The Gap in the Blade, the Wound in the Skin

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I had nothing to do, so I never thought that a close friend would recommend this article. I originally agreed perfunctorily, but I never thought that I would be so fateful with this book. Everything is just a coincidence, so don't mention it. After spending an afternoon simply reading the author's works, I felt very fortunate and a bit excited. I would like to add a few words here because I have thought too much about it, and I hope the author will forgive me for any shortcomings. First of all, I personally like this book very much, because it was beyond my expectation. The main reason is that nowadays martial arts are not dead, and there are authors who are so dedicated to martial arts themes. For a person like me who has martial arts plots, I really admire and appreciate it. I read a very pure martial arts atmosphere from the author's article. There are many good aspects, but I won't go into too much detail. The following aspects are the immature views of a martial arts fan. Please forgive me for the shortcomings. The first is that you still need to pay attention to the writing style. The second is that the whole text is very cumbersome. Some plots are too lengthy and become a burden to the whole text. The third is the language style. Although the overall style is very ancient, but when you zoom in, some word orders and phrases are not used very appropriately. This is not a good thing for readers' reading experience, so I still hope that the author will pay more attention to it. Thank you here. The article is great and I will continue to follow it. I hope it gets better and better. Come on and support me! ! !

"The Gap in the Man, the Wound in the Skin" is an atypical martial arts novel. Different from traditional martial arts novels, this article is more like a collection of martial arts characters. It has an atypical martial arts protagonist, a male protagonist who is not a swordsman and is full of intrigues, a beautiful heroine with strong martial arts skills, a tyrannical and wretched prince, an arrogant and indifferent princess, and many supporting characters who seem to die in the next moment. It is also mixed with fantasy colors and is worth reading. There were so many characters appearing at the beginning that I couldn't figure out who was the protagonist. People who looked like the protagonist would die the next moment. This is similar to me watching "Game of Thrones". I never know who will die next? As the story unfolds, the priorities become clear. A group of supporting characters appear one after another, making tools for our protagonist, and are killed like pulling out carrots. This is quite refreshing. The author wrote it very happily in the article, and I and other readers also felt refreshed. They drew their swords whenever they disagreed. The pace is very fast, and people die in almost every chapter. This is more Conan than Conan, and the world of martial arts is really dangerous. Some martial arts moves and sword techniques are also described in detail, and the language skills are good. However, the language processing of some characters is not very good. For example, the dialogue between Yang Sabao and Jian Jiezi is full of a strong sense of Zhuangbility. Some didactic texts are not suitable for this occasion. Personally, I feel that Da Da always switches the description perspective. Sometimes it is the third person and sometimes it is me in the first person. For example, in the chapter "The Pain of the Wicked", during the conversation between Jian Jiezi and Diehua Xue, my perspective and description suddenly appear in the middle. This feels out of place. If a voiceover is required, this is not the way to handle it. I hope Da Da can change it. This is a martial arts novel, but bugs attach themselves to people, and they have human consciousness and can talk and drive dead people to do things and fight. I feel like Spada. Is this novel going to become a fantasy? So this is not a typical martial arts novel. The bugs here made me feel very scary. They did not match the overall plot of the book. I want to make a small complaint about the author's character love story. Love, hate, and hatred are so simple. Jian Jiezi fell in love with Diehua Xue even after seeing her for a few times, and he was determined to die for her. Diehua Xue is quite normal. If you don't like it, you just don't like it. I like it. The same goes for Luo Shijia and Sun Fengtangjie. Women hate men and it's awkward to read. I just wish they could handle it better. For example, the pairing of Xiong Feng and Chao Yingxia is quite good. It's quite logical for a hero to save a beauty. Having said so much, the flaws are not hidden, this book is still very good to read, and it is very refreshing to read, watching the protagonists travel to the ends of the world with swords, drinking and eating meat, enchanting beauties, destroying all enemies, and enjoying grudges. It's great! It seems that I have also entered the martial arts world created by Da Da. Famous swords, famous swords, BMWs, fragrant cars and beauties are full of pride. Love, hate and hatred bloom in the collision of swords, making people unable to put it down.

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Maybe the classification is wrong, after all, signing a contract is a good thing. Signing the contract is motivation, let me be your first investor, come on!

They are all newbies, it is normal, take your time, accept it first, invest when you have time, the author is very encouraging and encourage us! 😁

I really want to know the next development of the story, can I give any spoilers? Haha.

It is rare to see such a detailed characterization, a deeply rooted and very good novel.

Your writing skills are so strong. Are you a screenwriter? Or have you written any masterpieces? Definitely not new.

