Dawn in the Marvel Universe

Just complain about it. . . First, what kind of fraud is this introduction? I have seen dozens of chapters in the book. Does it have anything to do with the introduction? Second, do you dare to add the subject and punctuation marks? Just forget it without adding "" in the dialogue. You actually don't even add who said it? It's still the same kind of person who doesn't add anything when talking to another person, which seems baffling. Thirdly, can there be less messy bad jokes and colloquialisms? There are too many colloquial plots in the book, coupled with so many disgusting messy jokes from sources (I have only read a few, there are at least hundreds of bad memes, and they are from at least fifty different works). Even if it is bad, it is a compliment. . . Fourth, I still want to complain about game production. It is difficult to make a game like Minecraft, which has almost minimum requirements after castration. LOL is at least ten times more difficult to develop than Minecraft. MOBA is easy to play, not easy to make. Is it really not difficult to make LOL? Look at this category on the market for more games, and have hundreds of thousands of people online at the same time? Before 2004? Do you want to know a little bit about the concept of "real" simultaneous online? There are 800,000 people online at the same time, which basically means that your game player account starts at least tens of millions, seriously? Except for 4, which is a minor problem, 123 is really devastating to this book. I was so speechless after reading it. Personal opinion, not for reference. To summarize the above, the logic is online for the time being, the setting is a bit good, and the character image is okay. However, because of points 2 and 3, the perception of the book is basically brought down to the lower limit. I can only say that it is barely passing the time. Above.

What else can I say? Not enough!

Hey, uncle, what's going on with you? Ran away?

It's okay, it's been on the bookshelf for a few months. I finished reading it in one sitting today, and the early writing was simply terrible. But the further you go, the more progress you get. If you make up your mind to write two million words, I will be very excited about your progress. Come on.

Come vote, come water, come cheer

Come on, vote every day to gain weight.

Word God, you are finally putting this old thing on the shelves! Ordered, ordered

Why do you have to save Ross? This guy has no use other than being disgusting and holding us back. In order to catch the Hulk, he did whatever he could to ignore the casualties. Not only did he kill many soldiers who followed him, but he also indirectly killed a large number of innocent passers-by. After relying on the hard-line backing to become a politician, he still represents the government in Captain America 3 to obtain a treaty to disgust the United States. He is a typical shameless politician.

The writing is really poor, and it's really embarrassing to watch. The content is also very watery, and Overwatch has been slow to reflect it.

It still feels quite interesting. But, can you please put double quotation marks when speaking, otherwise it will look very tiring?

The writing style looks too tired, there are also typographical issues, and there are typos. There seems to be some bad words. I really can't stand it.

Why do so many people like to write about transformation now? I don't mean to look down on it, I just force myself to read it without a sense of immersion.

After reading Chapter 25, the first few chapters are normal. Unfortunately, from the first dozen chapters onwards, the author becomes very self-indulgent and writes in a mess. He has no intention of showing it to the readers. It is purely for the author to read.

Can you add some punctuation? The first part is okay, but the second part is so tiring to read!

There are many problems, including plot holes, text descriptions, and scene transitions. Let's take a look at these. The relationship between the characters is very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist collects junk goods? If you see a woman, you have to do it. There is also the problem of Anna. Who is the protagonist in your writing? It's okay to like Anna. Is it necessary to crazily belittle the protagonist and highlight Anna? And make Anna a very annoying character. Is it necessary? If you can't write it well, just write it honestly. Marvel can handle so many things in it?

It feels like the author first wrote it in English and then translated it directly on Baidu...

May I ask the author, do you know how to use punctuation marks? Guess what the two punctuation marks "." And "." Mean, and under what circumstances are they used?

The world doesn't need Overwatch

The idea is good, but all kinds of inexplicable complaints about self-pleasure and whatnot, I finally got into it, but I was confused by your inexplicable complaints and niche nicknames. After reading twenty chapters, I only roughly understood 40% of the plot. . . . I think 2D fandoms don't work as hard as you. Can you take care of the readers who can't understand your self-pleasure? . . .

I felt very embarrassed when I read the introduction. I regretted it even more after clicking on the text and withdrew it.

Three monthly passes 😴, please add more

How long has this been going on? Is it true?

The introduction is too confusing and I don't even make it clear what I want to express.