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The word count is a bit short, and I haven't read the book yet, so I saw your review request.

It feels pretty good, work hard, I will pay attention 🤓, I have given you three recommendation votes today

Give the new author a thumbs up and support, work hard and persevere to win!

Please support the newcomers. Specially come to comment.

Having the courage to write my first book is already amazing.

Come on! I feel good when I see Dugu + 100 billion 😁

It's good to practice with your mobile phone! I often practice until midnight.

Since you asked for a book review, I'll just stop by and bother you when you have time

The author of this cover probably drew it himself.

Is this book interesting? Dear book friends, please answer it. That's right.

As you wish, I'm here to leave a comment

Why are some books poorly written and not very good in plot, but their grades are not bad? Because the first three chapters are attractive and make people want to follow them. Why three chapters? Most people choose a book to read, and usually read three to ten chapters first. Most people will put it on their bookshelf if it exceeds ten chapters. If they don't read it, they will move on to it later. Therefore, in the early stage of a book's operation, just focus on the first few chapters to see some outlines. Of course, there are also people who modify the writing and reverse the plot, but people nowadays probably don't have that much patience. This is the common view of the "golden three chapters". Being attracted by Amway, I will test the water first and express my personal understanding to everyone. There is no malicious intention. I am just expressing my inner thoughts and appreciating the author's finished product from the perspective of a reader. Setting, plot, character description, the framework of a novel is roughly the same. Let's talk about the setting first. The level of cultivation can be seen as novel in the cliché. The details are divided into stars. It is relatively simple and clear, so that people can understand it and can better understand the level planning in the book. However, there are pros and cons. It is simple and clear, but there is no detailed explanation, such as why cultivation is Become stronger, what is the reason for becoming stronger? Maybe the author wrote it later, I didn't see it, but this was written early, and the setting is novel. However, as mentioned before, readers read less when choosing books, so it will test whether the author's writing power can describe the setting in a relatively easy-to-understand manner with a small number of words. So the setting is novel and you can look forward to it. Let's look at the character description and style description. In this regard, the author can look around more and observe things that are usually omitted, or go and look at the scenery, and then observe it from a God's perspective, which will improve it and enhance the sense of substitution. The characters are not very well written. You can tell the consequences at a glance. This is a bit tiring. Most people are tired of robot dialogue. Now the supporting characters have to be more fleshed out. Go and see Gu Zhenren. Each character is written with its own style. You can't always have robot class dialogue. And I really didn't see the alien style in the first few chapters. This needs to be written carefully, which will make people think of the wonderful world. This is the benefit of stylization. The character description is average, not bad. As for the plot... It's pretentious, that's all I can think of, funny flow, dark flow, upgraded monster-killing flow, obviously, this is the main upgrade to show off. In fact, if you just read the novel, it's okay. When the old bookworm sees the brainless supporting character come out to challenge the useless protagonist, then After that, I was slapped in the face. I only read the first few chapters. There should be a big competition within the clan and then I was slapped in the face. I was slapped in the face again for a woman. I was slapped in the face again when I went out for training. I was slapped in the face again at the auction house. There was a villain organization that was caught by the protagonist and all of them had their IQs degraded. They were slapped in the face again by the protagonist, and then the protagonist climbed to the top. This is my opinion on the plot. Of course, if there is a twist, you can come and scold me. I also want to see a twist. Generally speaking, the plot is rather exaggerated. Some people still like to read the pretentious slap in the face ten years ago, but there are really too many, so now some funny and light-hearted novels The results are generally much better than those of pretentious and slap-in-the-face novels. It's okay to be pretentious, but don't be sloppy, and it must be clean and tidy to read. It's a pleasure to read, and it's very uncomfortable to grind. Many people have said that pretentious novels are good, but I read it, and I actually enjoyed several chapters of a small role! It's still the kind that kills you just by blowing your breath. I can only say that this kind of novel is only suitable for novices. I have read books for ten years. Some books are really not good but many novices read them, so the results are relatively good, but in the end they will not become gods. Does the author of this book want it to be targeted at novices who have just entered the game? There is indeed nothing wrong with the writing in this way, but it cannot be put on the big stage. The plot should be strengthened a little more, and a little more strengthened, until it makes people want to stop. Only then can it reach a higher level. The plot is too far away. Generally speaking, the plot is slightly worse. It is just not good enough. There is no poisonous point, and there is no place to feed shit. Generally speaking, this kind of novel will not feed shit, unless the author wants to be sent a razor blade 😄 Generally speaking, it can be put on the bookshelf, but there is no idea that people will chase it every day. To fatten it, you can slaughter it appropriately to see if the meat is delicious. You can look forward to the author's subsequent development and the direction of the outline, so come on. (Please support the genuine version, and don't take it for granted that you read pirated versions. You still need to support it. Even if you are really poor, you still have to spend a few cents for an initial subscription, right? Every time I see a novel on the shelf, I will give it a first subscription. No matter whether it is good or not, I support the genuine version) I understand Yu's statement. Please bear with me if I say something intense. Thank you.

Put it on the bookshelf to see how you grow.

I'll just leave a comment to give you some motivation.

I read other books and the author asked for a review +1

Ula! Come on, people who dare to take the first step are always admirable

Your scheduled release is really interesting

Just because of the cover of this book, I'm following you!

Just this introduction is 100% overwhelming.

This is the end of the book, only 35 chapters.