The main characters in the book are all vividly portrayed, with distinct personalities and traditional classic martial arts characteristics.

The sense of immersion is really strong, and it feels indescribably refreshing... I didn't expect to find such a book with a somewhat unconventional title, but it gave me such a strong sense of immersion. I have seen too many messy martial arts, the same old auctions and the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, it was completely boring. It's a cool novel in the guise of martial arts~ But I haven't seen such pure martial arts for a long time. To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a book of this type, but I just think that martial arts should be like this. It should be that the sword lord accepts the challenge and does not make any moves, leaving only corpses on the ground. He should be as indifferent as the sword god Xiong Feng, like Wuming in the storm, only taking action to correct the situation at the most critical moment. Jian Jiezi was also very successfully created. He is the most vivid, flesh-and-blood, and full-fledged character in the book. I didn't expect that the most successful character in the book is a despicable and shameless villain. Such characters are usually written in novels. He is brainless and has a low IQ, so that he can be abused by the protagonist, but here Jian Jiezi's IQ and EQ can be said to be the highest. After all, "I" has never appeared. It is just God's time watching. It should be the author's own meaning here, right? Because that's probably what you said in the introduction. This method is very interesting. Most authors really don't dare to write like this, but now it seems that it is really fresh. But those famous and upright heroes died unjustly. I think the author forcibly cheated Jian Jiezi. Only Yang Sabao took him down and died within two chapters. This luck must be incredible~ Could this be the aura of the protagonist? The author would do well, please don't let Jian Jiezi be the protagonist, it's really annoying, and you should treat Jian Bawang well.

It seems ruthless, but it is flesh and blood. This is my evaluation of this book. The ruthlessness mentioned here refers to the ruthlessness of the swordsman's sword, the ruthlessness of "my" spectators, and the ruthlessness of the author's writing. The swordsman strikes out with his sword without hesitation. No matter who the opponent is, what his identity is, or what his purpose is, as long as Hengdao stands on the opposite side, as an opponent, he will not show mercy. The ruthlessness of "I" is the cold look of bystanders, just like the sword god Xiong Feng who is aloof, or like the eagle dog Yang Sabao who doesn't ask about right or wrong, indulges everything and goes with the flow. The author leaves no idlers in his writing, and does not look at good or evil. He only has the development of the plot in mind. The righteous knights and heroes like Changkong Wuhen, Nanwujia, and Chu Jiangpu all died for the sake of the plot. They died under the cunning tricks of the despicable villain Jian Jiezi, which makes people grit their teeth with hatred and helplessness. It was the first time I saw such a book, such words, and such people. It was already difficult to get out of it. I have been reading books for more than ten years. The first thing I read is the plot. As long as the plot is not good, I will not read the book. No matter how good the author's literary talent is, no matter how vivid the characters are, and the dialogue is interesting, I can't stand it. The three elements of a novel are plot, background, and characters. The plot is the most important and the soul of the novel. Later, when I read books, I became more picky about literary talent. The author's writing skills and writing style had to be pleasing to the eye. I would never read a book with unclear sentences. It felt too childish. Later, we have to look at the characters. Any book is composed of countless characters. The stories of the characters are merged together to form the story of the book. The joys, sorrows and joys of the characters create the depth of the plot. Nowadays, the most important thing about online literature has become imagination and setting. An amazing idea can get all the recommendations and popularity. This is the unique characteristic and charm of online literature, which gives online literature its own selling point and symbol. This book covers almost all the points that I care about. At the beginning, the author's writing style seemed a little cumbersome, but I think this is the author's first book, a new book for a newcomer. This kind of problem is normal. Facts have proved that the author's writing ability is really high. After only a few hundred words, the writing style of this book suddenly improved a lot, and it has a feeling of a literati and poet. This kind of writing level is definitely superior at today's starting point! Don't blow. When I saw the first person "I" appear, I was still very surprised, because as we all know, a major taboo in Qidian. Com is the first person. Even the editor-in-chief said so, but a swordsman must act alone and find a new way. The "I" of this book is always a recorder, a narrator, not an experiencer. Each chapter is a different story, different people, different swords! After reading many chapters, I don't understand who will be the protagonist, but it doesn't matter anymore. This is a world of rivers and lakes, a world of swordsmen, a world of good and evil. What the author wants to write is not the legend of one swordsman, but the legend of the entire rivers and lakes! There is no need for a protagonist. The protagonist is a sword, a knight, and a ruthless killer. Yes, I thought of the ruthless ending as a lament this time. I have read a lot of wonderful martial arts books recently, and I finally found that the real writing style and stories come from classical martial arts. I hope the author will continue to update them.

