Qingtian Illustrated Book

Title: Qingtian Illustrated Book Author: Yu Feili Type of work: Modern Romance Word count: 79,000 Score: 90 Commentator: Chen Guozhu Impression: It is a suspenseful story with a sense of revenge, with the male protagonist as the first perspective, interspersed with love and resentment spanning thirty years, with a strong sense of aesthetics and high-end, and integrated into the history of the Ming Dynasty Plot summary: The male protagonist, as a Midas touch who returned from Manhattan, secretly investigates an old case thirty years ago. The case is related to three treasures: the Chuanguo Jade Seal, the Shang Fang Sword, and the Qingtian Illustrated Book. The three treasures are related to the world, and the bosses of these groups are the descendants of the Ming Dynasty emperors. An auction of treasures thirty years ago became a reminder for the male protagonist's biological father. Later, the male protagonist was adopted and suffered a lot. After returning from school, he began to investigate the truth of the incident, and by the way, he set off a bloody storm in the business empire. If nothing unexpected happens, this book should be about business war, using business war to achieve revenge and closure. Actually, a book with this subject matter would be a bit disadvantaged if placed in a female channel. Let's talk about the highlights of this book and the areas that can be improved Highlight 1: The sense of high-end created is very good The male protagonist is the Midas touch who returned from Manhattan. Such an identity is destined to miss a mediocre life. Therefore, the author naturally customizes a large amount of quality life for the male protagonist. Have you ever heard of amber beer with a shelf life of only three days? A variety of introductions to luxury cars, equestrians, and golf are all introduced in very detailed detail. Michelin restaurants and places for casual dining, gatherings, and fun are all described in very detail. Every time a scene is switched, or even every dish, there are many antique, vivid and luxurious background descriptions. The background is just a foil, the key depends on whether the character has a sense of high-end. The male protagonist is a gentleman and restrained, has unique insights into his work, and has a resolute and resolute style of acting. This is a sinister and elegant male protagonist, who is also full of painful past and treats his opponents very harshly. The male protagonist's opponent is a descendant of the Ming Dynasty royal family and the head of a consortium. The topics discussed were all handed down treasures and corporate planning, involving real estate development, strategic investment, and venture capital projects. The high-end background, high-end characters, and high-end story line make this book full of high-profile. Highlight 2: The use of geography and literature makes this book high-profile and full of poetry This book appears in many places, such as Jinling, Yintai Mountain, Bohai Sea, Nanjiao Mountains, Huizhou... Every time he goes to a place, the author can always find a representative place to describe in detail. Jinling is the Qinhuai River, and Huizhou is Hongcun. The description of the Qinhuai River touches on the special delicacies, while the description of Hongcun focuses more on the scenery. This is beautiful and historically penetrating in the selection of samples. I am from Yangzhou, but it is actually closer to Nanjing. Compared with famous scenic spots such as Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum, Qixia Mountain, Meihua Mountain, and Xuanwu Lake in Nanjing, Nanjing's special delicacies are more widely spread and more representative, such as Nanjing Osmanthus Duck, Jiming Soup Buns, Beef Pot Stickers... The most famous ones are the Eight Wonders of Qinhuai, which are all foods. Interested children can search for them. Writing about the food in Jinling can better reflect the exquisiteness. Children who have seen the Eight Wonders of Qinhuai will know that the decoration is exquisite, the shape is exquisite, and the taste is exquisite. Such exquisite things will naturally add a layer of beautiful life to the article. In addition, Hongcun in Huizhou is known as the "Village in Pictures", and there is an endless stream of tourists visiting it every year. In addition to the beautiful scenery, the comfortable and relaxing pastoral life is the most attractive thing. After a high-profile life, a trip through the fields will give the novel's atmosphere a fresh and refined romanticism. This book can almost play a key role in the translation of poems, poems and songs. In addition, the whole book also has a touch of Zen. It takes practice to go from obscurity to enlightenment, and the existence of the male protagonist actually has the flavor of going against heaven. The advantages are summarized as follows: The author has a wide range of knowledge and appears to be more professional in describing business. The ancient style and modernity can be switched at will, and the landscape painting and feasting are perfectly integrated, allowing readers to enjoy an immersive visual feast. This book is also flawed! Flaw 1: The heroine's character is not distinctive enough This book uses the male protagonist as the first perspective. The male protagonist's character is very successful, but as the female protagonist, this character seems weak. My most profound impression of the heroine was her wearing heavy makeup and chatting and dancing with the hero. Later, my impression of her only remained as a little fan girl. It's hard to say what kind of character the heroine is. The author has written a little less about her role, and her character design is vague with obvious characteristics. Because the heroine's personality is relatively vague, the relationship between the hero and the heroine lacks a sense of excitement. Moreover, the overly strong description of the environment and background emphasizes the element of suspense, making this emotional line mediocre. In this book, the female protagonist usually appears together with the male protagonist, so all the aura that the female protagonist should have will be taken away by the male protagonist. If you want to improve this situation, you need to design a plot in which the female protagonist dominates the plot alone, and design her ability to respond to emergencies without being completely separated from the male protagonist. This can save the heroine's character very well. Of course, if this book is just about the relationship between the male and female protagonists, or if this relationship is arranged to serve the subsequent plot, then I have no problem with it. Flaw 2: From the perspective of online writing, there are not enough explosive points This book has a very high starting point and a high style, which will inevitably make it difficult to control the explosive points. At the beginning, we return to China and the plot unfolds around three treasures. When I see this person or that person, I always talk about it. This book has a disadvantage, because the real explosive points are things that ordinary readers do not often encounter. Like the business war after chapter 20, the male protagonist is vigorous and resolute, which can be said to have some passion. However, most readers will skip reading because they are not familiar with business war. But in things that are familiar to the public, everything is orderly and polite. The main reason for this is that the author is too focused on the environment and atmosphere, and ignores a large number of conflicts in the plot itself. What really made me feel the conflict was the scene where the heroine had a car accident. Because of its unpredictability, I paid a lot of attention to it. There is also a suspense point set up well, that is MR. GHOST, but this is a suspense point, not a plot conflict. This problem arises because the depiction of the villain is too stingy. People from the six major families should all have their own ambitions and ideas, but except when the male protagonist is present, these people rarely appear at other times. Relying on the male protagonist alone will inevitably cause the plot to lose a certain degree of fullness. The wonderful environment and background cannot dominate the show. They serve the characters and the plot. Tell me about your prospects and expectations! This book is still very eye-catching. Although it is very large in scale, sometimes I still wish it was more down-to-earth and approachable. Just like eating abalone all the time, if you keep eating it, you will feel bored. I hope that the emotional scene between the male protagonist and the female protagonist can be more perfect, at least with a little heart-wrenching touch. If you can do this, it will naturally achieve the effect of being approachable. At the same time, I also hope that there will be more dazzling characters in this book instead of the male protagonist's family being the only one. The author should be good at describing a group of characters instead of just focusing on one. In fact, the description of the background can be slightly weakened. The main purpose of the writer is to write about people, and the background is the icing on the cake, and the priority cannot be reversed. Finally, I hope you can become a god with a great book!

