The Strongest Man-Machine in the Alliance

It's well written, but it's too real. It's really so depressing. After watching it, I felt so depressed that I didn't want to watch it anymore. The book is indeed very good, but unfortunately, the author, you still don't understand who the people who read League of Legends are. Most of them are not too old, and some are even still studying. You are obsessed with the position of the reader, or to put it more bluntly, you may not have considered understanding it from the reader's perspective. Nowadays, people who watch this type of game are either watching the description of the game, or they are just looking for fun. As for your description of the game process, it's not that it's not good, but it doesn't achieve the feeling of an amazing scene. And to be honest, so far, I don't see much of a joy in it. Maybe you are laying the groundwork, but it is best to lay the groundwork, not too long, otherwise many readers will die halfway before you finish laying the groundwork. For example, I am already dead on the edge of the halfway point. I want to continue reading, but I think your description is too realistic. You know, this is the League of Legends division, which is equivalent to a cool division. Your description of reality is too unrealistic. Let me give you some suggestions. Either keep writing in a semi-prepared form, or don't write in a realistic way, and to be more straightforward, don't be too depressing. In other words, relatively speaking, this kind of content is slightly reduced. As for your topic, the progress is too slow. You can speed it up a little, or cut off some branches. There is no need to lay the groundwork in such detail. You should understand a little bit. Nowadays, the older people who read this type of content mostly find time to play two games and relax. The younger ones like to read cool articles now, but what you have written so far, if you write like this, will anyone still read it? When writing a book, you must at least ensure that you can retain people first. Then you should consider grades and quality. Even if your quality is higher than heaven, it is of no use if you cannot retain people.

I have a question, are the protagonist's teammates also humans and machines? ? ? How good are your teammates compared to their opponents?

Updates are so slow. Short and slow 😤😤

Zhang has been really frustrated in the past two days. This kind of teammate doesn't deserve to win.

Updates are too slow

I originally read the novel just to be happy, to have some fun, but I didn't find the fun, and it also made me feel blocked. This foreshadowing is not the ordinary upgrade like ordinary people, but the feeling that has been suppressed all the time. It is too long and long, and the dissuading effect is too strong. Quickly speed up the pace.

The writing is slow and boring. Others' plots go from low to high, but yours goes from average to low It's so real, so real that there's no need to read your novel Farewell

Why is the eunuch so convinced?

I'll be the first to comment. Come on, I've added a bookshelf.

You're trying to trick me, I've tried it, Sword Princess can't Q flash, and she can't press flash when she's Q.

When will the live broadcast start? I want to watch the live broadcast. And it's best not to join that kid's team.