I Upgrade by Sleeping

The protagonist levels up every day while sleeping...? ? ? Three hundred and sixty-five days a year... That's level 365? ? ? Ten years is level 3650...? ? ? It will be level 36500 in a hundred years... Ah? ? ? It can be said that... The protagonist is already at level 36,500... Right? ? ? ?

To be honest, the way you write novels is exactly the same as the way we write essays in junior high school. There are a lot of action descriptions, a lot of psychological descriptions are inked, environmental descriptions are either inked or not at all, and there are no scene descriptions at all. Although there is a logical relationship, the connection between the logical relationship is extremely poor, and it does not meet the characteristics of an online article - making readers feel smooth when reading. Reading your book, it feels like I have gone back to those qualified but not excellent essays I saw when I was helping my teacher to correct essays in junior high school. All in all, the entire first-class product has no distinctive writing style, and most of the logical positions of sentence segments cannot withstand scrutiny.

I quite like that prehistoric novel

Come on, Mr. Xiao Ming 😏😏

The author has too much inner drama, and if the dialogue is too short, it will become a pantomime 🤭

Your book particularly attracts me and I like it very much. The control of the plot and the characterization of the characters are very good. I want to learn from you. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

That's right. I am a new author, and my "The Legend of the Demon Twins" is also about this kind of subject. I have learned something from you, thank you! Can you also go and take a look at "The Legend of the Demon Twins" and give me your opinions? 🌹

The work is written fluently and is a rare masterpiece. It has been collected. I hope you can pay attention to my work "Spiritual Master Volume".