I Have a Dragon's Nest

I feel that the author is too confident. From the beginning to the end, there are all kinds of foreshadowings, but the writing is completely insufficient. Many of the foreshadowings are very poisonous, such as amnesia, conspiracy, and many settings that feel grand and disgusting. To be honest, if you just set a main plot, be honest Farming for dozens of chapters, and then looking for trouble and then pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. Although the routine is very old, it is much better than now. It has been more than 20 chapters. The world view is a mess, the rules and everything are a mess. You want to say that it is more reliable to say that a pig's feet are directly forcibly fixed into a human body, a black dragon's first level? How did he survive such a huge size?

The setting of this book seems quite interesting, but it is written by the author. It seems awkward and not well written.

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The protagonist just suddenly awakened the memory of his past life, right? Why does this first chapter seem like the protagonist has just traveled through time and has no body memory yet? ?

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When I first started reading, my first impression was that there were a lot of typos.

Practice slowly and just write more. Even if I give you advice now, you can't beat your own strength.