As a bookworm for many years, this is really the first time I have seen a book of this genre. It is full of novelty and freshness. It is really unexpected and wonderful. It turns out that martial arts is like this, and it turns out that traditional martial arts can be written like this~ The author is really talented, Ying You must be young, right? The experience and writing power of young people will definitely not be able to write such a book. Young authors should be playing with their imaginations and writing more fantasy. After all, they go there for popularity. The author of this article, Wang Jitian, should go for writing. I think if we use the characters in the book to compare, most online writers are like Jian Jiezi, with a clear purpose, just for fame and fortune. Just like Jian Jiezi, he just wants to win. In order to let the opponent die, he can play his cards without following the routine, and doesn't care whether he is a knight or not. And Wang Jitian is like a righteous knight in the book. People like Chu Jiangyue have their own persistence and principles. They don't care about achievements or popularity. They just want to write about the knight's world and the swordsman themselves that belong to their hearts. This is exactly the kind of spirit that the current starting point lacks, right, the writing spirit? Or is it professionalism? I really feel that the performance of this book should not be just like this. It should at least be promoted or something. The editors are too partial to mainstream articles. Only such niche high-quality articles can keep Qidian. Com's articles fresh forever, just like a pearl in the night. Although it cannot light up the night, it is also impossible to ignore or look away. Anyway, I have fallen into it now. I like Butterfly Blood very much. She is the best choice for the heroine. The name Sword Overlord is really domineering. Overlord should be the most powerful title. Xiong Feng is the sword god, but the god is still a little less domineering than Overlord. The spirit of king! However, the title of Xiong Feng is indeed very appropriate. God of Swords is aloof from things and does not care about the affairs of the world, just like him. Of course, it is difficult for a hero to be a beauty. Xiong Feng still broke out when his wife was kidnapped by Yang Sabao. I thought he was a wooden person, but in the end he was so angry that he turned into a beauty. Yes, at least he is flesh and blood. In my imagination, the image of the Sword Overlord is particularly similar to the snowflake goddess Long Shangguanyan I saw when I was a child. She is so aloof and cool, invincible and beautiful. Maybe this is the inspiration of the author? I just made a random guess~ And Jian Jiezi is very interesting. He is the only variable in the book, and he doesn't play according to common sense at all! And how can he be so awesome? Basically, I kill every one I encounter, and they are all deceivers. They are simply deceptive! I think the author is a little biased towards him. Doesn't it mean that all conspiracies and tricks are childish tactics in the face of absolute strength? Why are there so many cheats on Jian Jiezi... Several masters actually used firecrackers to blow them up. The author must have been too casual~ The explosives mentioned later were a little more decent, but so many upright heroes were tricked to death by him. It really makes my teeth itch to see his popularity~ I am the most My beloved Sword King, Butterfly Flower Blood Sister, should kill him quickly, so as not to add stain to her own reputation. The author likes Jian Jiezi so much, so don't make him the male protagonist. I guess the author wants to make him the representative villain in the book. Anyway, the portrayal is very vivid. The author is really talented, keep up the good work

I can't understand it, but it's really good. I finished reading it in one sitting and felt a bit uncomfortable after reading it.

No matter how powerful the swordsman is in the book, he is still made of flesh and blood. No matter how famous he is, he cannot escape death with a sword.

The most powerful thing is not the sword, but the swordsman who uses it. No matter how good the sword is, it will only lead to death if it is obtained by a mortal.

This is an alternative book, but once you start reading it, you can't stop reading it. The author's skill is as sharp as a sword.

It's very novel. It's the first time I've seen a work written in this way. It's synchronized with multiple threads. It's really refreshing.

The Shushan sect has also come out. The Shushan sect should belong to the Xianxia sect. Diehuaxue's swordsmanship is indeed amazing.

The article describes each sword in detail and lifelike. It seems that the author really loves swords.

Jian Jiezi does not behave like a swordsman, but like an assassin, an assassin with a sword.

At first, I thought Jian Jiezi was a villain who only knew how to conspire, but he must be a master. This position was not just blown away.

Jian Jiezi is so shameless! Firecrackers, bricks and firecrackers were all used, which was equivalent to grenades. The masters died so unjustly.

Luo Shijia is obsessed with Sun Fengtangjie? But that's his half-sister. This should be considered ***

With such a domineering introduction and name, and it's a new book for a newcomer, let's see if it's possible for you to become a god with just one copy.

Bai Liangqiu is so unlucky, so miserable. Is it so miserable to lick a dog... The author is so cruel

Is the protagonist a narrator and recorder? Since he is a cultivator, he should be above all knights.

I can't understand I can't understand

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