Super Martial Saint Demon

The writing is awkward, the setting is taken for granted, and it's just like the previous Heaven and Earth Domination Jue. This one is not as good as the Heaven and Earth Domination Jue!

Story background: Fantasy continent (similar to history). Story style: passionate battle + invincible writing. Brief comment: At the beginning of the story, the protagonist is a time traveler. The soul traveled through time to a young rich boy. I could have just quietly been the protagonist of a rich second generation. But because of the superpowers brought about by time travel, he became particularly admiring and admiring martial arts. (Ability: Obtain spiritual stone absorption, upgrade skills.) It is because of this love that our protagonist starts his own wonderful path. From the very beginning, he was desperate to destroy the bandits, but later on, he gradually came into contact with some wonderful things in this world!
 So! This is the story of a passionate time traveler... He will go to the world with this kind of desperate momentum... To sum up: a story about a passionate practitioner with a golden finger, it is an invincible and refreshing story. In terms of plot and writing, the author is also great... O(^▽^)o. So, I finally want to say... This should be an invincible fantasy novel that you deserve. Note! This book review is because I only tried to read the previous article, so the evaluation is relatively one-sided and is for reference only! It will be integrated and published in the article scanning circle and classification circle later. Call the author.

I feel like the writing is a bit fluid.

I finished reading it in one sitting, great!

Come on. Pay attention to the details!

Why wouldn't it be trivial to give Ye Sujuan's martial arts, a family inheritance, to a maid like this? If you want to train warriors, wouldn't the protagonist choose someone who is more suitable for training and loyalty? As mentioned before, a warrior needs a lot of resources to practice. In the chapter I saw, the protagonist was so stressed about his own resources that he had to train with a maid? It feels too loose. It would be understandable if it was light-hearted and nonsensical, but isn't this an authentic fantasy novel you wrote? He sold the family's martial arts for more than 1,000 spiritual stones, and then the maid wanted to practice and gave it to him directly? If the family's martial arts were to be passed down like this, within a month the protagonist's family's martial arts would become a mainland product. That's all I have to say, next time the author should pay more attention

The strength is really exaggerated. He only weighs 600 pounds and wants to kick down a towering tree. Whether he can kick down an ordinary tree is a question.

First, this book is a bit more streamlined, similar to the Jidao Demon, but the author has certain innovations and has tried the poison 👍👍👍

Girl is an honorific title! Using an honorific title for a maid, the protagonist must be mentally ill, why is he so mean? I have never seen any boss treat his employees like his own father.

After joining the sect, I didn't first improve my martial arts level and martial arts secrets, and even after spending so many points, I didn't feel much improvement. Maybe the protagonist's strength improved too quickly in the early stage, and the author obviously couldn't control the speed at which the protagonist started to improve.

What the hell is that if none of the five exercises you have chosen can improve your realm? And there is no use at all after practicing some of the ultimate secret techniques.

With its own dissuading effect, there are so many yuan crystals that are not used to strengthen the strength, but are used to strengthen the skills? What skills are added? People use weapons and you use your fists to hit them. If you want to use this kind of golden finger, wouldn't it be better to directly strengthen your strength? @

Why fuse demon blood? Isn't it better to be a pure person? Imagine an ordinary person in reality fused with some pig and dog genes in their body ~

After the author finished writing, why don't you take a look at it on your phone? Some sentences and paragraphs cannot be seen on the computer, and since the readers have found some typos, what if you correct them? Who can read more than a hundred chapters without thinking or reading comments? A free chapter can be 2,000 words long, but it must be written carefully so that someone can subscribe. As the saying goes, if you can't write well about free stuff, who will read paid stuff? Finally, don't spray if you don't like it. It's just a small personal opinion. I hope the author's book will get better and better (✪▽✪)

The protagonist's IQ is worrying, but it's actually the author who's talking about it.

I asked the author if he could write the plot in more detail. Now I feel like I am reading a fast food article... The pace is too fast, you have just touched on so many interesting places, and you only know a little about the characters... There is no sense of immersion at all. No one will read you like this.

The levels are confusing, and the power data is confusing, which disrupts the rhythm and makes it uncomfortable to watch!

It feels like I have been opening maps and traveling through the world. My strength was originally high-level combat power, but I changed the world and started over from the new world, starting a new round of monster training and upgrading. As I read, I lost interest in reading. I felt like I was changing the soup without changing the medicine. I felt that this rhythm was not good.

The plug-in economic system collapsed too quickly!

It feels okay, it just depends on whether Jian insists on it or not.

It's okay if it's written in a small town, but you can't read it outside of a small town.

After crossing the Xuhai, you become an ordinary person. This is very poisonous.

I feel like I can start from the Sea of ​​Void and read the eunuch at all.

I felt so weird when I saw the word "mysterious" that I still stopped reading! ! !

Awesome cover (manual funny)

Why don't you write it anymore? Is it finished? Or is it a eunuch?

It would be boring to start over half of the time. After coming out of Void River, many readers will be discouraged! Is this way of writing really good? I felt the void calling and was poisoned to death.

This way of writing is completely in the rhythm of pills!

Seeing that 25% are still warriors, please read with caution.

Why does it feel like an anticlimax?