On Graduation Day, I Got the Source of Happiness

Yo yo, yo yo... Shuai Bijia is here! Hailou. I am the little brother, the most handsome boy from the beginning... Zhuge's little brother (=´∀｀) people (´∀｀=). Book title: "Money troubles come into prosperity" Author: That's almost it. Commentator: Actually, my name is "Sheep Liangliang". (This sitting (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻) A brief comment: From ordinary to extraordinary. What do we need? First impression: Regarding this book, the first thing that attracted me was the sentence above Sanjiang: "Is money the source of all evil or the source of happiness?" So, what will I tell you about this sentence? Let me tell you, money can be replaced by silver coins, copper coins, US dollars, and little money. So money is just one of the misunderstood props, but it cannot be denied! Well, let's get back to the topic. Let's look at the introduction and the title of the book. I won't mention it on the cover (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵)... Because there are too many similar titles. The use of homonymous words in the idiom proves that this is a story about money, and the words of San Shenhao in the introduction! I guess it is an urban cool article. The style is more relaxed, and the words about dreams in the introduction should be a little bit sensational. Introduction: Is money the source of all evil, or the source of happiness? Br> Not only does it take away your kidneys, but it also takes away your heart. It's not only about having fun but also having a career. Story setting: Modern city. Story style: Godly novel + Shuangwen harem. My name is Wu Qian, an ordinary fat boy. . Like many people, I have gone through the battle of spare tires. In the end, my original dream turned into a real dream. But fortunately, a small stone gave me a very long dream. Maybe this is not a dream, but I hope that I will not wake up. Then in my dream, I have Shenhao. The system, just like in the novel, I have unlimited money. The purpose of the system is to enjoy life and find myself. Money is good, and no one will go against it. After accepting this kind of life arrangement, I gradually started my own path to glory. Having money does not mean being brilliant, it means spending money and saving money. I have a system, but I have never been a stupid person. From the time I first prepared for my parents to go away, to the time when I gradually developed my own strength in reality, I have always been afraid of what will happen to me without the system. So development is inevitable. Maybe, the system just gives me a hopeless future. A platform limited to money! But to reach the top of life, you have to rely on yourself and your own luck! The future is waiting for me, they, they, I will cherish it. Summary of advantages: 1. In terms of writing style, as usual, the subject matter of this book belongs to Shenhao Wen, and the principle of Shenhao Wen is to spend money effortlessly and achieve daily enjoyment. The ultimate! Then this book has achieved it, and it is also very interesting on the way to reading. 2. It has IQ! This is a rare thing about this subject. After all, I have read a lot of great novels, and they often spend money in vain. Judgment. 3. Very realistic, a story that cannot appear in our reality! But what if you have money? So this book is very realistic. Having money does not mean that you can indulge yourself without limit. The plot is already there, but here it has just reached the level of county hegemony, and it has just started, so there is still a lot of development in the later period. This should prove that you can read it with confidence. The flaws; then the flaws should be in the later issues, and there are flaws in the writing. First of all, the flaws in the writing are typos and wording. I personally find it uncomfortable in some places. Maybe these words can be used in some places. It makes me feel uncomfortable. If there is another question, it refers to the harem! I have been surprised in the early days. Isn't this great novel about the harem? But after reading it, I found out ╮(￣▽￣" )╭Well, Shenhao still cannot escape the fate of the harem. Story direction: Although the story does not spend money mindlessly like many Shenhao novels, it will also follow the final destination of many Shenhao novels, develop its own power, and become self-sufficient in the future. Recommended for the audience: In terms of writing style, it is first recommended to readers who like to read relaxed and refreshing novels. , As for the subject matter, it's a powerful and powerful novel. Finally, it's a rather interesting novel. In the early stages of the story, there may be some shortcomings, but later on, you slowly let yourself go and experience and enjoy what a real powerful novel should do. This is very good in terms of the direction of the story. Of course, the shortcomings that come with this method gradually come. It's just starting to get uncomfortable. To be honest, I don't recommend the driving aspect after reading it. However, I may be more conservative and don't like harems. However, according to the audience of readers of Shenhao, this book may be better. So, this book is not much different from my first impression. From the title of the book, it is mainly about money. A generous story! And because of the initial confusion and some things, it was a little more sensational. Maybe I didn't resonate with the author's feelings, but it was still very good. The final sentence is: "No matter whether you are rich or poor, whether you are high or low, filial piety comes first, good! Great! Thumbs up to you!"