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The author writes well, the characters are described delicately, and the plot is gripping and attractive.

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In fact, I'm not very good at writing book reviews or anything like that. I rarely read online novels, but when I read this one, I was amazed by the author's writing style. The description of the scene and the characterization of the characters were all very good, and it was very comfortable to read. Please wait until you read the story carefully before commenting. Anyway, come on! ! There is hope of becoming a god! ! ! !

Collect and rate! After reading your novel, the descriptions are very delicate. Things written by girls are different! The description of the night, the description of the inlet, etc., The most praised is the description of the beer, which can be said to be three points deep. Beer lager, craft beer, strong beer, dark beer and lager, yellow beer, cloudy beer are even better! But I can't drink much. China's liquor is world-famous, France's red wine is unique, Germany's beer is famous, and Britain's seems to be whiskey! Come on, author, your results are much better than mine!

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As a code writer, I only read books and don't write reviews, but I still couldn't resist the temptation of the little koi women's clothing, so I came here. (There is a mystery here) First of all, let's talk about the overall impression of the article. I think the author has chosen the wrong channel. This book should be placed in a city with male channels, because articles like this are not popular in female channels. After reading the first three chapters of the author, I still can't grasp the main line. I have three guesses: Chapter 1: Business War? Chapter 2: Suspense Revenge? Chapter 3 is about a suspenseful revenge business war about antiques? So I found the author and asked him if it was really a romance novel. After getting a positive answer, I continued reading. Fortunately, I finally saw the heroine appear, but this heroine didn't seem to have the personality I imagined. Fortunately, Koi's relatively deep literary skills make up for this seemingly minor shortcoming (ok, I admit that I am a bit picky) Since we are talking about literary skills, I need to praise the author. At such a young age, he not only has a deep literary skills but also has such erudite knowledge. Especially it contains detailed descriptions of beer, luxury cars, equestrianism, etc. Moreover, these descriptions do not read as if they were written directly, as if the author himself had experienced such things, and there is no sense of violation. Let's talk about the description of the scenery inside, which is also very accurate. The author uses descriptions of scenery to create a necessary atmosphere every time, and it is very natural. But one thing is that the most common mistake for me and all old writers and young people is that this is the era of online writing and fast food. A large number of descriptions of scenery will reduce readers' desire to read. Most people will jump to read, which will lose the original intention of the author. Therefore, I still suggest that Koi should use less such descriptions. If possible, can we just mention it in one stroke? The last point is the setting of the storyline. Although it took me three chapters to see the author's purpose and the main line of the setting, it cannot stop a good story from happening. Just like the three national treasures of the Ming Dynasty, each one requires exquisite polishing and research to show their different aspects. Good stories also require everyone to read them carefully. In short, this is a female channel book that can be placed on a male channel. Friends who like business wars can read it. As the saying goes, good books have no distinction of frequency! ! Come on, author! Come on, little koi, the cross-dressing boss! 😁😁😁😁😁😁 (Finally add a sentence, hurry up and dress up)