's words were concise and to the point. Wei Er took it one step further, jumped on her legs, and pointed his big furry head at Qin Yuan's face. "You're promising, what do you want to do?" Qin Yuan raised her eyebrows, her eyes a little wet, "You're not sensible at all!" Wei Er licked her face. As soon as Qin Yuan stretched out her hand, she wanted to slap the thing down, but after holding it up for a long time, she finally failed. She stretched out her hands, slowly hugged the big dog's neck, and buried her face in its long hair. She was crying just now, and Wei Er was licking her tears. However, it is always hard for adults to cry. Especially when your mom calls you. Wei Er's hair was long, and before Qin Yuan's tears fell on its skin, the phone rang. Qin's mother was here. Qin Yuan wiped her face casually and pressed the answer button. "Girl, if you come back for the Chinese New Year this year, don't go to the Imperial Capital anymore, right? You can work in front of mom, and you feel at ease." "Your brother's comrade-in-arms has resigned, and he is going home during the Chinese New Year. Can I introduce you to him?" "That's not the case." Qin Yuan laughed dryly twice, "I don't want to be a military wife." She put down her phone and put her arm around Wei Er's neck: "Xiaoer, I have to take the high-speed rail to go home during the Chinese New Year. Dogs are not allowed on the high-speed rail. What should you do?" Can she afford to take care of her pets? But if she throws it at a friend's house, who is willing to take care of her? As I was thinking about it, I suddenly felt that the Erha on my legs was much heavier. I looked up... This, this, this! ! ! ! Her Wei Er somehow became a tall and tall man, and pressed her on the back of the chair: "Don't go on a blind date." Qin Yuan: "..." "I can take the high-speed rail like this. You take me home during the Chinese New Year and show it to your mother." Qin Yuan covered her mouth in excitement. What is she most grateful for now? She didn't sterilize Wei Er because she had no money!

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The writing is average, the plot is bad, the logic is bad, but the writing is top notch. If you like big heroines and strong women, just read the writing and imagine it yourself. This is a story about a strong and pure Mary Sue.

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, sister Chichi🎉❤️❤️❤️

It seems that half of the fish pond next month will be divided...

The bottom of Sister Chi's book is like a little sister's tea party. Wow, I'll join in.

Congratulations on finishing the book (๑• . •๑)😁

How should I put it, the writing is OK, but some of the plot settings are problematic. According to the author's character setting, the male protagonist is very affectionate and determined. Is it possible that his mood was disturbed by the reborn female protagonist just a few months after the original female protagonist died tragically? Even if the male protagonist treats the reborn female protagonist differently at first, it should be out of appreciation and compassion, and it should never be out of the slightest affection between a man and a woman. It can only be said that the author forcibly eliminated the affectionate setting of the male protagonist in order to advance the emotional line between the male and female protagonists.