During this time, many book friends said that the plot about the two female protagonists was very embarrassing. I also read it several times. After thinking about it carefully, Shen Hao's novels are really not suitable for discussing relationships in detail. When I first read it, I always suggested that the author should just have one or two female protagonists. The result is like this... Why do you say that Shen Hao's novels are not suitable for single female protagonists now? It's not that they are not suitable, but that it is really difficult to write well. The golden finger of the protagonist gives the protagonist the ability to avoid too many hardships in the rise of grassroots rich people. As for the pressure caused by money... Can you call it pressure? Under the premise that the protagonist is super rich, any heroine will have low self-esteem. Any heroine who is close to the protagonist, whether it is for money or not, in the eyes of others is probably doing it for money, for glory and wealth. The fact that multiple heroines can get along well with each other just shows that the two heroines have low self-esteem. When their material conditions are so different, they already lack a sense of security. Maybe it is understandable to find someone to take responsibility for themselves? The previous drafts are still saved😠😠

There have been a lot of controversies in relationship dramas recently, and the author also expressed his incomprehension about the objections, so I sorted out my thoughts as a reference for the author. The author thinks that readers object to the emotional line of this book because they want to see the flow of bulldozers. In fact, this is a misunderstanding. To be honest, it's because the author didn't manage the harem well and made the readers feel that it was tasteless, so they thought it would be better to just throw away this useless thing. In the final analysis, the author is not writing about the protagonist falling in love with the female character. What you are writing is the reader falling in love with the female character. You must pay attention to the issue of sense of substitution. If it were you, after you become rich, wouldn't you think it's funny if an old classmate who you haven't seen for many years sleeps with you for money and then starts a relationship with you? A car salesman pursues you after you buy a car. Do you think this is love? Can you trust these two people casually? So why do readers think you are better off writing Bulldozer? It's because your script is originally a kidney-breaking script, but you insist on writing it carefully. Of course, it looks awkward and embarrassing. What should a good harem look like? Firstly, the female character has a plump image, and secondly, the emotional scenes are infectious. In other words, it allows readers to have a strong sense of involvement in the emotional plot. Readers love the female characters in the book more than the protagonist. At this time, it is logical to start a harem - no reader would be willing to leave it behind. It's not that you can't write about the harem. For example, last year's very popular "The Age of Innocence Against the Current". First of all, the characters of the two heroines Lin Jingjing and Chu Lianyi are well created and can make readers excited. Secondly, the relationship between Jiang Che and Lin Chu is well laid out, and their emotional development is gradual. As for the progress of the relationship between Lin Chu and Lin Chu, the author also spends a lot of time to promote it, making the two become best friends, and Jiang Che's harem has taken shape. As for the two female characters currently in this book, Luo Xiaxin and Xiong Yali, are there any distinctive features in their characters? Luo Xiaxin appeared early, which can give readers an impression. Xiong Yali is really a pure vase, with more of her and less of her. There is not enough preparation for the emotional scenes. Why do Luo Xiaxin and Xiong Yali like Wu Qian? Too little was explained. In terms of plot development, Luo Xiaxin and Luo Xiaxin also attended a concert. As for Xiong Yali, apart from having sex once, did she have any more profound emotional interactions? As for the progress of the relationship between Xiong and Luo, it is even more sudden, which is why it aroused so much controversy. So I sincerely suggest that the author, if he wants to create a harem that is free of temptation, should spend more words and ink to elaborate on the development of the characters of Wu Qian, Xiong Yali, and Luo Xiaxin, and design the characters of Xiong Yali and Luo Xiaxin to be more fleshed out. Otherwise, there is really no surprise in forcing a pure harem to be criticized.

Since the author said that rewards can be accumulated... Then I will start with... 1000🙏

Thoughts after reading I hope the author has time to revise the previous chapters. The previous sarcasm seems too exaggerated. Nowadays, love is about getting together and getting together easily, and it is not about hatred or grudges. Do you have to show off after stealing someone else's girlfriend? You can break up in a normal way. Breaking up during graduation season is normal. Finally, love is the contact between one soul and another soul, not the collision between one body and another body. Well, I hope the author can write a heroine with an interesting soul.

