Traveling Across the Heavens Begins with Xia Lan

Why do you say that it always feels like the novels you write are like scripts?

Author, the plot of your work is a little messy. Regarding Xia Lan's work, we should continue with the original plot. For example, the eight kinds of Yuan Qi you mentioned are a good idea, but we can write them as being discovered slowly, just like the Wind and Rain Curse, which is easier for people to accept. Also about time travel and Xia Lan, I think the idea is good but there is no detailed time travel process and we are a bit confused just looking at it a few years later. I still hope that I can continue to work hard and don't give up. Creating code words is very hard, so don't give up halfway 🤓

The author is challenging the reader's lower limit of IQ.

How miserable! Ha ha ha ha! Brother, you actually persisted for such a long time. It's amazing.

I finally saw one that wrote about Shen Po.

What does it mean to look at it? Are you chatting?

There are no punctuation marks, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

Um, how is this different from a dialogue novel?

, The lover of a hundred generations has become the great road, I am really happy for him. Who do you want to scare to death? ? ?

Expressing confusion, is this a dialog box?

Your fighting plot has no sense of immersion at all.

Why am I a little confused? 🤭🤭🤭🤭