How to put it, I feel that local tycoon stories are basically untenable. Even if the system pays hard to conceal what you really want, but the protagonist uses the money given to you by the system and turns it into reasonable profits for the later development company. If the country really wants to find out, there will still be nothing to hide. The source of the money still cannot be concealed.

I can't see it anymore after seeing 81. I have no choice but to give up.

Just give it a try~

Can the author hurry up? What are you doing at home? Update articles, update articles, recommend votes, monthly tickets, and give rewards. Isn't it delicious? It would be great if you make fewer comments and write more articles 😡

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This book feels like it was written crookedly, and the more I read, the more it feels wrong!

The beginning is very poisonous The protagonist foolishly spends such a large amount of money with unknown origin on his family? How to explain the source?

Graduating at the age of 24,,, the author carefully considers the age of most graduates

I don't know what's going on, but these newly updated chapters seem a bit strange. I always feel that the dialogue between the protagonist and the people from these three major families is a bit,,,, how to put it, I suddenly can't find an adjective. . I think the author's ability to describe this kind of plot is not very good. You can improve your literary quality by reading some classics. Because of the latest updates, for example, the part where the protagonist proposes to use the words he finds out in exchange for Ferrari shares, there is a kind of joke and ridicule here, but the author did not express it in your writing, which means that I understand this meaning, but if you put more effort into the text, you may have a different feeling. Also, the content I have written in the past few days has been a bit crude, and some of the characteristics and personalities of the people from the three major families have not been shown. I think the author could take some time to settle down. Of course, the above are just some of my personal suggestions. I am just talking on paper, but I am also thinking about how to make the content better and richer for the author.

I suddenly have money, but I don't know how to explain the source of the money, and I want to honor my parents. I understand. But don't use such stupid methods.

These two pictures are a bit poisonous. If you don't consider your own country's electromagnetic catapult technology and want to use it to make deals with the United States, have you considered the country's feelings? How can you reap the rewards? You just have a system in place, how can you compete with the country? If you want to change your nationality, then I won't say anything, and your local rich man's writing will change.

The protagonist's garage~ ps: In order to make it easier for all book friends to read the post, everyone's comments are concentrated in one post 😥😥 Thank you all. 😁

Just two monthly passes for you. There are so many great works of God, and you can only read them. Everyone, please don't criticize this type of book casually. To be honest, there is still no system in place. And it is very difficult to write such a book well without being gaudy. Who can imagine what the life of a truly wealthy person is like? No one knows, ah, of course, I don't know. Are there any white dragon fish suits among readers? I mean most of them don't know. It's actually quite difficult to write a book like this well. Anyway, the author should try his best to avoid getting too involved in politics. In short, it's just for fun. Most people cannot accept it, most people cannot afford it, and most people cannot imagine it. This will test your writing skills. The female character can be used for adjustment, but you cannot regard her as the mainstream. Although you may not be happy to say it, it is true that your writing style has not reached that level. The female characters are too facially portrayed. There are basically no impressive female characters except Fang. In short, we still use our strengths and avoid weaknesses. Be passionate. 😏Crazy temptation on the edge of death.

Author, are you serious about Chapter 498? If you want the word count to be more troublesome than the plot, please be more realistic. Play assassination at a ladies' ball. How hard-headed are these mercenaries and employers? So many rich people are offended at once.

Read Chapter 96. To be precise, I haven't finished reading the free version yet, so I won't talk about the rest. Let's talk about the front first. Feel this book. I don't know why some people scold me. I feel pretty good. A very good leisure article. Some people say that the author's writing style is not good. But the author is not an expert. I think that since I can tell you this book at the level of a master, even people who are not good at the author's writing skills will probably read it. The story logic of this book is very novel. Very interesting. However, there are too many descriptions of the happy part, but not the painful part. Of course, we should all admit that having money is indeed very happy. 😜But I must admit that I am sour. I also hope to write something painful. All in all, this book is quite good. It is indeed a very good leisure article, very suitable for reading when you have nothing to do. There is no ups and downs in the plot, but the straightforward narrative is very good. Prefer life style. I also hope that this book can add some connotation, allowing readers to think about happiness and pain while reading this book, and add a little more thinking and interest to their busy lives.

It's a good story. At least the appearance of the first woman is very blunt. Although it has something to do with money, I hope you don't open a harem. Too many women are not fun but a burden. It is best to have one or two at a time, with a well-arranged plot, and then change after the breakup. You see Wang Sicong is like this, one at a time, and then change after the breakup. If you are dating several people at the same time, it will be really tiring.

Stallion? If not, forget it. If you look at a great writer who still looks like a monk, then that's bullshit.

After seeing these pictures recently, let me talk some more bullshit. One is Chapter 498. One is Chapter 503. Regarding the death of a woman, I actually didn't say how I felt about it. For some novels, such as some less important female characters, this is normal. Either for paving the way, or for some other reasons. I've seen more extreme ones, let alone this one. Well, it's still what everyone said, it's a common sense mistake. I think many people have said that this should not be done again in the future. Another one is 503. In fact, I was quite embarrassed to see it. I want to be a rich man, a ruthless capitalist. After something happened, the first thing to focus on was not one's own wealth and influence but one's own country's defense budget. Isn't this a bit strange? Too embarrassing? When I saw you writing Sanhua, to be honest, I was sweating for you. Even if these characters are allusions, it is actually better not to write them. If your article is about time travel, there is no way to say whether it is or not, but your article is obviously not time travel. We need to make it clear. It's still quite dangerous. That's it anyway. If you are afraid but still want to write, you will definitely become cryptic when describing these characters. If it is not smooth, it will have no good effect on a book. It was written as high, but I thought it was a time-travel novel. Or simply another world. You still have to be careful like this, not to mention that this is not a time-travel novel, nor is it a different world, so this is very difficult. Anyway, just be careful. Also, try to describe the main person responsible for the terrorist attack in a more awesome way. Or describe it a little crazier. There are necessary and compelling reasons to kill this family. These are some small reflections, not even opinions. The author has your outline, so it's okay to write according to your own outline. Don't be paced. However, some common sense mistakes should not be forced to be inserted for the sake of the plot. This would be bad.

Three supercars in the latest chapter~

Why do I feel that the protagonist of Shen Hao's novel wants to be the Shanxi coal boss? After becoming rich overnight, they buy cars, houses, and find women. There are no rich second-generation overseas students who would spend money on fun.

Why do you always write about buying a car or a house when you have money? Can't you do something else? Use money to ignite the Internet circle and win Qidian red envelopes Investment in large-scale movies, game development regardless of cost Because if you do this, it will definitely cause more sensation than buying a house or a car. I don't need to say which one will be more enjoyable, less known or widely known. I think the author of Erfa Liang, a certain great writer, has these innovations.

When I was writing the previous article, I actually deleted a few plot points, which led to what book friends said was insufficient foreshadowing and a forced harem. Those plots totaled about 36,000 words. I felt that they were dragging on and too saccharine, so I deleted them. Let's talk about it roughly, it can be considered as an explanation. First, the protagonist and Luo Xiaxin were supposed to go to a Nordic heavy metal concert. It didn't matter which one they were from, but then there was an accident. Because the scene was too crazy, Luo Xiaxin had an accident, and then went to the hospital... Wu Qian saw Luo Xiaxin's efforts for him. Second, the protagonist and Luo Xiaxin's trip to the amusement park, Happy Valley. Third, the protagonist and Xiong Yali were on a mountaintop overlooking the city, chatting about the past. There is a mountain top in Beijing with beautiful scenery. You can drive to a very high platform at night. Fourth, the protagonist inquired about the specifics of Xiong Anxuan and then asked Xiong Yali. This part was not very satisfying at the time and was considered dispensable. The above four plots, some of which drag on the main thread, feel that the number of words is the same. Unexpectedly, it caused a big mistake and lost many book friends. I can't get back what I lost, it's my fault. I guess I didn't fall for Sanjiang this time. I failed my book friends and editor.

4.28---5.5, The category is strongly recommended. I want to go out of the category and enter the homepage. I look forward to the support of all book friends, collections, recommendation votes, and investment. I don't dare ask for rewards. If you like it and happen to have activities, just do what you can. ✊✊✊

Is this the one who slept with his mother-in-law? What did you do to your brothers and mom when you got home?

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